Poem on naksh first meeting

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This poem described akshara's feeling when naitik was about to came to meet her and what she feels after him
here is the poem...

Holi aayi bhai holi aayi
Aj usse milne ki din aayi
Man to hai mera bahut ghabraya
Phir bhi hai mujhe usse milna
Jab usne di darwaje pe dastak
Tab dil me hui dhak dhak
Jab samay aayi unse milne ki
Tab hai maine chuppi sadhi
Kuch samajh na aaya main kya kahu
Main to bas ho gayi piya bawri

how's this.. pls share ur views

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lovely poem 😊
you are a great writer
please write more..it's very nice

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Anjali rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Very nice poem.. akshi's feeling was beautifully described

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome poem
keep it up 👍🏼
do write more

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ritu-
Wow...it was awesome 👏

Thanks

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SONAMB404
Lovely poem 😊
you are a great writer
please write more..it's very nice

m not a great writer.. its only naksh who encourage me to write more

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Posted: 11 years ago

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it was awesome👏👏...do write more...😃

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: naKsHolic
awesome poem
keep it up 👍🏼
do write more

Thanks.. sure soon posted new poems

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nivedha_123
it was awesome👏👏...do write more...😃

Ya sure.. write more poems

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