MG ~MY FIRST LOVE~ part 3 pg 29 jan 26 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
I could understand when Geet had said she would always love Prem
but marry Maan as Prem is her first love than why had she stalked Maan
and she went on her knees also the date surely if she loves Prem than
she would never run after another guy
waiting to know what Geet actually thinks and Maan should confront her
because in front of him she acts all so in love with him
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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet is truly a condusing character...
Maans confession about geet has led mystry on that of she love maan n stalked him then y sge claims to love prem...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Who the hell is this Prem , who has become kabab me haddi between Maaneet.😡 Why Geet stalked Maan and proposed him when she loved Prem. I am confused😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update. Maan is sad and his friends are consoling him. Arjun told him to dump Geet. Asad advised him to meet Geet for once and talk. Maan is surprised if she was in love with someone else than why was she following him everywhere and proposed him on her knees.
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Posted: 9 years ago
i was waiting 4 this ss.but didnt get pm.maan cant understand y geet was madly after him if prem was her 1st luv.maan wants 2 find out more abt prem.i'm also curious 2 know if prem is just a fimy charac or is he real.waiting 4 d next part eagerly.hope arjun arohi's luv also progresses
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Posted: 9 years ago
MY FIRST LOVE




part 3




Geet.. Geet wait.. Came a desperate voice which was looking at the direction of the girl and huffing.. He was looking like a cute bookworm.. Speckie and was holding two books which would weigh almost two kilogram and almost tripped to be held by geet by his shoulder..
Steady speckie.. Why are you shouting.. I am sorry I didn't heard you...she said apologetically making him smile.. He was cute and nerd prem chopra.. By prem chopra don't take that villian of Indian film industry but he was cute guy who was all flat on geet and was looking absolutely like a baby when he handed her the books..
You know geet exams are coming and you wanted the books so I got these for you from the library.. And don't worry you can keep them until you want I have talked with the librarian and she has agreed.

(prem 1 introduced)
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Prem said ever so sweetly that anyone who could be there in place of geet would have pulled his cheeks.. Though prem was a cute guy but he was shy and geet knew that he kinda like her but she loved someone that she couldn't get she knew.. And then it happened .. She succeeded in gaining the attention of the maan SINGH KHURANA making herself to propose him.. Though maan had initially mad and what not but who can ignore the girl who was stalking him day and night and one night she managed to get to his room in KM too.. Shocking maan and his family..

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Six months ago

Maan was in his washroom taking a shower .. He had a busy day that left him tired.. And after coming home the thing he did first was to have a quick refreshing shower.. Maan was wet and his towel was wrapped around his waist when his gaze went towards the girl who yelled seeing him and was chanting..

Babaji I am sorry.. Babaji I am sorry.. Maan I am sorry while her eyes were closed and maan's anger was on the top most level looking at her in his room , waiting for him and not considering his present condition he came and held her from her shoulders and shouted ..

What are you doing here..and what is this .. I am not saying anything that doesn't mean that I can't do anything... Just get lost girl...

Tears spilled from her eyes and she cried making maan to shout again...

Shut up.. Why are you behind me.. Just end this game of yours now.. Tell me what do you want..

Geet was looking at her feet and maan in his anger made her look at him..

Speak up..

Geet : I wanted to invite you to my annual college fest.. I am performing and wanted you there.. She said quietly giving him the invite.. And her tear filled eyes met his angry ones which were still unable to comprehend what she wanted..

Maan : this is not the answer to my question..
Why are you stalking me.. What do you want..

Geet : I love you.. She whispered making maan too froze.. He looked at the girl again , she was dressed in a faded jeans ,a shirt and a cute sweat shirt and her head was covered with the hood making her look like a baby..

Maan couldn't believe his ears and asked..

Maan : come again..

Geet : I love you .. She whispered again and then she held his hand kissing it lightly looking into his dark chocolate orbs stating..

Geet : I really love you.. I don't know how and why but when I saw you in the interview I just don't know what happened to me.. It took me all the time to know who are you.. Why you were being interviewed and the I came to know that you were being awarded business man of the year... Then.. Before she could continue maan put his hand on her lips making her quite..and commanded her..

Maan : don't go anywhere I will be back in a minute.. Saying so he went to change.. He had been shocked , amazed and now amused.. Her almond eyes were indeed telling truth but she was definitely after his fame and status and he need to make her understand ...

Maan was himself in a confusion what was she saying , thinking and what not.. He changed into a white shirt and denims and coincidentally there colors were matching and as soon as she saw him she smiled and jumped pinching him..

Same pinch..

Maan : now you gave me the invite , now leave.. Maan was about to open the door for her when she started going towards the balcony and maan was startled..

Maan : hey where are you going.. This way.. He indicted towards the door..

Geet : your guards didn't let me in so u have to trick them and climb..and you know my hands turned red .. Its so cold today..she commented showing her red hands.. Maan's heart lurched and he wanted to stop her but then why would he..

Maan : who told you to come.. He taunted , though was feeling really bad for her still masked his concern with his ever famous taunts..

Geet : good night.. She said with her anger and climbed the railing in order to go and maan's eyes popped seeing her , she could have fallen he immediately ran towards her and made her down carrying her in his arms.. She was so light.. He felt her rosy fragrance seeping from his nostrils straight to his heart..

Maan still carrying her in his arms..

Maan : go from stairs.. He put her down and brought her down with him and to his surprise , his whole family was present , who had cane back from the party and seeing a beautiful girl with maan they looked at them.. Maan was still holding her hand and he asked her to leave.. But before she could leave , she gave maan a smile..

Geet : bye.. She left leaving maan with a series of questions

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Edited by suhaaana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeppieeer me first after ages


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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg ye geet kys cheej hai yaar
Maan ke room mai ghus gayi

State forward i love bol diya

Poor maan sochney ka time bhi nai diya

Par ab ye prem kya ...


Come soon


He he he abhi tum ney update diya or meee saying come soon

Yaar tension de rahe ho na aap ki aage kya hoga ...sp jaldi aana
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Posted: 9 years ago
In past
Y is maan so rude
N on the other hand feeling guilty as well
Looking forward wat will happen further

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
😕
grr...that prem😡
Geet went to maan's house climbing the pipe😊
seedha ILU bol diya😲😳
Me confused...is she really loving Maan ??
Maan lost in her...
plzz continue soon di

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