Deepa & Kailash FF - *COMPLETED* - Page 23

Yeah, Jiggly, I like it this way. After all, poor Kailash, let us cut him some slack

Leena. I admit that I am lost some where in your fiction......I am way behind....and you reached chapter 36......let me catch up with others ....soon...Thanks for the new chapter buddy

Hmm…Khailash and Deepa are stocked together in a lift, a romantic movement?? 😆 😆 I feel bad for Khailash coz he was saying the truth.

Ooh.. I hope there's more romance than sad sentiments between the two, in the lift. 😉
Yeah.. like Meli said, I too think Kailash needn't be too apologetic, 'cos Deepa's behaviour warranted that kind of reaction from him.

Anyway Jigg, please keep in mind that you are not to be influenced by the yucky lift scene between Ajay & Asin in Pokkiri 😆 - what with Sun TV repeating the same trailer/scene time and again.

don't worry jenim. i think this lift scene is more romantic than that lift scene.😉 thanks a lot people for your wonderful comments!👏👏

CHAPTER 37

"what's happening?" kailash heard deepa exclaim beside him. kailash knew that it was very uncomfortable for deepa to be in a closed dark space because she was claustrophobic. "give me a minute." kailash told deepa & reached into his pocket. he took out a mini pocket torch he carried with him. it was useful in the dark cinema halls but the torch was proving to be useful in the lift as well. kailash saw deepa relax a little at the sight of the small glow emitted from the torch. she looked frightened but she still kept her distance from kailash. using the moment to his advantage, kailash neared deepa. "deepa.. it'll be at least half an hour before someone gets us out of here. why don't you let me explain?" he gently coaxed her.

deepa spun around with anger evident in her soft eyes. "explain? ha. you have already 'explained' to me enough at the picnic. by the way how come you left sandhy's house so early? didn't she entertain you?" she questioned him sacarstically. kailash winced at her harsh tone & felt all the more guilty of giving deepa the wrong idea about him & sandhya. he started to explain when deepa interrupted him. "wait. let me finish kailash. you clearly said I was insecure & I didn't know what I wanted. well, let me tell you now. I don't want to see you ever again. I hope now you know what I really want!" she announced in an icy tone & turned her back on him. kailash knew that deepa was annoyed with him but he didn't know that she was THAT angry with him. desperate times call for desperate measure. kailash felt that in order for him to let deepa know that he still liked her he had to do something. something real fast. then without second thoughts, he spun her around, pinned her to the wall & kissed her as hard he could.

kailash's sudden actions threw deepa into shock. she had snapped at him very harshly & he looked like a sweet puppy at that time with his forlorn eyes. deepa almost turned back to hug him but she stopped herself. after a few moments though, she felt kailash's arm on her shoulder. he spun her around & before deepa could even react, kailash had pinned her to the wall kissing her passionately. deepa used all her might to push him away but kailash was just too big, too strong. "let me go!!" she tried shout but all that came out was a muffled gasp. when she tried once more to protest, kailash pinned her arms to her sides so she couldn't struggle. deepa felt helpless & angry but she also couldn't deny that she was sharing a really fiery kiss with kailash. deepa gave in soon after & returned kailash's kiss softly. he feeling her response released her arms. deepa had a good mind to give kailash two tight slaps but was caught up in the moment of passion.

kailash had a way of making deepa feel passionate unlike the rest of the guys she had previously dated. whenever he kissed her or touched her, she felt this longing that she didn't experience with other men. as he kissed deepa, kailash's hands travelled up to her waist. he pulled her closer to him as they sank deeper into the kiss. deepa's arms which were still were now snaking around kailash's shoulders. she wrapped them around his neck & snuggled closer to him. he didn't know if it was the heat of the moment or the dark private lift, kailash suddenly felt a little naughty. his hands which were on deepa's waist slowly moved up to her shoulders. kailash played with deepa's tresses for a while then he pushed them back to expose her shoulders. deepa was dressed in a black spaghetti strapped dress. her shoulders were bare except for the thin straps. kailash slowly pushed down the strap exposing her smooth chocolate brown skin. he used his finger to gently trace the shape of her collarbone. he heard deepa gasp in shock at his sudden boldness.

kailash's warm lips left deepa's lips. he kissed her chin & then trailed slowly down her smooth nut brown neck. deepa closed her eyes & enjoyed the warmth & intimacy of the moment. kailash's lips soon reached her shoulder. deepa shivered as his lips left a warm trail from her shoulders right down to the slope where her hidden buxomly curves lay. deepa realised that the moment was getting to intense & too personal for it to happen in the lift. "kailash.. kailash.. stop please.." she whispered to him. when he didn't heed her advice deepa reached out & brought his face up to hers. "no." she insisted softly. "but why?" he questioned her, his voice husky with emotion. "we're moving too fast. I don't want anything wrong to happen between us." she explained to him patiently. kailash looked a little disappointed but he understood her & didn't force himself upon her. "can I at least hug you?" he asked her tentatively. "of course you can!" deepa replied, laughing as kailash reached out to hold her.

i hope this chapter wasn't too vulgar or anything. i tried to keep the sexual innuendoes in it to a minimum. comments & suggestions are welcome. and if i suck at writing romantic fiction, please be brutally honest with me.

~ leena😉

Me first again! I liked your chapter - there wasn't any vulgarity as you said. I guess it is normalin stories like this to have such romantic interludes. You have timed them well because there is good continuity. Keep it up and keep it coming.
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Pat

Jigg,

Aww.. that was too cute. You know, we are suckers for romantic scenes, so please keep them coming. I have absolutely no problems with your writing or the romantic interludes between D & K. In fact, it's a pleasure 😊

BTW, are you going to cover the misunderstanding between them or was it just "Kiss and make-up" 😛

Pat,

As I was typing, I was thinking.. how come Pat hasn't replied first. By the time I finished reading, typing and posting my comment.. I see ur comment.

We even chose to say similar things 😃

Jenim, yenna porutham, namakkul intha porutham! 😉
Pat

Good one Leena, i like it...your chapters are getting longer and thats awesome.