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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
congo shongo rocker banne k khushi m
thanks for surprise 😃

mansi ..what a surprise yaar😊
Superb start 👏
kabir padhaku 🤣 chashmish 🤣 koi dost bhi nhi 🤣 imagine karna difficult hai 😆
nisha stylish college ki jaan oh my my
nisha ka bf h😔
ye drama reality m badlane ka time ho gya h 😉
abhay bichara 😆
iss update m nisha kuch jayada hi K hai 😆
loved it❤️

do update soon😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

koi baat nhi vanshu... i know this phone prblm for very long.. 😆 thank u


thanks nd congo fr becoming rockers.[<:P]
keeping rocking like this😉
i kn me bahut late hu bt kya kru my STML prob🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: naina.majik

congo shongo rocker banne k khushi m

thanks for surprise😃

mansi ..what a surprise yaar😊
Superb start👏
kabir padhaku🤣chashmish🤣koi dost bhi nhi🤣imagine karna difficult hai😆
nisha stylishcollege ki jaanoh my my
nisha ka bf h😔
ye drama reality m badlane ka time ho gya h😉
abhay bichara😆
iss update m nisha kuch jayada hi K hai😆
loved it❤️

do update soon😊

thanks nishi...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART- 2

Kabir was about to enter in his classroom when a pair of arms pulled him away. " ab kya h..." kabir knew who it was. " mere sath chalo" she said beaming. " nisha... u know ye last sem h... ur bhot crucial h... mjhe class attend karni h.." he said stricly. " tmne promise kia tha tum act karoge" she pouted cutely. "pls na kabir... dekho itni gorgeous ladki tmhe mna rhi h ur tum ho ki itna bhaw kha rhe ho" she said. Kabir looked at her raising an eyebrow with so what wala look when she made a baby face at him. "achha thik h chalo... kha chalna h" kabir sighed. " disc" she clapped. "WHAT" he shouted. "nisha tmhara dimag thik h na... mai ur disc..." he said. "chalo na pls... vo abhay bhi gya h vha ur baki friends bhi h ur mai apne bf k bina kaise jau" she said. " nisha... pls yaar tmhe pta h na mai nhi jaunga disc... khi ur bula lo mai chalunga..." he said not wanting to disappoint her more. She made a crying face when he glared at her. "achha thik h... resort to chal sakte h na..." she asked. Kabir nodded hesitantly. It's been a week since they were pretending to be together but kabir never let nisha invade his space and nisha always felt a kind of mystery in him. So she decided to at least initiate a talk with him. They reached to a resort which was somewhat secluded at the point of time. they sat on a table and waited for her freinds to come. "kha h tmhare dost nisha... ek to tmne meri cls miss karwa di upar se yha baitha rkha h" he said. " kyu mai bhi to hu na... mai achhi nhi lagti na tmhe bilkul bhi..." she said. "maine esa kab kha" he said. " matlab to yhi tha nA..." she said with a sad face. "nisha tmhe esa kyu lagta h..." he asked. "kyuki tum mjhse baat hi nhi karte ho... mai koi rakshas hu jo tmhe kha jaungi..." she pouted. " nhi koi rakshas nhi ho... mai tmse kya kisi se bhi baat nhi karta.." he said. "kyu... apne dosto se baat nhi karte ho" she asked. "mera koi dost nhi h..." he shrugged his shoulders. Nisha looked at him amazed... how can he be so lonely. "jhoot mat bolo tmhare dost hai" she said. "are... mai kyu jhooth bolu..." he said. "kyu mai nhi hu tmhari dost..." she said with so much of genuineness in her voice that kabir couldnt help but admire her some more. "ha jabardasti wali" he said. " dekha... maine kha tha na tumhe mai bilkul achhi nhi lagti... dekho bol hi dia na tmne" it looked like she will cry any minute. " are yaar... achha sorry... thik h mai tmse baat kar rha hu... abhi khush?" he said. She smiled and then started her rapid fire on him asking various questions. Kabir was amused seeing such a bubbly girl in front of him. She wasnt like this in clg... she was that arrogant snub who will rule around and not this chirpy self. Nisha didnt know why she wanted to know him thoroughly. It was so much fun talking to him.


"bus nisha ur koi question nhi ab pls... itte questions to maine kabhi exam m bhi ans nhi kie h...ur tmhare dost kha h abhi tak aae kyu nhi" he asked trying to find some escape from her never ending session. " are ha mai to bhool hi gyi... let me call them" she picked her phone and dialled some no. kabir took a sigh of relief as she was busy on the phone. "itna to mai kabhi apni poori zindgi m nhi bola hu jitna isne aaj hi bulwa lia" he thought when she turned to him. " mjhe nhi lagta vo log aaenge ab... traffic m h... chalo hm log chalte h... Wha ek bhot cute si place h" she pulled him with her and he followed her with no further arguments. She took him to a small hilly place with a shallow valley. They sat there as nisha looked at the peaceful scene around her.


" sunder h na..." she asked.

"ha... par artificial h..." kabir replied.

" to kya hua... matlab to khoobsurti se h... asli nakli se nhi..." she said looking at some distance.

" ye kisne kha nisha... banawati cheeje ha kuch der k lie achhi lag sakti h... par vo hmesha nhi rehti..." he said.

" matlab" she asked.

" agar tum vo nhi ho jo dikhana chahti ho... to koi na koi tmhe pechan hi lega... and the day u will see urself in the true light... in sab m sabse khoobsurat tum khud ko paogi..." he said.


Nisha turned and peeped in his eyes finding answer of what he just said. Something was hidden... hidden behind his words.

"m i artificial" she asked straight.

" iska jawab mai nhi tum khud dogi..." he got up and extended his hand for her while she still looked at him with question.

"chalo nisha... andhera ho gya h... chalo mai tmhe ghar chhod du" he signalled her to come. She slided her hand in his and got up too. He dropped her home and went away to his. The whole night she kept wondering about herself, finally when there came no answer she let the sleep invade her.


Nisha was roaming around the clg when she found him in the library. "pta tha mjhe ye yhi milega... ur isse mai expect bhi kya karu..." she sighed and entered ignoring those surprised glares from the students and the staff. Kabir was standing at the last corner of the book shelf... curiously reading a book.

"kabirrr" he heard this much when she tripped on something and landed straight on him.

"kya nisha... kabhi aaram se nhi mil sakti ho na... ya to mjhe girati ho ya khud mjhpe gir jati ho..." he said. "sorry na..." she said and tried to get up when she threw herself back on him. "waise... mjhe nhi pta tha itni boring jagah m bhi romance ho sakta h" she smiled mischeviously as kabir looked at her with fear. She neared herself to him and glanced at his lips once and then winked at him making him gasp. He immedialty rolled over trapping her beneath him. "tum paagal ho???" he asked. "koi shaq h" she replied. "bilkul bhi nhi" he sat straight as she laughed out loud.

"silence" came a voice and kabir immediately covered her mouth with his hand. "tum mera library m aana band karwaogi" he said. "ha ha... bhot dukh hoga na tumhe... tmhari fav place jo h..." she rolled her eyes. "nhi... ye meri fav place nhi h..." he said. She immediately looked at him with curiousity and kabir knew he did a mistake. She smiled cutely at him. " ha baba... le chalunga tmhe" he helped her in getting up and she hugged him tight. "samjhne lage ho mjhe" her tone was different... this is not that chirpy girl... she was something else... a feeling of affection reflecting in it. He wanted to hug her back... but the thought of what started this... how she just randomly picked him up that too only for some time made him push her apart. " chalo bhot hua... aaj class h ur mai class miss nhi karunga..." he turned and was about to leave when she held his hand. "sath m chalen?" she asked. He nodded and they left making people around them gossiping about them.

Nisha didn't knew what was happening to her. All of a sudden she has started to act different or say act normal. Suddenly kabir had taken up almost all the space in her day. she would eagerly wait to see him, irritate him... she love it when he frown at her... how much he had pushed her away he never harmed her or tried to take advantage of the situation. She would talk to him endlessly or would just sit with him in pure silence.


Kabir was in a dilemma his heart was saying she is what she is with him... not what he had seen her to be all these years. But his mind was reluctant in believing it. What if it was just for her fun. Kabir didnt knew why he open up to her so much. One question from her and he would open himself in front of her like a book. The way she would touch his heart with little sweet things made him melt for her.


"kabir this is too much yaar... now u r clearly not fulfilling ur promise" she folded her hands on her chest. " ab kya kia maine..." he asked. " where is ur fav place" she asked. "not again nisha..." he said. "mjhe jana h abhi..." she stamped her foot so hard that it broke her heel spraining her ankle in the process. She fall down on the ground crying out in pain. "nishaaa..." he squealed and took her in his arm still sitting. "kya paagalpan h... kitni ziddi ho" he hissed. She looked at him with tears rolling down. The tears wasn't of physical pain... there was hurt in her eyes... Yes she was hurt... hurt because he didnt wanted to share his secret with her... hurt because she felt a bitterness in his voice... hurt because she didn't knew if he still dislike her. Kabir can sense it... sense her questions... Her hurt.


"bhot dard h...?" he asked. "bhot..." she replied and pulled her leg away as he tried to touch it. "let me see nisha" he said. "koi jarurat nhi h..." she said pulling herself away from him. Suddenly his heart thudded... it screamed to stop her... the thought she was upset moreover sad because of him stabbed him right there. He pulled her back in his embrace. "naaraj h...?" he asked. She didn't said anything nor she hugged him back. she wanted to after all this was the first time in 4 weeks he had hugged her without any second thought but the pain was too much. "bol na nisha..." he asked again. She nodded in a yes. "bura lga...?" he asked again. She nodded this time too. " sorry... mai tjhe lekar chalunga pakka... chhipana nhi chahta tha... bus socha tjhe achha nhi lgega" he replied. Her hurt flew away at the naiveness of his voice. She smiled. He could feel her relaxed feature in his arm. he freed her and looked at her ankle which was swollen badly. He removed her sandals and touched it lightly. She winced in pain. " ghar le chalu...?" he asked as she nodded. He picked her up in his arms as she clutched on his tee tightly carrying her to his bike and took her to her house. "mai le chalu?" he picked her up again and took her to her room making her lie down. "aunty nhi h...?" he asked. "out of city" she informed. "hmmm..." he asked her where the kitchen is. Soon he was back with the ice and a first aid box. " ye kha se mila..." she asked. " kitchen m se" he said placing ice on her ankle. She admired him as he tended her with so much of care. "ho gya..." he said once he was done bandaging her foot. She smiled. " chup kyu h... aaj motor m petrol nhi daala kya... waise to itna bolti h... aaj kya hua" he asked. "kuch nhi...hm kab jaenge" she asked. "he bhagwan... kya ladki h... kal le jaunga meri maa... pakka" he folded his hands in front of her while she giggled. He too smiled and left for his home soon after.


Next day nisha was all set to go to the clg when she received a call making her upset. Her dad has asked her to go to a place which will take almost entire day of hers. She msged her friends and not to forget kabir about it.


All day long she was in a really bad mood... angry on her father. She missed her clg... actually missed kabir. Here first time in his life kabir wasn't able to concentrate in his class. He was worried about her. he thought to msg her but then dropped the idea.


It was almost evening when nisha came back to her home and the first thing she did was to call kabir. Kabir picked up his phone when someone started shouting on him from the other side.


" kabirrr... u duffer idiot donkey monkey... sharam nhi aati na tjhe thodi si bhi"


He wanted to laugh out loud but controlled.


" kya hua... kya kia maine"


"kya kia... u r such a... kal mere chot lagi thi yaad h ki bhool gya... ek baar pure din m pucha bhi nhi ki kaisi hu... fracture ho gya hota mere to... ur lag jati to... khi gir jati to..."


"to mere puchne se thik ho jati?"


" arghhh... jao mjhe baat hi nhi karni tmse" she was about to throw her phone when he called her.


"sorry nisha... dekh mai tjhe msg karne hi wala tha par fir socha disturb ho jaegi isilie nhi kia..."


She smiled and he can feel it.


" thik h... to as a compensation take me to ur fav place"


"nisha... hm is time vha nhi jaa sakte..."


"mjhe nhi pta... mjhe abhi k abhi jana h... 5 min. N u should be here" saying so she cut the call without listening him further.


After almost half an hour they both were standing in front of a graveyard. Nisha looked at the gate then at kabir and hide behind him. Kabir giggled. " bola tha na... not a good idea" kabir gripped her hand which was clinging on his arm. " waapas chale?" he asked. "nhi... Mjhe dekhna h ye tmhari fav kyu h..." she said. Kabir wanted to adore her... to hug her right now... no one ever has given his interest so much of importance. "chalo..." he smiled and held her hand firmly. It wasn't completely black but dark enough to scare her wits.


They walked inside crossing all the way... they can see some people there paying a visit to their loved ones when he stopped. She looked at him confused when he asked her to see in front of her. A beautiful scene was in front of her... a valley with a small lake... sun setting down... its rays scattered in water reflecting itself. The birds returning to their home... their chirpy voices... all over the place, small flowers swaying in the wind... spreading smiles around. A smile crept on her lips as she came in front of him. He made her sit on a bench and sat beside her. "ab darr lag rha h?" he asked. "nhi..." she replied "mjhe nhi pta tha yha itni khoobsurat jagah h..." she said. " tum yha kyu aate ho..." she asked. "yuhin... kabhi kabhi jab sab cheejo se bhagne ka man karta h to yha aa jata hu" he said. "tum kisse bhagte ho..." she asked. " bhot si cheejo se... khud se... lgo se... apni kamio se..." he shrugged his shoulders. " kami...?" she asked. " ha... kyu tmhe mjhme koi kami nhi lagti" he asked and she nodded in a no. " par hai to... dekho mai tmhare dosto jaisa nhi hu... actually to mera koi dost hi nhi... sab matlab k hi h... jab matlab poora ho jata h to mjhe bhool jate h... mjhe aadat ho gyi h... par kabhi kabhi bhot bura lagta h... bhot dard bhi hota h ur gussa bhi aata h... tab yha aa jata hu" he said. " mai bhi matlab ki dost hu?" she asked. He smiled " iska ans tmhe dena chahie..." he said. She kept looking at him. "agar hoti to mai tmhe yha nhi laata" he whispered. She leaned on his shoulder and smiled.





Edited by mansi_as18 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
res
unres
wifey I just love you writing yaar
how do you manage to write so beautifully
the only word I can say is flawless
u r a perfectionist
the dialogs were amazing
I was smiling all the time while reading it
continue soon
Edited by crazyvaishu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Sach main bohut dard hota hai jab log sirf matlab ke liye dost banate hai... Next part soon please 😊
Edited by Niya_789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Sach main bohut dard hota hai jab log sirf matlab ke liye dost banate hai... Next part soon please😊

pta h bhabhi... bhot jhela h... khair chhodo... next part iska mil jaega jab mjhe time milega 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Res 😆 kal mera exam hai aur main tumhari story padhne aayi hun to relax myself 😆
I hope I unres it soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
wow
awsum
superb
loved k nisha
she is totally opposite.
n d phrase-"pta tha mjhe ye yhi milega... ur isse mai expect bhi kya karu..." she sighed and entered ignoring those surprised glares from the students and the staff.
was just superb.
kabir starting feeling for nisha.
update nxt part soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Dat was a beautiful update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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