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I luved it yaar... awesome. .. now m angry on myself why didn't I read it before... par update soon ha
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

I luved it yaar... awesome. .. now m angry on myself why didn't I read it before... par update soon ha

thanks mansi ur review means a lot to me...
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Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

thanks mansi ur review means a lot to me...

awww sathak... thank you yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10
Kabir went near nisha and sat adjacent to her...
Nisha- kabir yaha se uth jaa yaha par jwalu baithegi...
K- par jwala toh kahi aur bhi baith sakti ...hai...
N- kabir tu uth tha hai ya...
Shanaya-kabir tum hamare pass baith jao...aakhir him toh tumhare special guests...hai naa...
K-sure...
Sukku(in his mind)- yaar iss kabir ne toh teen mai se ek bhi mere liye nahi chodi...aaj toh nishu iski pitayi karegi tabhi sudherga...
Umesh- guys hum log kuch game khele...
Dolly- passing the parcel..kaisa rahega
All others - maja ayega...
Bunty decided to be the judge and took sukkus mobile to play the song...first round began...


Aa Dekhe Jara Kisame Kitana Hai Dum
Jamake Rakhana Kadam Mere Saathiya... (2)

Aage Nikal Aaye Hum Woh Pichhe Rah Gaye
Upar Chale Aaye Hum Woh Niche Rah Gaye... (2)
You Can Never Stop Us, Never Break Us Down
B'z I Have You Beside Me,

Aa Dekhe Jara Kisame Kitana Hai Dum
Jamake Rakhana Kadam Mere Saathiya... (2)
Life Is Light, Life Is Flash
Thodi Thodi Slow, Aur Haan Thodi Hai Rush
Inn Raahon Mein Hai Khatara Bada
Kya Hona Hai Aage Aa Dekhe Jara

Ssaare Shehar Mein Hami Hai, Ham Sa Kaun Hai
Dekho Idhar Hum Yahin Hai ..music stopped... The parcel was in kabirs hand...
Kabir- ab mujhe kya karna padega...?
Jwala - jiju box mai se chit toh select karo...
Kabir-okkk...
"Couple dance"...
Kabir-ab mera partner kaun banega and looked towards nisha...
Kabir ( monologue- ab dekhna kis tarah nisha sabse pehle aayegi and then our romantic dance...u r smart kabir..😉..
But the look that nisha gave ..was enough to scare kabir ...
Bunty- nishu di aap nahi Kar rahi dance..
Nisha- mujhe kisi chimpanzee ke sath dance Karne mai koi interest nahi hai...
All laughed at this...
Kirti was about to stand to become kabirs partner...but nisha grabbed her hand tightly...
Nisha- kabir ko toh chod de kirti..
Kirti- nisha dance hi toh hai...how blah.. U r being very possessive...their silent talks were interrupted by shanaya's voice..
Shanaya - I don't have any problem...I wud love to be kabirs dance partner...
Kabir(in his mind - yeh toh piche hi padh gayi...tu toh gaya kabire)...
He moved forward..sukku played the song...
Bhaiya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana ...
All laughed..
Shanaya- oh stop it yaar ...but BTW nice joke...
Riya - 8:30 baj gaye hai ab hame chalna chahiye
Shanya - okk thanks kabir.. For the party ..saying this she placed a peck on his cheek and they left...
Kabir and all were left dumbstruck by the kiss...
Kabir ( monologue - kyon itna risk liya kabire..tune socha tha nisha ko toda sa jalayega...
Par yeh shanya toh pura Lanka dahan Kar ke chali gayi...)
He looked at nisha ..with a I don't know anything expression...
K - nisha woh...Maine kuch nahi kiya...
Nisha - ( fuming in anger)... - hadd hai kabir har cheez ki limit hoti hai...and she left..
K- nisha sun toh...
Aman- kabir tum yahi ruko mai usse samjha ke laati hun...
Kabir noticed all others were staring at him...
K - kya yaar guys I swear yeh kiss waali baat mai meri koi galti nahi thi...
Sukku- abbey kabir 3 mai se ek toh meri liye chod deta...
Dolly- sukku toh pehle decide Kar le tuh kabir pe kisliye gussa hai...
Saurav- kaha tha na kabir ab nisha ko Kaise manayega...
Umesh - idea ...
On the other hand
Aman saw nisha was sitting with tears in her eyes..
Aman - nisha Jane dena mazak hi toh tha...
Nisha - aap hi batao agar umesh Bhaiya aisa karte toh aap Jane deti..
This made aman blank...
Suddenly they heard kabirs voice..aaah...
Aman- dekhte hai kya hua...??
Nisha - kuch nahi pagal ki tarah chilla raha hai...
Jwala and Bunty came running to them...
Bunty- nishu di nishu do..woh..kabir jiju ko...
Nisha - kya hua bolna
Jwala - (in a crying voice)...- nishu bro kabir jiju lete lete hum se baat Kar rahe the...tabhi unhe neck par saap ne kaat liya ...
Nisha - kya ...and with all her might she ran towards their party location...
N- kabir...
She saw everybody was surrounding kabir who was lying unconscious..
...and saurav was calling ambulance...
Nisha went and sat adjacent to kabir holding his hand and cried..
Nisha - kabir tujhe kuch nahi hoga ...
Suddenly within a fraction of second.. Kabir opened his eyes and pulled nisha on him...nisha - tuh theek hai ..
Kabir - ssh and placed a finger on her lips...
Itna aasan nahi hai mujse picha chudana ...
I know nisha Maine galti ki hai...ek chota sa joke tha par mai...limits cross Kar gaya...par tuh mujhse naraz hokar aise dur mat jaya Kar kyon ki..tuh meri sanse hai nisha tuh hi meri zindagi hai...koi bhi insaan apne sansoon ke bina do minute bhi nahi reh sakta...aur tujhe mujhse dur gaye toh pure 9 minute ho gaye the...I love u..
I love u so much...u r my life nisha...
Nisha had a. Smile on her face they had a intense eyelock ..kabir moved nisha's hair fro her face ,moved forward and closed his eyes their lips met and they were passionately kissing each other...their kiss was broken by a voice...
Jwala and Bunty..- sukku Bhaiya chodo apne hamari aankhon pe hath kyon rakh rakha hai...
Sukku - taaki tum U/A category wale log yeh A certificate waali movie nahi dekh sako ...
All laughed.. Kabir smiled naughtily towards nisha...
Suddenly nisha punched kabir ..
Nisha - idiot duffer ...aisa Karne ki himmat kaisi hui Teri meri jaan hi nikal di thi...manane Ka aur koi tarika nahi mila tha kya... Aur tum sab ghado ne bhi iske stupid se plan mai iska sath diya...Teri himmat kaisi hui kisi aur Ladki se flirt Karne ki and started hitting kabir badly...
Kabir - maaregi kya ..am sorry and he hugged her tight ..
All coughed and nisha and kabir broke their hug and parted ...to stand...
Dolly- how romantics kabir...
Bunty- chalo na ab kuch khate hai bahut bhug lagi hai...
Saurabh- sahi kaha Bunty..
Aman- mai abhi snacks nikal ti hun..
Kabir brought his bag ..and took out a tiffin .. He went near nisha...
K - nisha Maine tere liye apne hatho se pulao banaya hai ek baar try karna..
Nisha- thanks.. I love u...par tune ye kab kiya...
Kabir- aane se thodi der pehle internet par recipe dekh Kar banaya...
Jwala- soo cute..jiju..
Nisha - jiju ki chamchi kahi ki..
Kabir tuh sure hai naa mujhe hospital jaane ki jarurat nahi padegi isse khane ke baad..
All laughed..
Kabir - don't worry tere halwe se toh way better hoga...
Everybody laughed harder..
Nisha - kabir Teri toh and started to hit him..
Kabir ran and nisha ran behind him...suddenly nisha's leg slipped and she fall into kabir's arms..and they had a eyelock...
Saurabh- guys tum log kahin par bhi shuru ho jaate ho...
Nisha blushed at saurabh's comment.. They moved forward and sat with them ...they had a gala time together ..enjoying the food..
Nisha - kabir pulao galti se bahut acche bane hai..thank u..
Kabir - wifey meri toh baat hi alag hai...
Jwala noticed somebody about 50-60 metres away from them and she screamed..
J- Bh ..BH..
..bhoot
Everybody turned towards the place where jwala was seeing..and the sight left them in horror...
To be contd



Edited by Sarthak0302 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res...unres
what a amazing update yaar🤣 🤣 ...sukku ko ek bhi nhi mili [=)]..Bhaiya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana ...lol 😆 🤣...shanaya kissed kabir 😡...yeh to puri Lanka ka dahan kar ke chali gayi...🤣 Sukku - taaki tum U/A category wale log yeh A certificate waali movie nahi dekh sako...🤣 amazing yaar 🤣 🤣 bhoot????😕 curious to know what happens😃
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG sab ke samne kissy kissy☺️
tum U/A category wale log yeh A certificate waali movie nahi dekh sako ...☺️🤣🤣LOl saurav

Kabir ne Nisha keliye pulav banaya how sweet
Nibir tho ek bhi mauka nahi chod rahi hai romance karne ka😳
shanaya ne kabiraa ko kiss kiya😡 how dare she🤣
Bhaiya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana ...this was damm funny🤣 LOL mishri frndshipday segment ki yaad aayi🤣
bechara sukku ek bhi nahi mila theeno main se🤣
romantic os achanake se horror kaisa ban gaya😆
waitng 4 the nxt part
update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu4u

OMG sab ke samne kissy kissy☺️

tum U/A category wale log yeh A certificate waali movie nahi dekh sako ...☺️🤣🤣LOl saurav

Kabir ne Nisha keliye pulav banaya how sweet
Nibir tho ek bhi mauka nahi chod rahi hai romance karne ka😳
shanaya ne kabiraa ko kiss kiya😡 how dare she🤣
Bhaiya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana ...this was damm funny🤣 LOL mishri frndshipday segment ki yaad aayi🤣
bechara sukku ek bhi nahi mila theeno main se🤣
romantic os achanake se horror kaisa ban gaya😆
waitng 4 the nxt part
update soon

thanks...n ya..bahut hi bada twist aane wala hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

thanks...n ya..bahut hi bada twist aane wala hai...

twist😉😉
singam pakad tho nahi lega na😆😆
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

twist😉😉

singam pakad tho nahi lega na😆😆

aage aage dekhte hai hota hai kya...😊

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