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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

def interesting story

like how uve not gone for typical storyline

hmm let me think ...

story starts with shyam n khushi being married n having kid

he wants a divorce n is going to a madames house for s*x

from something the madme said n the state of the girl im thinking shes khushis look a like n shes drugged so she doesn't show any signs of digust or anything when he touches her

I think he still likes khushi in his own sick way but his greed for money n his rejection from khushi not loving him is making him go for divorce

I have bad feeling once khushi gets close to Arnav Shyam will try to use khushi n his kid to get money from Arnav since he doesn't have Anjali in this story it seems a good way for him to get what he wants including khushi

as for Arnav him not remembering khushi is not such a impossible thing his subconscious remembers but she didn't register enough on his radar for him then she was just a neusance who stood up to him n who he taught a lesson

it was always her eyes that caught his attention

now that she haunts his dreams shes a challenge n puzzle to be solved which will soon turn out to be a rubx cube which he will never get enough of

nice to see u made payal n Akaash meet I so liked how she wasn't all shy n quiet n gave him a piece of her mind

as for Ashu n Aayan how sweet they've already formed a bro sis bond

I cant wait to see what happens at the party n whats Arnavs reaction when he finally remembers khushi n realizes she wouldn't have met n married Shyam if it wasn't for his revenge

looking forward to lots of twists n surprises

u were right I do like to try to get into authors heads n predict whats comin next so let me know if im close

would love to keep reading so plz keep the pms comin my way

sending u buddy request now hope u accept


Wow heatsha...thats quite an analysis you have done there! Am impressed 😃
Have sent you a buddy request...do accept!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its really a nice teaser
So Khushi is going to know Is Arnav Appu's mammu
Waiting for full update eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Shalu, For the first time, I am seeing naughtiness in Khushi in this FF, Same old Sanka devi we all know and love.


Jaldi update karo
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Posted: 10 years ago

Dedicating this update to a dear friend- Princess Zahiraah.

Princess, I know this is long pending dedication...but I was waiting for the right chapter...read on to know why!

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CHAPTER 9



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Your turn!

This update was so difficult to write...with all the family members sharing the space! And I also realized that we are reaching the fag end of this fiction...wait a minute! Did you really think so? You are not even close!! 😆

Okay, so what do you think of this update? Please share your critique and feedback via comments if you want the next update soon!

Chapter 1 of The White Rainbow is UP!

Buddy me for PMs...

Adieu!

Edited by TwisterGirl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
story is too amazing... i so desperately wait for it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Again arnav n khushi missed der meeting. Why did he take lavanya out.. waiting fr der date n shyams retrn..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
thanx fr d pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update... I am waiting for arnav n khushi face off...!!! Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaay!!! I'm first!!
La needs a reality check! Is this the way to behave with kids?? *witch*
Oops.. Asr and Khushi did not meet! I so expected that to happen!!
Manorama is okay with payal??? That's a first!
No obstacle in their relation atleast!!
Is la engaged to Asr?!? That's a news!
Next?! Face off between khushi and snakewa???Bechari khushi!! Why don't she divorce that good for nothing shyam??
This update had everyone but not a single interaction between arnav and khushi:-( but still i enjoyed this chapter and nikhil's tantrums..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Well it's amazing would be an understatement ,... It's a fantabulous update and a very fast one😃 ... I loved the #instantlove between Arnav and Nikhil especially how Nikhil pecked him on his cheeks and Nikhil outright disliking towards la and how Arnav to confesses that their feelings towards her are mutual ... I found it very cute how Nikhils Appu di started crying seeing her darling chote red in anger... The family trip will be quite exciting ... And I hope the end is not soon in the recent future 😆...update soon ... 😊
Edited by adyaa - 10 years ago

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