MintReen OS- Total siyappa hai tera pyaar:) - Page 3

Originally posted by: poorva22

acchaa sunn pls thoda favour karnaa i have written two paras pls padhke suggestions dena😉

theek hai😃

BEAUTIFUL AND FUNNY OS MAMTA99 LOVED IT VERY MUCH

mamtu u wrote an os!!!

Originally posted by: shrividhya

mamtu u wrote an os!!!

res!!

abhi bahar ja rahi hoon raat ko comment karoongi thik hai😛

Take your time shrivu. 😃

Fabulous os Mamtu!!!!😆 On the first place minty getting romantic!!! 😆 🤣

Originally posted by: shrividhya

Fabulous os Mamtu!!!!😆 On the first place minty getting romantic!!! 😆 🤣

And sareen uncle aur the newspaper stole ur os!!! 🤣 🤣 main TOH has has ke paagal ho rahi hoon!!!! 😆 Fabulous!!! Aur end mein main aur meri newspaper aksar😆 🤣 too good!!!

Mamtu keep writing such os it's a stress buster for all of us 😆 meri hasi TOH ab bhi nahi ruk raha hai!!! 😆

Thanks Mamtu!!!!!

Love u loadsss🤗 ❤️

Welcum shrivu, and I am so happy that u liked it. sab couples ke upar os tha but not this so thought to write this.😆 mere dimaag mein bhi ajeeb ajeeb khayal aate rehte hai.😆

Woww...what a jolly, lively and entertaining OS mamta...! Although, it took me times to understand some of the hindi words (used net for translation)...i've fully enjoyed reading it...! Loved the dialogues of Sareen...they are epic and hilarious...! For your first try...you did a wonderful job...! Continue writing and keep on entertaining us...! 👏😃

Originally posted by: Waida1234

Woww...what a jolly, lively and entertaining OS mamta...! Although, it took me times to understand some of the hindi words (used net for translation)...i've fully enjoyed reading it...! Loved the dialogues of Sareen...they are epic and hilarious...! For your first try...you did a wonderful job...! Continue writing and keep on entertaining us...!👏😃

Sorry waida for your inconvinience, but that's so sweet of you, you took time to read it, it means a lot to me. And thank you for your comments. Sareen and his dialogues , both are hilarious. 😆 I am glad u liked it. 😃