manans new journey:::: part 18 (25/4/15)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 18::: nandini opens the door n sees a driver standing next to maniks car...he sees her and says aapka naam nandini hai?? She says haan he says baba ne bola hai ki nandini naam ki ladki darwaza kholegi toh use bolna ki manik ne airport ke liye car bheji hai...nandini thinks n smiles n says- haan bhaiyaji bas 2 min...chachi comes out n says kaun aaya hai n sees the car...nandini says chachi manik ne driver bheja hai to take ull to airport...chachi says kitna sona munda hai kitna sochta hai humare baare mein...nandini smiles... chachi tells nandu manik ka khyaal rakhna haan n she nods...Ams comes out with nandinis chacha sayin did ull find a cab...chachi says manik ne apni car bheji hai humare liye...ams says havent i taught ull not to take favours from others...nandini replies its not a favour ams...we didnt ask him to send he sent it on his own...now ull relax n leave now ull r getting late unless u want ur award couriered here...chachi says haan chalo chalo n tells bye to nandu n says tc of rishabh n manik n sits in car...ams hugs nandini and says tc of rishu...nandini says yes ams u call me wen ull reach airport ok...ams n chacha sit in car...driver starts driving nandini is waving to them n den comes in and shuts the door...she goes to her room removes the sitar or veena watever n starts practicing...d en she goes to rishabhs room to see if he has got up with the noise..rishabh is fast asleep...den she luks at manik n says awww he luks like a baby sleeping so peacefully...she shuts the door n goes to the kitchen to make breakfast... She thinks of wat to make for breakfast...she thinks watll manik like for breakfast...finally she says ill make my style breakfast...so she makes idli n upma n fruit juice..wen she s making idli manik comes from behind n hugs hr frm behind... manik hugs her from behind n gives her a kiss on her cheek...she says manik softly...manik says so wat is my chef cooking today?? She says idli n upma...manik says idli n upma?? R u serious?? Ive never had that in my life...it sounds only eekk...nandini says manik u wont eat wat i cook n luks at him with hopeful eyes...he says ok i ll eat provided its not like chachis bhindi pasta..nandini smiles n says waise i can ask chachi to make more of that since u like it so much...manik says seriously...he smirks n says i mean ur chachis food...sum1 can reach the hospital with that food...nandini says now manik go n freshen up i ll make breakfast till den...manik asks her u r fresh naa...nandini luks at his face blank...he says i mean u r done with u r shower n all naa...nandini gives manik an angry luk bt he smiles n seeing him smilng she blushes...Manik goes to freshen up...nandini goes to wake up rishav...rishav gets up and asks abt manik..she replies he z in d washrum..since manik is in the washroom he goes to the washroom in nandinis room to freshen up n have a shower...nandini takes out rishabhs clothes n she is thnkng wat wud manik wear jst den manik comes out from the washroom...he knows rishabh is not der so he purposely comes out in a towel...nandini ws busy in doin hr work n she didnt notice n he hugs hr frm back..she turns n says manikk wat r u doing...she covers her eyes n luks away...manik says relax i hv worn a towel...nandini says dats the problem u hv worn only a towel...she says manik rishabh may come nytime...manik says ohh so u r only worried about rishabh seeing me in a towel...nandini luks towards him to give an answer but realises n luks away again...Nandini says manik y did u have to come out in towel...rishabh will come woh kya sochega...manik says in fact...if i lock dis door n u n me are in alone wat will he think n he goes to lock door wen nandini says manik nooo n goes to stop him by holding his shoulders...manik luks at whr nandini is holding him on his shoulders n smiles...nandini feels awkward n moves away her hand n he locks the door... nandini feels awkward n moves away her hand n he locks the door...nandini says manik stop troubling me...manik says whr did i do nytin...nandini says now do u intend on spending the whole mornin in this towel or do u intend on changing?? Manik says haan toh tum kapde dogi toh pehenunga naa...nandini says go in the washroom ill give u ur clothes...manik says waise if u want me stay in the towel whole morning i dont mind...nandini says here these are rishabhs clothes check if dey fit u...den u can ask cabir to get u sumtin wen he comes here...manik starts wearing the tshirt there only...nandini is still trying not to look at manik...she sees manik wearing the tshirt n says aiyappa n says manik go in and change...manik says haan i was jus wearing the tshirt here relax... Manik goes in to change...nandini is trying to open the door stopper but the stopper is jammed...manik comes out of washroom but nandu doesnt notice as shes busy trying to open the stopper...manik comes from behind her n hugs her again from behind n puts his face on her shoulder...n turns her...she is standing against the door...nandini sees manik wounds n touches a wound on his face to see whether it hurts him...he makes a sound of pain n she says manik does it hurt a lot...manik holds her hand n says not as much as it hurts being away from you...i cant imagine myself widout u...mujhe tumhari aadat ho gai hai...he leans ahead to give her a kiss but she moves her face away...he gets angry and says fine...n opens the stopper and leaves...nandini is worried that manik is angry with her again... Nandini says manik listen n goes behind him...he doesnt stop...nandini goes to her room to check whether rishabh is done with his shower...hes still having his shower so she says this is the ryt time manik ko manane ka... nandini goes to the hall n sees manik sitting der on the sofa...nandini goes n sits next to him...he moves a lil away from her on the sofa she again moves closer to him...he doesnt luk at her...she says manik n holds his hand...their fingers are intertwined..she raises his hand n kisses it..manik pulls the hand away..nandini says manik im sorry..its just that im not used to all dis..plz manik can u go a lil slow on me..he luks at her..both r luking into each others eyes..manik smiles n kisses her hand...he smirks n goes closer to nandu n says slow in wat nandini...she starts to move back n loses control n is lying on sofa he starts tickling her...she starts screamin...rishabh is done with his shower n is shocked to here nandini screamin.. he comes down n is standin near stairs n watching wats happening...manik says rishabh come fast revenge time she tickled u naa yest now ur turn...rishabh goes runnin towards dem n starts tickling nandu she starts screamin more rishabh...finally dey leave her...nandini tells rishabh u wait bacchu...manik asks nandini wats this...nandini is blank n luking at his face...he says this smell...as if sumtin is burning...nandini realises that its the idli dat she left on the stove she goes runnin to the kitchen...manik says nandini be careful n follows her...she reaches the kitchen n shuts the stove n goes to open the vessel...she sees that all the idlis are burnt...n says aiyappa!! Manik laughs n says too good...so masterchef nandini burnt all the idlis...like i said u r attracted to accidents...even rishabh laughs hearing the conversation... nandini says dis is all bcoz of u...if u wudnt have...n is going to say ahead wen she realises dat rishabh can hear she keeps quiet...manik purposely repeats if i wudnt have?? Aagey bolo...nandini says manikk!! Ab breakfast ka kya...manik says dont worry we ll manage sumtin... Rishabh comes to the kitchen n tells nandini dat he wants to have maggi for breakfast...nandini says no rishabh breakfast shud b healthy...manik says listen maggi is the simplest n fastest thing to make n we r nyways hungry n fab5 will also b comin soon for rehearsal...nandini says par ghar pe toh maggi nai hai...ok ill go n buy...manik says i ll come with u...nandini says no manik u stay here with rishabh...he says par n den says ok...nandini leaves...rishabh n manik r sitting n reading the newspaper waiting fr nandini to come...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
part 19:::


part 19::

rishabh
n manik r sitting n reading the
newspaper waiting fr nandini to come
wen manik says sumtin to rishabh n he
doesnt respond so manik luks up n
realises that rishabh is holding his
head n sittin...manik calls nandini but
he can hear her phone ring next to
him so he realises she hasnt taken her
phone...he says shit shit...rishabh r
u ok?? Come ill take u to ur
room...rishabhs atrack worsens n he
starts throwing stuff...manik
controls him n lifts him n takes him to
his room...he makes him lie down n
thinks how to calm him down...he
takes out his guitar n starts
playin...his hand hurts coz of him
getting hurt due to accident but he
still plays...nandini has taken house
keys so she buys the maggi n comes
back...wen she opens the door she
sees stuff fallen on ground thinks n
den screams rishabh n starts running
up the stairs...wen she enters the
room she sees manik sittin n playin
guitar n rishabhs head is on maniks
shoulder...shes worried n goes on bed
n says rishabh baby wat
happened...rishabh hugs her...she
has tears in her eyes n says its ok im
here naa even ur friend manik is
here...manik thinks he shud give dem
some time n space so he gets up to go
out wen rishabh holds his hand n
signals him not to go n makes him
sit...nandini luks at manik n smiles n
he luks at rishabh n smiles.. Nandini
still has tears in her eyes but is
trying to hide n control dem...rishabh
is sleeping now...manik luks at nandu
n wipes her tears and actions her not
to cry...he wants to hug her but he
cant in front of rishabh...she gets up
to go wen rishabh gets up n holds her
hand...she tells rishabh dat u rest ill
go n make maggi...den all 3 of us will
njoy..nandini tells rishav she ll b back in
smtym n we all ll eat maggi
togethr...at dat tym cabir mukti n
aliya enter the room n cabir says dats
not needed coz i brought breakfast
for all of us...nandini is
surprised...she luks at manik...manik
says kyaa maine kuch nai kiya...cabir
says waise nandini it was very sweet
of you to keep the door open for us
par aur koi ghus jaata toh...cabir
says and...tum dono kar kya rahe the
i mean hall mein its a mess...waise
hall is not a bad place but u both shud
have atleast shut the door n bursts
out laughing even mukti aliya
laugh...nandini is still tryin to hide
her tears...n says i ll be back guys n
goes out...manik introduces all of dem
to rishabh again...rishabh asks him u
all r fab5 naa where z dhruv...manik
also luks blank n says arey haan i
forgot to ask whr is dhruv?? Cabir
says we calld dhruv but he said he s
not feeling too well so he wont b
coming today... Rishabh sits up n
signals manik dat he is fine n we all
can go sit out in hall...manik asks
rishabh r u seriously fine rishabh?? If
u want u rest for sumtime..he says no
n says chalo lets go...dey all go to
hall n are sitting...cabir goes to the
kitchen to hand over the breakfast to
nandini...shes trying hard to hold
onto her tears...she says thanks
cabir...uve always been a great
help...cabir says nandini r u ok?? Is
everytin alrite?? She says yes n says
jus give me a min ill b out with
breakfast...cabir goes out...maniks
eyes are on the kitchen entrance for
nandini n wondering wats
happening...cabir comes out looks at
manik...even manik luks at him n cabir
signals manik to go to the
kitchen...manik gets up n says ill go
help nandini...ny1 wants ny juice or
nytin?? All say no we r fine manik n
he says ok n goes to kitchen... Manik
enters the kitchen n sees nandini
lukin out of window...manik goes n
turns nandini n wipes her tears n says
ssshhh...nandini hugs manik n
starts crying again...manik hugs her
back n says nandini relax rishabh is
fine...use kuch nai hua hai...see he s
sittin out n enjoyin with cabir n all of
us...he s so happy n u r here
crying...how will he feel if he sees u
crying.. she stops hugging n wipes her
tears...nandini stops hugging n wipes her
tears...manik smiles...nandini luks at
him n says here i m cryin n tumhe
hassi aa rhi hai...manik says actually
i was thinking abt sumthng..nandini
says wat??..
manik asks tumhare ghar mein does
water supply get cut?? Nandini gives a
blank luk n says wat...manik says nai
agar cut jaata hoga toh bhi u must
not be havin any problem naa buss do
buckets saamne rakh do tumhare
automatic paani bhar jayega...nandini
smiles n says manikk!! Manik says
waah i think i shud stay with cabir
more n learn his stupid jokes...kisipe
kaam kare naa kare tum pe dey r
surely effective...nandini says chalo
ab lets take the breakfast out...sab
ruke hain...manik says haan toh
tumhara waterfall bandh ho toh
chalenge naa...she hits manik on his
arm n takes plates n goes out...manik
smiles...they both comes out with
breakfast plates...cabir says waise
mukti...has manik ever entered ur
house ka kitchen?? All give him a
blank luk...he says nai coz he s never
entered mine nor i guess his so aaj
suraj kaunse side se nikla
hai...every1 laughs nandini blushes n
manik says cabir tu ruk...rishabh
finishes his breakfast n goes to wash
his hands...dey r all having breakfast
wen manik finds the sanwich dat he s
eating is spicy...his eyes start
watering coz of the spice...all r
shocked n wondering wat happened to
him...nandini asks manik kya hua...he
says mirchi...she gets up goes runnin
to kitchen n gets a bottle of cold
juice..pours it in a glass n gives
him...hes drinking the juice wen
nandini wipes his tears...every1 is
luking n smirking n cabir clears his
throat but it has no effect on manik n
nandini...manik is shocked while
drinking the juice n starts coughing
zor zor se...nandini gets
worried...cabir laughs n says manik
pehle dekh le use phir juice
pi...nandini feels awkward n moves
back...manik stops coughin...Rishabh is back...aliya says so guys
wats the plan for the day...yahan aa
toh gaye but isnt this place too small
for practice...nandini is thinking wat
to do...manik says i have an
idea...the terrace area is big we can
practice der...wat say nandini...nandi
ni says u guys go ahead n practice i ll
stay here with rishabh...rishabh
signals nandini saying u also go i m
fine...nandini says no rishabh i m nt
leaving u alone...rishabh says plss to
her...befre nandini can say nytin
manik says..arey but i want my new
friend to also see us perform...wat
say champ?? He can also come to the
terrace with us...aliya says dats a
cool idea n nyways we are not gonna
practice for too long coz today is
costume trials...i have bought the
costumes so we need to try dem too
after practice... Rishabh shows a
thumbs up to manik n smiles...nandini
is also happy...every1 is done with
breakfast...nandini tells every1 u
guys go up n set up everytin i ll clear
here n come in sumtime...cabir says
ok chalo guys lets go up...he sees dat
manik is not getting up so purposely
goes to manik n says chal manik show
us the way to the terrace...manik
says uhhh i ll help nandini clean
up...rishabh hai naa he ll take
ull...hai na rishabh?? Rishabh
nods...cabir smiles n says ache se sab
clean karke aana..haan manik...dey
shut the door n rishabh takes them to
the terrace...nandini has already
finished cleaning goes to wash her
hands...after she washes her hands n
comes out she sees manik standin
der...nandini says manik tum yahan
kya kar rhe ho...i thot u went to the
terrace...he says nope...nandini says
ok chalo den lets go n starts goin
towards the door...manik holds her
hand n says u know since mornin i
have been such a good boy toh thoda
reward toh banta hai...nandini says
reward?? He says haan n moves her
against the door n plays with her
hair...she says manik every1 is
waiting fr us...manik says i told dem
dat we ll clean up n come so dnt
wry...nandini says but cleanup toh ho
gya..manik says i know but dey
dont...
Manik is playing with her
hair...Nandini puts her arms around
maniks neck...manik luks at her n is
shocked...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
part 19:::


rishabh
n manik r sitting n reading the
newspaper waiting fr nandini to come
wen manik says sumtin to rishabh n he
doesnt respond so manik luks up n
realises that rishabh is holding his
head n sittin...manik calls nandini but
he can hear her phone ring next to
him so he realises she hasnt taken her
phone...he says shit shit...rishabh r
u ok?? Come ill take u to ur
room...rishabhs atrack worsens n he
starts throwing stuff...manik
controls him n lifts him n takes him to
his room...he makes him lie down n
thinks how to calm him down...he
takes out his guitar n starts
playin...his hand hurts coz of him
getting hurt due to accident but he
still plays...nandini has taken house
keys so she buys the maggi n comes
back...wen she opens the door she
sees stuff fallen on ground thinks n
den screams rishabh n starts running
up the stairs...wen she enters the
room she sees manik sittin n playin
guitar n rishabhs head is on maniks
shoulder...shes worried n goes on bed
n says rishabh baby wat
happened...rishabh hugs her...she
has tears in her eyes n says its ok im
here naa even ur friend manik is
here...manik thinks he shud give dem
some time n space so he gets up to go
out wen rishabh holds his hand n
signals him not to go n makes him
sit...nandini luks at manik n smiles n
he luks at rishabh n smiles.. Nandini
still has tears in her eyes but is
trying to hide n control dem...rishabh
is sleeping now...manik luks at nandu
n wipes her tears and actions her not
to cry...he wants to hug her but he
cant in front of rishabh...she gets up
to go wen rishabh gets up n holds her
hand...she tells rishabh dat u rest ill
go n make maggi...den all 3 of us will
njoy..nandini tells rishav she ll b back in
smtym n we all ll eat maggi
togethr...at dat tym cabir mukti n
aliya enter the room n cabir says dats
not needed coz i brought breakfast
for all of us...nandini is
surprised...she luks at manik...manik
says kyaa maine kuch nai kiya...cabir
says waise nandini it was very sweet
of you to keep the door open for us
par aur koi ghus jaata toh...cabir
says and...tum dono kar kya rahe the
i mean hall mein its a mess...waise
hall is not a bad place but u both shud
have atleast shut the door n bursts
out laughing even mukti aliya
laugh...nandini is still tryin to hide
her tears...n says i ll be back guys n
goes out...manik introduces all of dem
to rishabh again...rishabh asks him u
all r fab5 naa where z dhruv...manik
also luks blank n says arey haan i
forgot to ask whr is dhruv?? Cabir
says we calld dhruv but he said he s
not feeling too well so he wont b
coming today... Rishabh sits up n
signals manik dat he is fine n we all
can go sit out in hall...manik asks
rishabh r u seriously fine rishabh?? If
u want u rest for sumtime..he says no
n says chalo lets go...dey all go to
hall n are sitting...cabir goes to the
kitchen to hand over the breakfast to
nandini...shes trying hard to hold
onto her tears...she says thanks
cabir...uve always been a great
help...cabir says nandini r u ok?? Is
everytin alrite?? She says yes n says
jus give me a min ill b out with
breakfast...cabir goes out...maniks
eyes are on the kitchen entrance for
nandini n wondering wats
happening...cabir comes out looks at
manik...even manik luks at him n cabir
signals manik to go to the
kitchen...manik gets up n says ill go
help nandini...ny1 wants ny juice or
nytin?? All say no we r fine manik n
he says ok n goes to kitchen... Manik
enters the kitchen n sees nandini
lukin out of window...manik goes n
turns nandini n wipes her tears n says
ssshhh...nandini hugs manik n
starts crying again...manik hugs her
back n says nandini relax rishabh is
fine...use kuch nai hua hai...see he s
sittin out n enjoyin with cabir n all of
us...he s so happy n u r here
crying...how will he feel if he sees u
crying.. she stops hugging n wipes her
tears...nandini stops hugging n wipes her
tears...manik smiles...nandini luks at
him n says here i m cryin n tumhe
hassi aa rhi hai...manik says actually
i was thinking abt sumthng..nandini
says wat??..
manik asks tumhare ghar mein does
water supply get cut?? Nandini gives a
blank luk n says wat...manik says nai
agar cut jaata hoga toh bhi u must
not be havin any problem naa buss do
buckets saamne rakh do tumhare
automatic paani bhar jayega...nandini
smiles n says manikk!! Manik says
waah i think i shud stay with cabir
more n learn his stupid jokes...kisipe
kaam kare naa kare tum pe dey r
surely effective...nandini says chalo
ab lets take the breakfast out...sab
ruke hain...manik says haan toh
tumhara waterfall bandh ho toh
chalenge naa...she hits manik on his
arm n takes plates n goes out...manik
smiles...they both comes out with
breakfast plates...cabir says waise
mukti...has manik ever entered ur
house ka kitchen?? All give him a
blank luk...he says nai coz he s never
entered mine nor i guess his so aaj
suraj kaunse side se nikla
hai...every1 laughs nandini blushes n
manik says cabir tu ruk...rishabh
finishes his breakfast n goes to wash
his hands...dey r all having breakfast
wen manik finds the sanwich dat he s
eating is spicy...his eyes start
watering coz of the spice...all r
shocked n wondering wat happened to
him...nandini asks manik kya hua...he
says mirchi...she gets up goes runnin
to kitchen n gets a bottle of cold
juice..pours it in a glass n gives
him...hes drinking the juice wen
nandini wipes his tears...every1 is
luking n smirking n cabir clears his
throat but it has no effect on manik n
nandini...manik is shocked while
drinking the juice n starts coughing
zor zor se...nandini gets
worried...cabir laughs n says manik
pehle dekh le use phir juice
pi...nandini feels awkward n moves
back...manik stops coughin...Rishabh is back...aliya says so guys
wats the plan for the day...yahan aa
toh gaye but isnt this place too small
for practice...nandini is thinking wat
to do...manik says i have an
idea...the terrace area is big we can
practice der...wat say nandini...nandi
ni says u guys go ahead n practice i ll
stay here with rishabh...rishabh
signals nandini saying u also go i m
fine...nandini says no rishabh i m nt
leaving u alone...rishabh says plss to
her...befre nandini can say nytin
manik says..arey but i want my new
friend to also see us perform...wat
say champ?? He can also come to the
terrace with us...aliya says dats a
cool idea n nyways we are not gonna
practice for too long coz today is
costume trials...i have bought the
costumes so we need to try dem too
after practice... Rishabh shows a
thumbs up to manik n smiles...nandini
is also happy...every1 is done with
breakfast...nandini tells every1 u
guys go up n set up everytin i ll clear
here n come in sumtime...cabir says
ok chalo guys lets go up...he sees dat
manik is not getting up so purposely
goes to manik n says chal manik show
us the way to the terrace...manik
says uhhh i ll help nandini clean
up...rishabh hai naa he ll take
ull...hai na rishabh?? Rishabh
nods...cabir smiles n says ache se sab
clean karke aana..haan manik...dey
shut the door n rishabh takes them to
the terrace...nandini has already
finished cleaning goes to wash her
hands...after she washes her hands n
comes out she sees manik standin
der...nandini says manik tum yahan
kya kar rhe ho...i thot u went to the
terrace...he says nope...nandini says
ok chalo den lets go n starts goin
towards the door...manik holds her
hand n says u know since mornin i
have been such a good boy toh thoda
reward toh banta hai...nandini says
reward?? He says haan n moves her
against the door n plays with her
hair...she says manik every1 is
waiting fr us...manik says i told dem
dat we ll clean up n come so dnt
wry...nandini says but cleanup toh ho
gya..manik says i know but dey
dont...
Manik is playing with her
hair...Nandini puts her arms around
maniks neck...manik luks at her n is
shocked...
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Love it... please do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 20::: nandini holds his hand n says Mr manik malhotra dont u think ab tumhara ye romantic style thoda purana ho gaya hai?? He smiles n puts his hands on her waist n says ye style naya hai?? Nandini blushes...manik holds her face in his hands n says n yeh style kaisa hai?? N leans in for a kiss...Nandini pushes him away n says chalo now lets go pata nai wat every1 must b thinking...manik smiles n says notin...dey all know we dont get time together...nandini says time together?? Manik in colg we r together den after colg we r on phne n u r saying no time together...manik says ab kya kare half of the time u r running away from me...Nandini says yes like dis n runs away again..manik smiles n goes after hr...dey go to terrace...cabir sees dem together n says so manik tujhe yeh chot sahi mein lagi yaa phir u knew ki her family was goin dats y n he stops...nandini says we met with an accident yest...cabir says ohhh...manik says can we start practicing now?? Nandini says yaa but pehle decide the song toh sahi...every1 is thinking bout the song...rishabh is sittin at the side n signals manik to come there...manik n cabir go der...rishabh tells dem to wait hes playing sumtin on phne that nandini had sung few years back wen she was in bangalore and training under ams...he starts the recording...the song starts n manik n cabir like the start...so he tells rishabh to play it loud so dat rest can also hear...nandini hears the recording n says rishabh stop playing dat n runs towards him...rishabh throws the phone at manik n runs...nandini runs behind rishabh n says i wont spare you today...every1 is laughin...cabir says manik go n stop dem bfre tom n jerry starts...manik says nai thodi der aur...rishabh comes runnin n hides behind manik...manik stands straight...nandini tells manik..manik move from the middle...manik says middle im not in the middle...u came in front of me dats y i became the middle tum hatogi yahan se toh i wnt b middle...nandini says rishabh u wait n watch...rishabh laughs n goes n sits...manik says thank u rishabh ur a true frnd... manik says common guys lets try dis beat...nandini says manik dis was so old...we can get a better song...n plus my voice has also changed...manik says dnt wry we ll bring some changes...nandini says fine meri baat toh koi maanta hi nai...dey start rehearsing the song...manik tells nandini u start ill help u...she starts singing n he follows n dey rehearse 4 5 times n den stop...rishabh claps...n tells manik dat u sing very well... Manik smiles n says thank u rishabh...the watchman comes up and tells nandini aapka parcel aaya hai...nandini is shocked n goes down to see...it is maniks driver standing at the door...nandini luks at him and sees his hands are filled with plastic bags...she asks wats all dis...a reply comes saying food...nandini is shocked n says itna saara...manik replies woh mujhe pata nai tha wat rishabh likes so i ordered chinese pizza pasta watever i cud think of...hope he likes the food...nandini luks at him n says n wat bout me manik...manik says tum toh sherni ho tum toh kuch bhi khaa logi...n he laughs...nandini gets angry n takes the food in and starts laying the table...manik calls every1 fr lunch n all go bck dwn to have lunch...rishabh luks at the spread of food n is happy...all have their lunch n are sitting...aliya says now dat we r done with practice n lunch lets try the costumes...cabir says aliya not now after sumtime m so tired n stuffed..aliya says cabir stop being lazy i have to go n meet dhruv in evenin hes not keepin well...cabir says ok baba...aliya passes every1s costumes She passes nandini cabir n manik their costumes...nandinis costume is a red full length dress...she sees the dress and says wow dis is so pretty...cabir asks aliya n mukti where are ur costumes...aliya says we r done with our trial only u 3 r left so go try it n come fast...nandini says ok...cabir asks nandini where he can change...nandini says come with me cabir...even manik follows...nandini takes cabir to rishabhs room...even manik comes der...nandini says m goin to change n goes to her room dat is opp rishabhs room...she goes into the washroom n is changing...manik is going to to the washroom in rishabhs room wen cabir stops him and says nandini askd me to change here...waise by now im guessing matlab ull must b used to the same bedroom so...u can go der n change i need some privacy...n bursts out laughin Manik goes to nandinis room...door is shut but not locked...nandini is standing in front of mirror n lukin at her back...she didnt know that the dress was a slight low back backless type dress...manik sees her from out n cant get his eyes off her so he enters...she doesnt see him entering...shes tryin to pull up the back of the dress so dat its not too low...nandini shuts her eyes and says to herself nandini how will u go out in front of every1 like dis...manik comes n stands behind nandini n says nandini...nandini is shocked seeing manik n turns n sticks with the back to the wall...she gets awkward n luks away...manik is lukin at nandini...he holds her hand and pulls her towards him slowly n gently...shes facing him...her hair was tied so he opens the hair so that it covers the back...he pulls up the back of the top a little n covers the remaining back with her hair...while hes arranging her hair...he moves his hand over her back...nandini feels the touch of his fingers on her back n feels tickled so she shuts her eyes... Manik holds nandini n makes her turn...both r facing towards the mirror...manik tells nandini u r looking very pretty...nandini blushes...he moves his hands up her arms n moves her hair towards the right shoulder n kisses her on her left shoulder...nandini shuts her eyes again...manik luks at her in the mirror smiles n kisses her at the side of her neck...she says manik...manik is moving his fingers on her shoulders n kisses her cheek wen nandini turns n pushes him away...manik smiles n says ok ok...relax...n goes to adjust her hair again so dat it covers the back wen nandini says manik!! Manik says arre baba im jus doin ur hair notin else...she smiles n is leavin wen manik shuts the door n locks it...nandini says wats dis...he says cabir askd me to change in ur room so im going to change...nandini cant reach the stopper of the door so she says let me go first den change naa...he says nope well go dwn together...she says ok n tells him go in and change fast...he starts opening his shirt buttons...nandini turns n luks at the wall.. Manik starts opening his shirt buttons...nandini turns n luks at the wall...manik smiles n goes to the washroom to change... He comes out after changing...nand ini luks arnd to see him...hes wearing a white colour suit...nandini luks at him...manik says arent i luking hot!! Nandini is lukin at manik n starts walkin towards him...hes also lukin into her eyes...she reaches near manik n goes close to him...he moves his face closer to her thinking of a kiss wen she removes a thread that was der on his collar n puts it in his hand n runs away towards the door...but den realises dat the door is locked n stops...manik smiles n says run how much ever u want nandini but u cant get away from me...door is locked hahaha...nandini says manik open the door now every1 must b wondering whr we r...manik opens the door n dey both go dwn together...cabir is sittin ready on sofa...he sees dem and says chalo the grand entry has finally been made...all laugh...cabir says waise nandini ur lukin really beautiful today...manik smiles n whispers to her i told u...nandini blushes n says thank u...aliya says she has to luk pretty shes our lead singer with our rockstar...aliya asks nandini did u like the dress...nandini luks towards manik n den luks at aliya n says its very pretty aliya thank u...n says ill change n come...manik says ohh hello even i have tried my costume sum1 toh say sumtin for me...he liks at nandini and says khud ka trial ho gaya toh ull walk away like dat...cabir smiles n says in short nandini manik wants you to tell him how hes luking...all laugh n nandini blushes...rishabh signals him saying awesome costume...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Nice update continue soon liked Rishab bonding with Manik
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
i guess u ppl r nt liking my ff..dats y im gettng less cmnts 😕 ...i want ur views guys... 😊

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