Shivi FF: Chooriyan (Part 17- Pg.74) (complete) - Page 18

Raavi prepared lunch for Shiva😊

Shivi's conversation was nice❤️

Poor Shiva, first time he gifted Raavi and she is behaving like his wife😆

Shiva had his own group of friends, glad that you showed this in your story which was missing from the show😊

It was wrong thinking by Raavi that Shiva's friends will get impressed by her and she is the only important girl in Shiva's life

Felt sad for Raavi though

I really want to see Raavi falling in love with Shiva, she is doing all these for those green bangles which is very lame. She is running after him for the wrong reasons, now she may actually find the valid reasons to woo Shiva. Also she used to think that she is the only girl who Shiva interacts, this thinking is wrong, everyone should have friends, I'm glad that u have written about Shiva's friends. Also Raavi could also realize that she will not be the centre of attraction everytime. This reality check was needed for her. Shiva's actions are justified, like how can u accept someone as ur wife who u hate the most and moreover who claimed to love your brother her entire life, that also for some bangles. Dobi raavi needs a psychiatrist. But nevertheless, feeling sad for dobi raavi along with shiva.

Aww poor Raavi 😢

I know her expectations are a bit too much, and so Shiva not budging makes sense.

But dil dard kar raha hai for her 🥺

This Raavi, however Dobi, is very very adorable🌹

Hope once things are better, her cuteness melts Shiva into a puddle of goo 🥰

Loved that you wrote about Shiva's friends! Much needed.

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

My poor Bachi ... she's putting in so much effort and Shiva isn't so much as sparing her a thought 🥺

So ... is she right ? Does she really mean nothing to him ? 😒

Okay then 😔💔

Issokay baby girl. I'm sure there's someone out there who will love you even if you're bad at math. Sab ke liye koi na koi toh hota hai, aisa suna hai ... I don't know how to console her😒

Don’t worry Shiva is there to console her 😆

Bad at math 😂😂😂

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

The bubble burst...poor Raavi....why am I getting sadistic pleasure from this....

The first gift he’d ever given to someone and she called herself his wife. Never again would he gift anyone anything. 🤣

PS:.....PLZ A LITTLE BIT THARAK💋❤

Because tu bhi mere aur Nikki ki tarah hai. We are sadistic people. 🤣

Let’s see. If the opportunity of giving a little bit of tharak comes then why won’t I?

Originally posted by: prernapewdie

Ok, it was sad, like real sad.

Its childish of her to think that she is and should be the only person in his life. Life does not go like that, but the way you mentioned about how she felt left out did pinch my heart.

Raavi dobi hai, parr pyari bhi toh hai 😔😔

pls post next update

Exactly. I’m just giving her a reality check.

Originally posted by: ananya.2

Because tu bhi mere aur Nikki ki tarah hai. We are sadistic people. 🤣

Let’s see. If the opportunity of giving a little bit of tharak comes then why won’t I?

SHIVI tharak is needed ananya....Aaj ke lingerie Gadha romance ....SHIVI tharak is needed to cleanse my soul😔

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Iss update ne tho mera dil dukha diya! Please don’t do this to my bechari cute si dobi Raavi!

I’m going to go cry in a corner now.

Aww don’t cry. Come here. I’m about to post now.

Originally posted by: freebird_dd

Ye update de ke poori raat udasi chayegi..

Poor raavi she is so pure n the efforts she is putting omg... 😭😢😭😢 hw cn someone ignore her specially shiva 😡

Cant wait 4 next specially after this ...

Flow of the story is mind-blowing

I request keep one part at last where is taking seminar for the whole world 2 explain the significance of GREEN CHORIYA...

I don’t know about the whole world but Pandya family ko zaroor seminar degi 😂

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Realistic chapter! Raavi is making efforts but for all the wrong reasons, with no real interest in Shiva. His reaction was expected. When she realizes this, I would like to see her make efforts for the right reasons this time! ❤️

And of course shiva's thoughts on this whole matter and what he feels about Raavi ❤️

Exactly. Thoda sa reality check di bandi ko 😆