ABHIGYA OS : JUST FOR YOU

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have not done any proof reading , so gramtical errors and spelling mistake ho sakta hai

i dont know maine kya likh diya hai , i hope you all like it

the chapter is very long tho it can be boring so uske liye bi sorry

i dont like the present track that even after the truth is out the mu continues , so i want it something like this

JUST FOR YOU

Pragya started crying immediately as the doctors said her maa was very critical

" pragya beta shaant ho jao , kuch nai hoga tumhaari maa ko " her daadi tried to console her

" lekin achanak daadi ?" pragya asked

" kisi ka phone aaya tha , aur uske baad teri maa ko heart attack aaya , pata nai kya baat hui ya kisne call kia " her daadi said thoughtfully

" kahin kisi ne mere aur abhi ke rishte ka sach tho nai bata ya ?" pragya thought to herself

" beta tum akeli kyun aayi ? abhi le aati apne saath " daadi said

" wo pareshaan hai daadi , aaliya ko lekar , main unhe aur pareshaan nai karna chahti thi , issliye maine unhe kuch bataya nai " pragya lied

" koi baat nai , main abhi batakar aati hoon " daadi said and started walking

" nai daadi , mai unhe baadme bata dungi " pragya stopped her daadi

" arre , main bolke aati hoon ,tu yahin bait , main tere liye kuch khane ke liye bi laati hoon , teek hai puttar " daadi insisted and walked off

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AFTER HALF HOUR

" maa ko zaroor kisi ne sach bataya hoga , maa ko hamesha sirf meri chinta rehti hai , zaroor kisi ne maa ko sach bata ya hai , lekin kaun bata sakta hai ? abhi ? nai wo itne boore nai hain , par aaj bohut gusse mai hai , ye sach tho mere , bulbul , purab ,aur abhi ke alawa kisi ko nai pata " pragya thought

" nai , tanu ko pata hai , aur suresh ko bi , lekin suresh maa ko takleef nai pohunchayega , zaroor tanu ne kia hai , ye ladki itni selfish hai ki apne fayde ke liye wo kisi ki jaan bi le legi " pragya realised

" hamesha mere hi saath aisa kyun hota hai ? main lakh koshish larloon lekin maa ki pareshaani ki wajah main hi kyun hoti ? zindagi mere hi saath aisa kyun karta hai ? iss sab mei meri kya Galati hai ? sach bahar aane ke baad bi mujhe zara sa chain nai , aisa kyun hai ?" pragya asked herself

Just then she felt a hand on her shoulder and she looked up to see who it was

" tum ? tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho ?" she asked

" pragya tum teek ho ?" he asked

" main kaise bi hoon isse tumhe kya?" she asked back

" main jaanta hoon ki ye sab meri Galati hai , please mujhe ek mauka do sab teek karne ke liye " he requested

" kya teek karoge tum ? kya ? mere zindagi mein aur kuch barbaad hone ke liye kuch bacha hi nai , tum jaante ho meri zindagi ki sabse badi Galati kya hai ? haan ye ek hi Galati hai jo maine kia hai , aur shayad issi Galati ka sazaa mujhe mila hai , aur meri Galati ye hai ki maine tumhe apna dost samja , maine socha ki agar do dost shaadi karenge tho zindagi aasaan hogi , maine ye socha ki mera dil koi bi dukha sakta hai magar dost nai , tum ab yahaan kyun aaye ho ?" pragya asked

" pragya main manta hoon ki saari Galati meri hai lekin..." he started

" lekin kya suresh ? tum jaante ho jo mere saath hua main wo deserve nai karti thi , jo bi mere saath hua hai isme meri koi Galati nai hai , par har kisi ke Galati ka sazza mujhe hi milta hai , you know why ? because I am a scapegoat , sab log bade aasanise apne Galati ka blame mujhpar daaldete hain , aur kisi aur ke Galati ka sazaa mujhe hi milta hai , you know what suresh , mujhe ab kisi ki zaroorat nai , I don't need anybody , so just leave , just go away " she pushed him away

" pragya ..." Suresh started

" chale jao suresh , ab aur nai sahaa jaata " pragya turned away

Abhi was shocked , he felt bad for her for the first time , he saw purab and bulbul coming so he hid quickly

Bulbul got angry seeing suresh

" tum yaahan kyun aaye ho suresh ?" bulbul asked angrily

" mai jaa hi raha tha bulbul " suresh said and left

" di , maa ko kya ho gaya ?" bulbul asked

" tumhe maa ki fikar kabse hone lagi bulbul ?" pragya asked and bulbul was shocked

" pragya di , issme bulbul ki Galati nai " purab defended bulbul

" tum beech mai kyun bol rahe ho ? main apne behen se baat kar rahi hoon " pragya told purab

" pata hai bulbul , aaj jab maa ko kisi ki zaroorat thi tho unke dono betiyan unke paas nai the " pragya said to bulbul angrily

" pragya di..." Purab started

" yehi kehna hai na ki iss main bulbul ki Galati nai hai , sahi keh rahe ho tum , issmein meri behen ki koi Galati nai hai , saari Galati tumhaari hai , pehla Galati , tumne bulbul se pyaar kia jab tum aaliya se engaged the , dusri Galati , tumne apni engagement ke bare main bulbul se chupaya , theesri Galati , tum bulbul se shaadi karna chahte the likin abhi ko aur aaliya ko tumne kuch bi nai bataya , aaj abhi ne mujhe poocha ki tumhaari behen ne kisi aur ke mangetar se pyaar kaise kia tho mere paas unhe kehne ke liye koi jawaab nai tha , kya kehti thi main ki meri bulbul ko aaliya ke bare mei kuch pata hi nai tha , purab agar tumne aaliya ke bare mei bataya hota tho meri bulbul tujhse kabhi pyaar karne ki Galati nai karti , tho meri bulbul ka dil nai toot tha , chalo chodo , ye sab puraani baatein hain , jab meri abhishek se ho chuki thi aur tum aaliya se shaadi karne aaye tab bhi maine tumse kaha ki agar tum aaliya se pyaar nai karte tho mat karo ye shaadi , lekin tab tumne kya kaha purab ? ki tum mere shadi ko bachane keliye aaliye se shaadi karoge , leki n tumne kya kia purab ? tum aaliya ko shaddi ke mandap pe chodke bhaag gaye , kya tumhe koi bi andaaza hai ki jab ek ladki ki shaadi shaadi ke mandap pe tootthi hai tho uspe kya beet tha hai ? nai tum kaise jaanoge , lekin mujhe pata hai , mere saath hua hai , koi bi ladki ye deserve nai karti ki uske shaadi toot jaaye wo bi mandap pe , lekin purab ab tumhaari aadat si ho gayi hai galatiyon karne ka , purab uss din bi maine tumse kaha thi ki ek Galati teek karne ke liye dusri Galati karna bevakoofi hai , lekin purab tumne kya kia ? wohi Galati baar baar dohraya , hamesha musibaton se bhaag jaate ho aur saara bill mujhpar fat tha hai " pragya cried

" ek baat batao purab , kal jab sach bahar aa hi gaya tho tum bhage kyun ? sach bahar aakar bi abhi ne saara blame mujhpar daala ki maine tum dono ko bhagaya " pragya said

" di kal aapne dekha na , abhi kitna gusse mai tha " purab tried to justify

" hum gussa sirf unse hote hai purab jinse hum pyaar karte hai , abhi mujhse nafrat karte hai , unhone aajtak kabhi bi mujhse physically abuse nai kia , jaante ho kyun ? kyun ki wo mujhe nai apnathe , unhe lagta tha ki main hi wo ladki hoon jiske liye tumne aaliya ko choda , wo tumse naraaz the lekin mujhse nafrat karte hain , yehi farak hai naraazgi aur nafrat main , hum unse naraaz hote hain jinse hum pyaar karte hai aur unse nafrat karte hain jinse hum pyaar nai kar sakte , aaj main apne behen se naraaz hoon , jaanthe ho kyun ? kyun ki usne mujhe tadapte hue dekha hai meri shaadi ke tootne ke baad aur iske baavajoot usne tujhe aaliya ke paas wapas bhejne ke badle wo khud bi tere saath bhaag gayi , meri maa ne hum behno ko musibat se ladna sikhaya hai , bhaagna nai aur kal abhi ki kya Galati thi ? tumne unki behen ko ek baar nai do baar dhoka dia , gussa tho kisi bi bhai ko aata , agar mere paas koi bhai hota tho kya wo abhi ko mujhe hurt karne deta ? nai na " pragya asked , abhi was shocked

He was blaming her and she was yelling at purab for his mistakes , how she thought that because she wasn't fortunate enough to have a brother , she had to go through all his tortures

" tum dono ka kaisa pyaar hai , zara ladne ki himmat nai , log tho pyaar ke liye saari duniya se lad jaate hain . lekin tum log tho sirf bhaagte rehte ho , aise hi bhaagte bhaagte tum apni zindagi ke rishton ko kho chuke ho , apne bhai jaisa dost , apni dost aaliya aur abhi ke poora pariwaar jo tujhe apne beta jaise pyaar karta hai , tum pyaar se unhe samjha sakte ho ki tumhe bulbul se pyaar ho gaya , ki tum kissi ka dil dukhana nai chahte lekin pata nai kaisa tum bulbul se pyaar kar baite , aur abhi tumse itna pyaar karte hai ki wo tumhaari dil ki baat samaj jaate , lekin purab tumne kya kia ? tum bhaag gaye , tum problems se bhaag rahe ho , aur kab tak bhaagoge tum ? ek na ek din tho tumhe waapas aana hi hai aur uss din tumhaare paas koi nai hoga , bohut logon ka dil dukhaya hai tumne , ab tum meri behen ki taraf sirf tab dekhna jab tum sab teek kar doge , aur agar tum sab teek nai kar paaye tho meri behen ko bhool jaana , kyun ki main apni behen ko uske haath main nai doongi jo zara sa ladne ki taaqat nai rakhta " pragya said

" di..." purab started

" di nai hoon mai tumhaari , bhabhi hoon , mere pariwaar se tumhaara koi rishta nai , lekin jis pariwaar se tumhaara rishta hai unhi ka wishwaas todkar aaye ho , jao aur un sab ko sambhalo jinka dil tumne thoda hai , un sab ko sambhalo jinka wishwaas tumne thoda hai , aur jis din tum kaamyaab ho jaaoge , uss din bulbul ke paas aana , aur agar tum nakamyaab hue tho bulbul ke saamne tho door mere saamne bi mat aana , tum jitney mushkilein khade kar sakte ho tum kar chuke ab jao aur unn musibaton ko thodo " pragya said and looked at bulbul

" teek hai di ...mere matlab bhabhi , aap jo keh rahi hain main wo karoonga " purab said and looked at bulbul once and walked off

Just then daadi came back with food

" arre abhi ab tak nai aaya , aur bulbul tu kidhar thi ? chalo tum dono kuch khalo " daadi said

" bulbul tu khale mai aati hoon " pragya said and walked past abhi

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" aap yahaan ?" pragya asked

" daadi ne bulaya , lekin mai tumse bohut naraaz hoon , tumne mujhe nai bataya ki maa bimaar hain ?" abhi acted

" nai betaji , pragya tumhe pareshaan nai karna chahti thi " daadi defended pragya

" lekin tumhe pareshaan dekhkar mai pareshaan tho ho hi gaya hoon na " abhi said sweetly

" abhi beta , pragya ne kuch khaya bi nai hai " daadi complained

" koi baat nai daadi , ab mai aa gaya hoon na , mai aapki pothi ko khana khilaakar aata hoon , chalein jaan ?" abhi asked pragya

Pragya was in awe of his sweetness , just yesterday he was threatening her that he will make her commit suicide and now he was behaving like a perfect damad

She kept looking at him as they walked

" aise kya dekh rahi ho chasmish ? mai tumhaare maa ko hurt nai karna chahta " abhi lied

" thank you " pragya said and looked down

Abhi looked at her

" ye main tumhaare liye kar raha hoon ,just for you kyun ki this is all I can do for you against all that you have done for me , I promise chasmish ye shaadi agar koi thodega tho wo tum ho , tum jab tak mere saath iss shaadi ko nibhana chaahogi tab tak mai bi tumhaara saath doonga " abhi decided

" ye kya kar diya hai maine chasmish , tum mujhse naraaz nai ho? Maine tumhaare saath itna boora kia lekin fir bi tum sab kuch chup chap kaise seh leti ho ? ab main kya karoon ? kaise maafi maangoon? Humaare beech sab kuch itna complicated kyun hai chasmish " abhi said to himself and looked away from her


The end...

all sorts of onions , tomatoes and eggs are welcomed

i know its not very good but please comment and give me your feedbacks

your comments means a lot to me

Edited by magati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww Abhi the softie!!! Loved the suresh twist!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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are you kidding magati THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!

*throws flowers and confetti and balloons*

Seriously. So much perfect dialogue. Everything that Pragya should say, so perfectly expressed. Powerful read yaar I was just vibrating with emotion following Pragya's breathless words.

So Abhi heard it all, and understood, and changed. Happened so subtly, behind the scenes, and yet exactly right. Gives me hope for them.

Love love love love this story!!! Thank you magati!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Magati yaar... U wrote it pretty well... Love the way Abhi was lying to Pragaya :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it... especially pragya's talk with purab...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have no idea what the os was abt wish it was translated
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Amazing. You have written it beautifully. Loved Abhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was superb...yrr i always like your os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Splendid piece of writing dear...

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