New OS:En Idhayam Neethanadi(part 2 -final part updated in pg 3) - Page 3

Originally posted by: SushK16

Super OS Shiny Bro !!

Enjoyed it so very much !! :)

Meesai oda shock treatment connection vara vachuduche... Haha

Adhukku apparom sandai... Konjam neram kalichu Karthik was searching for her... Over ah pesakudaadhu nnu purinju irupaan...

Then the beach scene and ILU at Midnight was really cute... :P

Shiny awesome OS!!! Reading all these stories with KR together hope the Office team reads them and starts changing the show. The intense moment between KR and their emotional dialogues were really good. Thank you!

Semma Shiny..

Part 2

I made this part at the request of some friends..

Jan 1^st 2015...

In KR home..

Time 8.30 am

k:raji...enga ponna

r:ingathan iruken paaru...dining roomla...

k:appadiya?...itho varen

k hugs her from backside..

r:k,enna panra...kaiya edu..

k:mudiyaathu

r:kaiya edu k..

k:endi ippadi solra...ippathan naame ella sandaiyum mudinchu onnu sernthurukom...aana nee ippadi nadanthukaraye...

r:hmm...serithan...athukunu ippadiya?...mothalla theerka vendiya kanaku neraya baaki iruku..

k:appadiya?...enna thu..

r:athu innum konja nerathula unake theriyum..

k's mv:rombathan suspense vaikara...ennava irukum?

Doorbell rangs..

k:yaaru intha nerathula..

r:enaku theriyume..

r goes n opens the door...there stands meesai n kamal..

r's mv:hmm...ippavum jodi pottuthan varuveengalo?

K;s mv:ivanga ethuku inga vanthanga?

r:ulla vaanga..

kamal mv:aiyoo enna ithu..ivanga rendu perum sernthu nikaranga?...karthi moonchi vera brighta iruke...oruvela onnu sernthutaangala?..

meesai:raji...

r:appa..konjam irukeengala...naa pesi mudichudren..

meesai remains silent..

r:aama neenga yaara ketu appadi oru mudivu edutheenga

meesai:athu illaima..

r:enaku bathil venumpa..

meesai:raji,enaku antha urimai illaiyama?

R:oh...nerayave iruku...aana enta oru vaarthai ketrukanum..

meesai:illaima...nee othupenu..

r:appa...naan ithuku samathipenu neengala eppadipa oru mudivu edukalam?haan?sollungapa..

meesai:..

k:r...enna ithu...en ippadi pesara?

R:nee summa iru k..naan ippa pesithan aaganm

r:enaku rendavathu kalyanama?...hmm...athalam naan kanavulakoda ninachu paarthathu illai..en kamalta koda sonnenea atha pathi...aana avan...cha...avanum intha thitathula kootu sernthurukan...

kamal:raji...naan unta sollanumnuthan irunthen...

r:che...pesatha...enaku pathikittu varuthu...

kamal hangs his head down...karthik smirked..

r:appa enakum karthikum sandaithan...prachanai than..divorceku apply pannomthan...aana enga rendu perkulayum kaathal appadiyethanpa iruku..konjam koda kuraiyalai..en neraya koodirukunu koda sollalam...ore veetula thani thaniya irunthomthan...aana oruthar oruthar moonchiya paarkama paduka porathu illai...thani thaniya saapidromthan...aana naanga antha saapada rusichu saapidrathu illai..naangathan pesikalaye thavira...enga rendu peroda manasum pesikittuthan irunthuchu..

K's eyes filled with tears on hearing this..

k's mv:rajiku naan eppadi irunthenlam therinchuruke...avalum enna maarithan irunthuruka..ILU,pondati...

meesai remains silent..kamal was shocked.

Kamal's mv:ivalavu nadanthuruka...aana enta ava vera maathirithana sonna...appa athalam sutha nadipa..?

r:en counsellingku naal nerunga nerunga...engaluku tension erukum...eppadiyavathu atha thaduka paarpom... aana engalata ulla oru periya prachani ennana enga egothan ..naan en ivalta irangi varanum...naan en ivanta irangi pesanum...appadinu engalukula oru stupid thought oodikitte irunthuchu...athan intha alavuku kondu vanthuruchu...aana nethu engalukulla iruntha ella egovum odainchupoi kathal perukedhuruchupa..

meesai was surprised..but kamal cant believe his ears...

meesai:ennama solra?

R:aamampa...naanga nethe onnu sernthutom..inime engalukulla pirivu enpathu kidaiyave kidaithupa..

meesai:raji..unmaiyava solra?

R:aamampa...naan enga thappa unarnthutom..

meesai:romba santhosama...itha ketkave enaku aanathama iruku..

kamal;s mv:ada paavi meesai...takkunu manasu maaritayeya...

meesai goes near k n holds his hand..

meesai:mappillai...ungala ippadi koopidamla..

k:maama..enna mama neenga...appadilam pesatheenga..

meesai:illai mappillai...raji sonnathu correctthan...naan avalta ketruanum oru varthaiyavathu...

k:illai mama..athalam onnum illai..

meesai:neenga enna sonnalum athuthan unmai..sollaponna naan avaluku innoru kalayanam panratha pathi ippa yosichu irukave kudathu..

k:illai mama..neenga rajiku oru appava nadanthu kittu irukeenga...ellam ennalathana mama...

r:karthik..

k:illai r...naanthan intha prachanaiku mullu karaname...ennalathan ellorukum manakastam..

meesai:appadilam sollatheenga mappilai..

k:illai mama...unga mela entha thappum illai...ennalathana intha mudiva neenga edutheenga..

meesai:unmaithan mappilai...aana athuthan ippa suthama maari poi nalathu nadanthuruke...athuve enaku pothum..neenga rendu perum intha puthaandula irunthu santhosama irukanum...athuthan enaku venum...

K smiles...

kamal mv:ada paavigala...ellorum onnu kooditaanga pola...

meesai:raji...enna manichuruma..

r:appa...

meesai:aamampa..inime appa intha maathiri thappa orupothum panna maaten..

meesai to kamal:kamal thambi...neengalum enna manichurunga...naanthan avasara pattuten...

kamal didnt utter a word..

meesai:appa naan kilambaren ma..inga iruka enaku etho maathiri iruku...manasu kurukurukuthu..

k:mama...enna ippadi solreenga...inga irunthutu ponga mama..

meesai:illai mappilai...venam...ellorukum manasu kastama irukum...neenga rendu perum santhosama irunthale pothum enaku...appa naan varen raji..varen mappilai...

k shooked his head..

r:seripa..paarthu poitu vaanga..

meesai vacate the place...

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r:hmm...oru kanaku over...ippa adutha kanaku iruku..

having said..she stared at kamal..

r:enna kamal...moonchi romba shocka iruku pola..

kamal:raji...

r:nee ippadi pannuvanu sathiyama ninachu paarkalai...ivalavu suyanalama nee sinthipanu kanavulakoda ninaikalai..

kamal remains silent..

r:naan unta theliva sollitenla appalenthe...aana nee atha sattaikoda pannama enna torture pannikittu iruntha..en un akkatalam koda naan pechu vaanginene...appakoda un manasu maralaila...

kamal:raji...athu illai raji..

r:unna naan oru nalla friendthan ninachu ella vishayathayum sonnen...aana nee...appa unta vanthu kalyanatha pathi pesi iruntha...nee atha thaduthurukanum...aanaa atha pannama...thirututhanam panniruka..

r:inga paaru kamal...naanum karthikum sernthutom ippa...inimelum appadiyethan irupom...athanala nee enga vishayathula inime thalaiyitana illa enna imsai pannena...illai engalukulla ethaavthu kalakatha erpaduthanumnu nianchena... nee vera maathiriyana rajiya paarka vendi irukum..

K 's mv:en kovilpati thevathaiku kovam konthalikuthe...aana kovathulayum ava azhaguthan..

Kamal swallowed his saliva n said:purinchuthu raji...inime naan neenga irukara pakkam koda varamaaten...

r:appadi vanthena...unaku pidicha oruthan unna paarthupan..

raji turns her head towards k saying this...k slyly smiled..

kamal:aiyoo...raji..naan inime athukulam santharpatha erpaduthave maaten...en ippave naan vera ooruku transfer vaangitu poidren..

r:ok...romba nalla mudivu..

kamal to k:karthik...unna ennala purichukave mudiyala...aana ippo un manasula enna irukunu enaku theliva therinchu pochu..

k gave a death glare to him..

kamal:inime naan ungala disturb panna maaten...varen...illa illa...kilambaren..

kamal too left the place hurridely..

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r :hmm...paarthaya k...eppadi oodranu..

k:pinna nee kudutha dose appadi..

r smiles..

k:eppadidi...ivalavu bolda pesina..

r:ellam nee pakkathula irukara thairiyam than..

k:en chellam...

karthik hugs her..

r:dei...ethanadava enna hug pannuva..

k:inga paaruda...yei..naan un purushandi..nyabagam irukula..

r:ada rombathan...

k:unakum ithu vendi iruku...aana nadikara...correctthana..

r blushes..

k:yei appadiya?...appo enaku no problem..

r:po karthik...

k smiles..

r:k...ella kanaukum theernthachu..ippatha manasu konjam lesa iruku..

k:illaiye..innum oru kaanku baaki iruke...

r:enna solra?

K:aama r,ippa varum paaru athu...

somebody pressed the doorbell..

r:yei...yaaruda athu..

k:neeye paaru..

k opens the door...there stands madhavi...but she shocked to see raji there..

madhavi mv:iva ethuku inga iruka...nandhi maathiri...

k:enna mathavi..rajiya appadi paarkura...ulla vaa,

she came inside the hall..

madhavi:boss..neenga enna new year anniku koopiduveenganu ninachu koda parkalai..veetula koda ketanga..engadi porenu ivalau avasarama...en friendu veetukunu poi sollitu vanthuruken..

k:hmm..athuthan enaku theriyume...

madhavi:seri sir...enna ethuku vara sonnenga...evening ethaavthu party iruka?

Raji fumed..k signals her to stay calm..

k:illai...ippave unaku surprise party kodukalamnu iruken..

madhavi:appadiya...enna surprise sir..

k:solren...solren...athuku munnadi unta sila vishayam pesanum...unaku love ngra wordku meaning theriyuma?

Madhavi:sir..

k:illai...enna love panrayame..appadiya?

Madhavi:sir...

raji silently watched this drama..

k:matha teammateskita enna pathi aaha ohonu pugaznthu pesarayame...athukumela...enna unaku romba pidikumame...enakaga entha levelkum povayame..

madhavi:illai sir...appadilam illai

k:shut up...madhavi...asingama illai...kevalama illai...aduthava purushan mela aasipadarathu thappa theiryalai..athukum oru bathil vechurukayame...divorcethan aaga pothula...appuram ennanu...

madhavi was shocked..

k:enaku ella vishayamum theriyum...unta naanum softa sollipaarthen...aana nee athalam kaathula vaangikara maathiriye illai..

madhavi:ethuva irunthalum...thaniya pesunga sir..kandavanga munnadi thitatheenga sir..

k:vaiya moodu...raji en wife...avala poga solla nee yaaru..

raji's joy knew no bounds.

madhavi's mv:enna ivaru...ippadi solraru...appa sernthutaangala rendu perum..

k:enna paarkara..aama naanga sernthutom..

madhavi was shell shocked..

k:unna inga vara sonnathu ethuku theiryuma...intha vishayatha solli,nalla thitti vidrathukuthan...

k:inga paaru...inime nee officela ethaavthu thilalangadi velai pannanu therinchuthu...mukiyama rajiya pathi ethaavthu thappa pesarathu...avala seendrathu...ippadi ethaavthu irunthuchu...naan pesikittu iruka maaten..velaiya vittu thooki potruevn...paarthuko...

madhavi:sir...

k:inime officeku vanthoma...velaiya paarthoma,veetuku povomanu irukanum...atha vittu vetti velai ethaavthu pannikittu iruntha...avlothan...solliten..

madhavi:sorry sir...

k:un sorrylam enaku thevai illai..inimelavathu nalla buthiyoda iru...po..

madhavi was about to leave...

k:yei...onnu solla maranthuten...inime thappi thavarikoda en veetu vasal pakkam vara kudathu...vantha vilaivu vibarithama irukum...nyabagathula vechuko...po..

madhavi left the place,crying..

raji ran to him n hugged him tightly..she began to sob..

k:yei..raji...ennachu..

r:illai k...nee ippadi pesarathu enaku santhosama iruku..

k:athuthan enaku venum...

k wipes her tears..

r:eppadida ippadi pesina..ponnugalta nee eppavum softathana pesuva..

k:hmm...nakkallu...

r laughs...

k:aama raji...inime naan porumaiya poga porathu illai...pongi ella poren..

r:superda...superda...itha ithathan ethirpaarthen..

k:seri...r...vaa naam konjam kovil varaikum poitu varuvom

r:ippaveva?

K:aama raji..namala serthu vechathe antha kadavul thana ella prachanaiyayum solve panni...avarku nandri solla venama?

R:romba seriya sonna...iru naan dress change pannikittu vanthudren..

After some mins...r dressed in rose saree..

k:wow...sema azhagudi...ennala mudiyaladi..

r:poda..

k:seri vaa..polam,azhagu thevathaiye..

In outside...K sat on his bike

k:hmm...seekarama eru...intha backseat romba naala un varugaikaga wait pannikittu iruku..

r :haha...eppadida ippadi pesi asathara..

k:unna paarthala varuthe athuva..

r sat at back...

k:seri...en thool mela kai vechuko..illa en idupa suthi kaiya vechuko...ethaavthu onna seekaram pannu..

r:athalam venam...naan handleaye pidichukaren..

k:appa...vandi kilambathu..

r:nee iruka paaru...

r placed her hand around his waist...

k:raji...ithathan naanum ethir paarthen..

r:ippa santhosama..

k:romba romba..

r:seri vandiya edu..en chellam...

k starts his bike n drove happily with his love...

THE END..

WOW WOW! 👏👏

Super Update Bro... 😉

Shiny what a surprise two updates in one day :D romba nandri

super update shiny..thanks

Shinny sema update . New Year special still continue . Two updates in one day .
Thanks Shinny.
All problem solved .
Mind voices mind blowing .
But you surprised me with Madhavi! 😲
I always want Karthik to be like this especially during Susan saga.
Its like dream come true! 👍🏼
Sema dose to Kamal & Madhavi 👏
Pavam Meesai pa.
KR lovely , sweet, cute romance & very happy couple 😳 😉

Thanks again Shinny 😊

Awesome bro... 👏

Original dialogue vida mind voice superb 😆

Madhavi - Kamal nalla venum 😆

Karthi - raji bike ride 😳