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Posted: 13 years ago
Ramya dat was a mindblowing piece of writing ..loved it lotss :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Silambu

Ramya, well written. I like the way you portrayed Siddhi. An assertive Siddhi rejecting his proposal and her happiness in bonding with her son. An loved the part where she made Kunal jealous. Lastly the tea.It does bring back the good old days.

Awesome. Loved it.!


Thanks Silambu 😉 I like to see Siddhi like that in the show...the good old days of parichay had siddhi that way Kunal can be jealous all he wants without taking to slap marathon fest

I loved the way you wrote the vileness of R coming out in your chapter and how AC2 kicks her derriere 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi! All, Here is the contribution from Gayatri! She had some connection problems, so I am updating from my account!!
Chapter 9 - The Season Of Love

As usual it was another quite morning.. The beams of sunlight sneaking silently through the glass window of Kunal's bedroom stroking his face.

Kunal lazily gets up yawning🥱.. While stretching his arms, he noticed Anand is still sleeping peacefully.. And kunal in deep thought wondered that, anand usually wakes up before kunal. Then thinks of the reason as it might be the tiredness due to camp. He bent over and kissed his sweet pie on the forehead, cautious not to disturb his sleep. Then quitely leaves the room.

In the center hall, ritcha with loud voice entertaining Veena maatha.. Kunal gets annoyed by her presence in the morning🤔. Seeing kunal at glance, richa runs to him saying, "Kunal, I will prepare Lemon tea for you, go and freshup"

Kunal ignoring her words, without even looking at her, enters into bathroom.

After a quick shower, kunal reaches kitchen, goes to seema..

Before he talks something to seema, ritcha interrrupts with a cup of tea.. "kunal I have prepared lemon tea for you.." with widened sparkling eyes😃..

Seema is grinning at her😛..

Without entertaining richa much, he simply starts preparing Ginger tea for himself and horlicks for Anand.

Ritcha comes over to him with a hard voice, ignoring the insult by kunal, "kunal I have prepared tea for you.." stretching her arm with cup😡..

Kunal before leaving kitchen, replies " I hate lemon tea.🤢"

Seema tried hard to hide her winning smile at ritcha😉.

Kunal enters into bedroom, trying to wake anand up, and calls his name with low voice.. "Anand"

No response from anand.

Kunal again softly "Chotey, wake up.."

Anand mumble & turns to other side.

(Actually he's wide awake with the alarm of his bro's wake up call, before kunal. After hearing to scary ritcha voice from main hall, he again pretends sleeping. Anand enjoying the special attention from kunal from morning kiss to till he is being called softly😳. His dad's voice is like a latest pop music. He loved to hear it again and again.)

Meanwhile ritcha interrupts the whole lighter moments of Father and Son😡.

"kunal, you get ready, I will look after Anand.."

Anand observing it from corner of his closed eyes😲, gets up in a thump and hugs his dad saying "goodmorning" pecks his cheek😆.

Kunal. " Chotey, take it finish fastly" offers him cup.

Ritcha was dumbstuck seeing anand's sudden behaviour😲. She started to consider herself as odd in out between them. Interferes into situation and pulls over anand to her..

Anand "Good morning ritcha aunty… Sorry I didn't see you.."

Ritcha controling her voice, " Anand, I have asked you call me mom. Don't you feel a need of mother?? See your dad, he needs a company in his life right🤢." Staring at kunal with threatening expression.. unknowingly she tightened her grip at the tiny anand hands.

Anand lost his temper and with pain screams .. "aunty leave me, its paining. Why do you compel me so much to do what you wish?? You love to do blackmailing others???😡"

Hearing to anand kunal was stunned😲. And shouts on ritcha to leave anand.

Ritcha who never accepts the defeat, says "kunal why are you so angry? Anyway tomrow or day after I will become anand's mom legally, Better he make it as a habit of calling me mom now onwards.."

Kunal looks at richa angrily.. Richa ignoring his looks, leaves the room saying, " I will prepare breakfast for you😕".

Anand with his tiny brain tried to catch richa devilish ideas. Being in chopra's house for past past two days and seeing the drama and fake love of richa, the very little he understood is, Richa is hell bent to marry kunal🤢. In span of seconds it flashed in his mind, then why not it is Ritcha who has created rift between his parents by manipulating the whole family😲???

Anand to himself "Waahhh Anand.. You are too intelligent⭐️.. I need to share it with my bro"

And also a doubt raises in his mind.."as a small boy I could understand, this scarry auntie must be the casue of whole destruction of their family. Then how come dad couldn't sense something😆?? Now I need to do something.. "

Kunal is trying to be normal from the irritation of richa and getting ready to go office.

Anand slowly goes near kunal looking at him..

Kunal notices the silence and says.. "chotey, don't think about all these, Papa is here for you. No one will compel you to do anything.. Atleast nw you can smile for papa right😉??:

AD slowly opens his mouth "dad, I am really scared of ritcha aunty. She is troubling me more since the day I hv returned from camp. She is desperate to be called as mom.. It seems she may kidnap you & ask me in deed for my acceptance.. You take care of yourself dad and please stay away from her😳".

Kunal suddenly stopped adjusting his tie and frowned looking at anand, then lost in deep thoughts..

Anand, innervoice was jumping with happiness.. atleast he made his dad to be serious about the issue, by relating blackmail to kidnap using all his movie knowledge👏. But the little sweet-heart isn't aware that, unknowingly he gave a big clue to his dad to chase the mystery and solve the puzzle⭐️. Slowly he left the place, looking kunal involved deep in thoughts..

Kunal's mind stopped at Anand's one word "kidnap".

All of these years, his thoughts were so limited. Neither he prioritized pre incidents of siddhi accusing him as murderer in court, nor he concentrated post incidents of Richa words about siddhi tried to kill the baby.

For the very first time his thoughts went beyond and out of limitations. He started to recollect all the incidents since his marriage..

"kidnap" the word caught his attention more. Siddhi was kidnapped by rohit, hence richa attempted to kill sidhi. He knows ritcha can dare to do anything. She can kidnap anand and ask him to accept her proposal of marriage😲."

Suddenly something striked in his mind.. that is rohit being kidnapped, by ritcha😲..

What happened to rohit?? As per sid & vikram, rohit turned as approver and in process of bringing him court , ritcha hatched the plan to kidnap him, and was succeed in that.. After that…???? " kunal thinking deeply, he is trying to get back all the connections behind his release from accusation..

"Is rohit alive or dead??? If he is alive siddhi is innocent. Or if he is dead, How can siddhi be the murderer when she doesn't even know where he was hidden??. Now its crystal clear that Siddhi is not the culprit behind rohit's death.. Then how could I tolerate siddhi being sentenced life time?? When I couldn't tolerate Rakesh abusing siddhi at office.. Then how could I tolerate siddhi being accussed as murderer????

Something might have happened in between the kidnap and siddhi's statement in court against me.

Who can answer to my questions about exactly what happened 9 years before??

Kunal burst into tears when he realized siddhi is innocent. He started search for the answers of which he didn't know or failed to see and understand…

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I will update the next chapter soon.. stay tuned!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the update Gayatri!! Love the way Anand helped Kunal to have a mentos moment!!👏 Unfortunately, I can't 'like' your update and you can!!😛
Edited by hima2012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the last part especially kunal's burst in to tears thinking abt siddhi

gayathri👏...very nice update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update Gayatri ...
God knows wen that glorious moment will come wen we see kunal using his intellegence in the show...
thanx Hima for posting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Gayatri it's awesome. Kunal started thinking Abt the unanswered questions. Eagerly waiting for the next update 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Gayathiri - Great writing. Enjoyed it . Love the way Anand expressed his dislike of Richa to his dad and also Kunal into the thinking mode. Good. Loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update ...😊
... good job👏
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Posted: 13 years ago





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