~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 67

Wooow sooo much updatees wheree do i started

I just loveee the way you writeee it is sooo amaaazing

Cant believe shlok told varad
Aashta has too grow up
And stand up for herself and leave shlok

Read all four chapters...things seem to be getting worse between them.  Sighs

Beautiful chapters dearest aall 3 of them just excellent plzzz continue soon 

Thanks for the all updates...it was awesome😊

Dearest Slowly I am starting to hate Shlok 😆 Don't get mad but how could he tell Varad everything without letting Aastha explain herself? stupid ass!
Loved how she asked him to let her go as he tried to get intimate after humiliating her and making her feel sad- the best part was still the moment she started to throw things at him, would have helped her :D😆 anyway
very well written update soon!
Aastha should stay away from hin until he realises his mistake: and how can he say she should have told him that she was sad about swati when he never ever wants to talk to her. He only is near her if he wants to bed her

Update soon!! and don't forget to pm me ;)

Just luv d way u write 😊 awesome updates n ya plz update soon. Eager to knw wat happens next

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 6 years ago

Omg...it's so mean...y varad can't give astha one chance to explain...after all this years they grown up together...they proved blood is thicker than water...shlok behaving this way is kinda understandable...but varad being an elder one...am upset!!
Edited by priya_avi - 9 years ago