MaNan SS~ The Spot Girl Trouble (Chap1 Pg4)

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Hello everyone!
I present to you all my new SS on MaNan, "The Spot Girl Trouble". I hope you all read and like it! Feedback is a must please!😳

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The Spot Girl Trouble

Prologue :

"Why the hell isn't she answering my damn call?" Manik was furious. What has gotten into this girl?' Thinking to himself he once again picked up his phone to ring Nalini.

On the other side, Nandini was scared thinking what should she do now. Manik has been calling her forever but she was scared to answer his call knowing what all he could do from the details her sister had given her. Nalini! What trouble have you put me into?'. She bit on her nails and finally gathered the courage to call him back.

"Hello?" She squeeked ready for the blast she was going to get from the other side. " What hello? Where have you been you idiot? Why aren't you answering my call? I've been calling you forever now!". She was in deep trouble now, she knew it. "Nalini? Are you there? Talk !" . "Sorry sir" was the only thing she could say. "What sorry? Where are you? Why aren't you in college today? Come fast, I'm not waiting all day for you to come now" and cut.

Nandini stared at her phone as was even more scared to know what deep trouble her sister had put her in.

Taking small steps, Nandini entered into SPACE looking around searching for the one and only Manik Malhotra, or Monster Manik in her sisters words.

Where is he now? First he gets crazy over the phone, and I can't even find him now. Wonder how does Nalini manage this crazy guy.' She thought to herself and pulled out her phone. Nalini had shown her some pictures of Manik and his "Fab5"So she could recognize them easily.

Manik saw Nalini coming from a distance and started thinking of troubles he would give her and what all things he'll make her do today. That was his favorite past time lately, but there was something different today..but he couldn't put his finger on it.

"SPOT! Welcome! Welcome your highness" Manik threw a taunt at her but the look she gave him was not the usual whatever look' but she was scared. She didn't look at him. "Wow, today decent clothes? Surprising" he looked at her from head to toe which made her uncomfortable. Why does Nalini have to wear those clothes? And how will I wear those? Ugh' she thought and mentally cursed Nalini for putting her in this situation.


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Please guys, lemme know if you're interested to read further... It might be confusing a lil bit.. Or maybe not.. But if you like it, lemme know!


Would love to read your comments 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue - Pg 1
Chapter 1 - Pg 4
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Terrific start!👏

Sooo... twin confusion? New idea, interesting!😊

Excited for your next update!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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is it a twins story??
nice start by the way!!!
continue soon waiting...
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

Terrific start!👏

Sooo... twin confusion? New idea, interesting!😊

Excited for your next update!😆


Thankyou! 😳

Oh, it was too easy to guess I guess 😆
Yup! Twin trouble 😆

I'll do it asap 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _keertu_

is it a twins story??

nice start by the way!!!
continue soon waiting...


Hahaha yes 😆

Thank you and will continue soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Rima - Thank you for all the comments you have written 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting. There's twins in the story. Please PM me when you update. Would love to read.
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Originally posted by: d.a.n.c.e.

Sounds interesting. There's twins in the story. Please PM me when you update. Would love to read.


Thank you!
Yes yes very easy to guess right? 😆

Wow, would love to pm 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys I need feedback, or else I'll have to rethink about this again

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