Shivi SS: Main aisa kyun hoon( Pt2 Updated on Pg3) - Page 2

Gosh!? Shiva Shiva Shiva!! It took for her to literally drink poison for him to shake out of his insecurities. Hope Raavi doesn't give in easily and he repents for his actions!

Shiva's every action and reaction is extreme when it comes to Raavi ❤️

Loved it! ❤️

I really loved this piece! I was glad Shiva understood his mistake and was ready to rectify it ❤️ A caring Shiva would be a treat to watch on the show itself.

Do write more if time permits!

Beautiful update👏

Why does Shiva have to wait for the last straw to realize how wrong he was to Raavi? Shiva has really messed up in the show!!

Let's hope he gets on his senses just like here in the OS😭

Do update soon if you are planning to turn this into a SS😉

Thank you for writing this❤️

I really want to see something like this..Shiva has taken Raavi for granted off late..he needs a reality check.

You have written this so well....I could feel the pain and defeat of Raavi and Shiva's fear of losing Raavi❤️

Loved reading this...do write more🤗

Hi guys here's the second part . Thank you so much for all the love you'll have provided 💗 Love reading everyone's feedback .Still don't know how I will proceed with next part but hope you'll like this part .

Part 2

Shiva went near her bed and held her hand . He wanted to feel the warmth of her hand, feel her pulse to know she was alright , his Raavi was alright. She looked tired but nothing less to beautiful .She would be fine , he would take care of her he knew that for sure .

Shiva : Mujhe maaf kar de Raavi maine bohot galat kiya tere saat.

He wanted her to wake up as soon as possible and hold her tight into an embrace .

The minute the entire Pandya family found out what happened to Raavi they came rushing to the hospital all of them leaving Suman, Rishita and Dev as they didn't want to cause a ruckus at the hospital. They decided they would inform mami once they were at the hospital , Krish had waited till everyone left to inform them about Raavis condition because he didn't know how mami would react.Gombi , Dhara and Krish saw a broken Shiva and unconscious Raavi as they reached the ward.

Shiva was silently sobbing holding Raavis hand when Dhara came to him and touched his head , she knew her son needed her . Gombi and Krish silently looked at the couple and wished for things to be fine for both of them.

Dhara : Shiva ....

As Shiva heard his bhabhi he turned and side hugged her not leaving Raavis hand . He needed someone to support him so that he wouldn't break but couldnt let go of Raavi's hand as it was proof that she was fine , seeing Raavi in such a condition had taken a toll. He just wanted to see her awake.

Shiva : Bhabhi Raavi theek ho jayegi na? Ye saari meri galti hai bhabhi . Main bohot bura hoon.

Dhara : Kya hua Shiva ? Ye sab kaise hua ? Tu aise kyun bol raha hai ?

Suddenly Raavi started stirring and moving . She felt a weight on her hand and squinted her eyes to see what weight was on her wrist . Shiva noticed the minute Raavi moved and touched her face gently with his other hand that was half hugging his bhabhi a second back.

Shiva : Raavi tujhe kaise lag raha hai? Krish jaldi se Dr.Sahil ko bula .

Krish ran off to find Dr.Sahil.Raavi was processing what was happening when she remembered everything and she tried loosening her hand from his grip .

Raavi : Mera haath chod Shiva .

She said it curtly so as to not make it evident to everyone .

Shiva obliged and knew her reaction made sense and kept quiet .She had turned her face and ignored Shiva . Dhara noticed Raavi's cold behaviour but thought it could be just the exhaustion that caused it .

Dhara : Raavi meri bacchi tu kaisi hai ? Kaisa lag raha hai ? Hum mami ko kal subah call karke batayenge Varna agar unhe kahi aur se pata chala toh woh tension mein aa jayegi .

Raavis features softened hearing concern in her Dhara Di's voice. Shiva stood back giving her space , he needed her to calm down to speak to her .

Raavi : Dhara di main bilkul theek hoon. Abhi mujhe kuch dikkat nahi ho rahi . Ye rash hi hai challi jayegi. Aap maasima ko kuch mat bolna warna woh pura Somnath apne sar par chada degi . Waise Mera discharge jaldi se nahi kara sakte kya ?

Shiva spoke up hearing this .

Shiva : Nahi 48 hrs under observation rakhna padega bola hai doctor ne . Hume kuch der tak ye precautions leni padegi.

Raavi ignored what Shiva said and continued speaking to dhara .

Raavi : Dhara di mein bohot care lungi aur sahi se doctor ke saare instructions follow karungi bas aap mujhe yaha se ghar lekar jao . Last time bhi jab ye hua tha maasima doctor ko samjha ke ghar le aayi thi , aap bhi kuch magic karo na please .

Shiva felt even more guilty hearing her mention about first allergy incident ,she had landed up in hospital due to an allergy and still she risked her life due to him , due to his insecurity? How selfless was she ? What had he done to deserve her as his wife ? He had decided it was no more time to think he was worthless rather it was time to make himself worth her . He loved her chirpy and over enthusiastic voice and the fact that she was still looking forward to come home after what he had done . He knew he had the longest and hardest part of redemption but she was worth it all and he would go through it all for her .

Shiva : Bhabhi main Doctor se baat karke aata hoon .

Raavi continued ignoring him and this was enough time that Dhara gave to her bacchas . She knew she had to let things take its course but if one of them had landed themselves in hospital then she had to intervene. Shiva was about to leave to speak to Doctor when Dhara popped the question to them.

Dhara : Kya hua aur raavi aise hospital mein kaise aayi ? Abhi ke abhi jaana hai mujhe . Raavi tu shiva ka chehra tak nahi dekh rahi aur tu idhar hospital ke bed mein leti hai . Aur shiva chup chaap behta hai kuch nahi bol raha bas teri har ek cheez ko chup chaap sun raha hai .

Shiva was about to come clean when Raavi spoke up .

Raavi : Dhara bhabhi kuch nahi woh tho humara roz ka Tom and Jerry ka pagalpan hai . Rahi baat hospital pahuchne ki meri galti thi bhabhi . Galti se na maine kuch cheez kha li jisse mujhe kuch zyaada hi allergy thi . Pata nahi kya tha.

Shiva felt even more ashamed listening to Raavi defend him.

Dhara : Tho hume main cheez paile allergy test karni chahiye na Raavi . Pehli baar kis cheez ke wajah se hospital mein pahuchi thi tu ?

Raavi : Hing ke wajah se bhabhi . Galti se aaj kahi kha liya hoga .

Dhara : Aaj maine tho khaane mein hing nahi daala tha tho tune hing kaha se khaya mujhe tho woh dabbi hi nahi milli.

Raavi : Aapke khaane se nahi dhara bhabhi.Haan yaad aaya woh na maine bahar se khandvi khayi thi , meri ek friend lekar aayi thi . Usme shayad se tha .

Gombi :Dhara bas bhi karo bechaari abhi hosh mein aayi hai aur tum uski interrogation kiye jaa rahi ho .

Shiva kept his head down listening to Raavis poor attempt of defending him . Just then Krish entered .

Krish : Doctor Sahil aa rahe hai . Woh emergency case ko lekar hatke hai .Bhabhi hum Raavi bhabhi ko ghar leke jayenge. Main na unke saat non stop rahunga . Waise bhi weekend aa raha hai aur mujhe off hai aur ek do din extra chutti marunga .

Raavi : Haan Dhara di ye best rahega . Main tho soch rahi thi kuch din main aangan mein so lu . Khuli hawa mein accha bhi lagega.Krish ke saat gappe bhi ladaungi .

Shiva : Paagal ho gayi hai kya ? Tu aangan mein nahi soyegi . Tujhe abhi bed par rest karna hai issi condition pe main doctor se baat karunga .

Gombi : Haan Raavi Shiva bilkul sahi bol raha hai .

Just then doctor Sahil entered to check up on Raavi. Everyone cleared his path ..He first checked Raavi's , pulse then her eyes and checked where she had developed rashes .

Doctor: So Raavi abhi kaisa mehsoos kar rahi ho ?

Raavi : Bilkul fit and fine Doctor . Aap please mujhe jaldi se discharge de do phir tho main aur better ho jaungi.

Doctor : Dekho Raavi maine Shiva ko bhi samjhaya tha ki 48 hours observation is a must to avoid any complications.

Shiva : Doctor agar hum ghar par pura dhyan rakhe ,ek min ke liye bhi agle 48 hours tak Raavi ko akela nahi chode tho kya hum usse ghar le ja sakte hai ?

Doctor : Dekho Shiva agar tumhe lagta hai tum log Raavi ko ghar mein acche se samhal sakte ho tho discharge dene mein dikkat nahi hai.

Shiva : Tho ye best hai . Aap hume discharge papers ka clarity do aur hum raavi ko ghar le jayenge .

Gombi : Krish tu formalities dekh le . Dhara ek min bahar chal in dono ko thoda sa time dete hai .

Raavi : Nahi Gombi , Dhara di aap rukhiye na.

Dhara : Maa ko inform karte hai aur khaane ka intezaam karke laate hai okay ?

Raavi : Theek hai bhabhi.

Dhara and Gombi left the room leaving Shiva and Raavi to fight their own battles.

Shiva : Raavi mujhe maaf ....

Raavi : Mujhe tujhse koi baat nahi karni shiva . Samjha tu ?

Shiva : Main tujhe baat karne nahi bol raha Raavi . Bas ek maafi mang raha hoon aur tujhe bol raha hoon tu mujhe jo saza degi woh manzoor hai aur sar aankhon par rakhunga.

Raavi glanced slowly but tried to maintain her anger .

Raavi : Mujhe tere saat koi Khel nahi khelna Shiva . Tu jaa yaha se .

Shiva dropped on the bed and held her legs and a lone tear had escaped his eyes .

Shiva : Pan mujhe teri zaroorat hai Raavi bohot zyaada .Please mujhe jo saza dena chahti hai de de pan khud se alag mat kar .Ye Shiva apni gauri ke bager nahi jee payega .

Raavi felt her eyes watering but she had to be strong, she knew her heart had already melted but her mind had to stay strong to teach Shiva that he cannot have his way always .He had hurt her a lot and it was time to settle some scores.

Raavi : Theek hai . Ghar pohchte teri sazaa one by one main tujhe deti rahungi aur yaha pe tu mujhse jitna door reh sakta hai utna door reh . Kuch hi ghanto ki baat hai mere discharge ke liye .

It was time to teach Shiva Pandya that he cannot misbehave with Raavi Shiva Pandya .

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Great Part, Raavi is so sweet, she was defending Shiva ☺️

Pliz continue writing i wanna know what happen next pliz update sooon ❤❤❤❤

Great part.

Raavi defending Shiva was really nice.

Continue soon

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