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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow, yet another lovely chapter. I am so glad Kailash and Deepa are back together.
However, I think, they should not get intimate still. not before wedding. It takes away the thrill and the expections (for the readers too πŸ˜‰ ). I always think, you need something to look forward to, to get you going.

I love the passion and I LOVE the romance. But, Why not wait on this thing??
Jiggly what do you think?
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Wingy

Wow, yet another lovely chapter. I am so glad Kailash and Deepa are back together.
However, I think, they should not get intimate still. not before wedding. It takes away the thrill and the expections (for the readers too πŸ˜‰ ). I always think, you need something to look forward to, to get you going.

I love the passion and I LOVE the romance. But, Why not wait on this thing??
Jiggly what do you think?

ufff.. but i've already wrote it out yaar.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i feel that these matters shouldn't always be put in a conservative manner. i mean the place is right, the person is right, deepa knows kailash is the one for her so why not? chastity nowadays isn't valued much & pple usually waste it on some worthless scum.

waiting till after marriage might take away that passion & zest in the couple's feelings, which is why i made them get intimate a little earlier.πŸ˜‰ if kailash & deepa became closer after getting intimate, the impact would be greater if i show a rift between them after a while. the pain, the longing would be more heartfelt.

this is my opinion on your take Wingy. i dunno how many of you accept it though.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Edited by jigglypuff726 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Jiggly -

Understood and agreed (ur response to Wingy) and looking forward to it.

Ok, my 2 cents - As long as the details don't get too deep ('cos what if there are very young silent readers here 😳 ) - ev'thing is good.

On this chapter - It's once again a nice chapter Jigg. I wish I had a brown saree that makes me look as sexy & sweet. πŸ˜›

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Posted: 18 years ago
Jenim - I am sure you look sweet and sexy in any colored saree let alone brown.

Pat
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Posted: 18 years ago
This was the most romantically chapter as two person who loves each other has decided to take a one more step in their relationship. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jenim

Jiggly -

Understood and agreed (ur response to Wingy) and looking forward to it.

Ok, my 2 cents - As long as the details don't get too deep ('cos what if there are very young silent readers here 😳 ) - ev'thing is good.

On this chapter - It's once again a nice chapter Jigg. I wish I had a brown saree that makes me look as sexy & sweet. πŸ˜›

I agree with Jemim as well.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: meli

This was the most romantically chapter as two person who loves each other has decided to take a one more step in their relationship. πŸ˜‰

yes meli i agree with u

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jenim

Jiggly -

Understood and agreed (ur response to Wingy) and looking forward to it.

Ok, my 2 cents - As long as the details don't get too deep ('cos what if there are very young silent readers here 😳 ) - ev'thing is good.

On this chapter - It's once again a nice chapter Jigg. I wish I had a brown saree that makes me look as sexy & sweet. πŸ˜›

awww... thankoo jenim & the rest of you for your comments!πŸ˜ƒ sorry wingy, i hope you don't mind me posting this chapter.😊 i kept in mind that this forum may have young members so i kept all the intimacy to a minimum. please be patient as this is a really LONG chapter!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

CHAPTER 39

he sat her down very gently & turned to shut the door. deepa felt the atmosphere in the room was musky & romantic. it smelled of lavender gardens. as deepa took in the rustic look of the room with keen interest, kailash came up behind her. wrapping his arms around her waist, he inhaled the sweet smell of her hair. deepa smelled so good that it made him feel dizzy. "you've got a beautiful room." deepa complimented him but kailash felt that it was just an excuse to hide her true feelings. deepa was getting scared & kailash could feel it very clearly. "relax deepa. I'm not going to eat you up!" he joked trying to lighten the atmosphere. but deepa still looked nervous. "okay, what is the problem deepa? why do you look so bothered? are you not ready?" kailash tried not to sound disappointed. "no, it's not that. it's just that I'm.. I'm scared that I may not be perfect enough for you. cos I'm not that slim or hot or sexy.." deepa faltered. kailash burst into laughter. "that is why you look so nervous? you silly girl. I love you, the body is something very mundane compared to your character." he rapped her head lightly with his knuckles.

deepa relieved at last, seemed to relax. kailash reached down & found deepa's lips. he kissed her as passionately & as lovingly as he could. deepa reciprocated with an equal amount of passion. her blouse was becoming undone & was steadfastly slipping down her body. deepa tried to straighten it but kailash stopped her. "it makes my job easier you know." he laughed & deepa burst out laughing too. their laughter & jokes took a passionate turn as the night stretched on. kailash undressed deepa gently, he didn't want to hurt her because she meant a lot to him. finally deepa stood in front of him bathed only in the dim light of the room. he pulled her close to him & hugged her yet again. deepa slipped into bed & smiled naughtily at kailash as if beckoning him to join her. kailash hastily undressed & got in with deepa. "I love you." he whispered to her & buried his face into her neck.

clothes were but a hindarance. feeling the bed's silk sheets against her body as well as kailash's warmth was enough for deepa. her sari lay forgotten at the foot of the bed. deepa awoke at the break of dawn. she was wrapped tightly in kailash's embrace. gently untangling herself from his embrace & wrapping the soft silk sheets around her body, deepa walked towards the window. she stared out into the dusky early morning sky, reminiscing about the previous night. those silk sheets, kailash's strong broad shoulders, his gentleness, his masculanity & his smile, his passion all made deepa blush. the previous night, kailash & deepa had consummated their love for each other. deepa couldn't forget the fiery way kailash had made love to her. his lips around her neck, his mustache pricking her ever so playfully. kailash's heartfelt desires lay bare for her to see that night. deepa saw a side of kailash she had never seen before. his passionate nature wasn't at all evident from his innocent face. "I can never forget last night." she spoke softly to no one in particular. "neither can I." kailash replied from behind her.

kailash knew that deepa was the one for him. that night confirmed it all. she was so sweet, so innocent, so soft just like an angel. kailash had held her close the entire night & the intimacy he shared with her was one of a kind. kailash awoke & realised that deepa wasn't beside him. he found her standing by the window, staring out into the open. she looked beautiful in the soft light. kailash remembered the way deepa's fingertips grazed his shoulders & the way she clung onto him as if he was only one she needed in the world. that quality made deepa endearing & very lovable. kailash got up & walked towards deepa. he had wrapped the silk sheets around his waist like a towel just like how deepa had wrapped the sheets around her body. he heard deepa saying that she could never forget the previous night and he also added that neither could he. the previous night had been special for both deepa & kailash. "good morning sweetie!" kailash reached out & gave deepa a kiss. she returned his greeting softly. "in the mood for breakfast? I can make some really good French toast!" kailash asked deepa cheerfully. she nodded & kailash whooped with happiness. he carried her in his arms right into the kitchen. he put her down on a chair & started making French toast for deepa. she watched him with a big smile on her face. "here, try my special French toast!" kailash plopped down four pices of buttery toast in front of deepa.

"it smells wonderful!" deepa exclaimed & started helping herself to the yummy toast. "mmhhh.. it tastes so good! won't you have some?" she asked kailash between mouthfuls of toast. kailash watched her silently but didn't eat any toast. suddenly he grabbed deepa & kissed her hard. he took some toast from her mouth & ate it happily. "kailash! what are you doing? you can eat the toast from the plate can't you?" deepa scolded him good-naturedly. "no deepa. this toast that has touched your lips tastes much more tastier than the one on the plate." kailash answered cutely. "you're so corny & silly!" deepa smacked kailash lightly but blushed. his comments may have been corny but deepa felt the deep love beneath them. feeling flattered & really fuzzy, deepa fed kailash more toast in the same manner & kailash ate happily loving every moment of it.

this was a super long chapter.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i hope you all liked it. i also hope i wrote all the romantic liasions properly & it didn't fall flat. i'm not really used to writing such intimate scenes. lols! comments & suggestions are welcome!πŸ˜ƒ

~leena 😳😳😳

PS: BK, where did you get those smashing avatars of vikram? they are so pretty!πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by jigglypuff726 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
me 1st yes.

Super chapter i loved it. Brilliant work Leena keep it up.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Where is Pat today? Usha has bet her today. πŸ˜†

A long chapter, Leena. As promised you have kept the intimacy to a minimum. u has described their feeling afterwards very well instead describing the intimacy. Well done. πŸ‘ The breakfast scenes were cute and funny. πŸ˜† I hope u wont separate this lovely couple

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