Moments of the day..! times of war , law falls silent.!! - Page 2

hi cocoa.. sowieee.. for showing up late.. but i promise you felt incomplete going to bedlast night... usually i read your moments before hitting the sack.. but had to leave it on hold for today. For starters , I loved how you tackled the flash back trips dhani scene.. you covered it fully ..and reading it one gets a rough idea of what his moan was about.. you pointed out identity cricis as his crux , may be the issue regards his mum..but trips its more about dashrants' estate. I also liked how you acknowleged dhani's developing discerning skills as opposed to her previous gullibility.. the snag for me was Icouldn't understand what the writing said on trips identity card.. i thought viplav had already read the info.. cocoa.. it seemed to me trips already suspected the bank guy was probably sent by viplav...
it was a very well wriiten of yesterdays moments,enjoyed it throughly.. its my joy in reading your thoughts, thanks very much mate.. keep writing and giving us Ishq... love hammie