AvNeil RS : FALL IN LOVE, TRY thread2 (NOW COMPLETE) - Page 46

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Posted: 7 years ago
I woke up with an update and came to office to read the entire update. I don't comment frequent but since this is last, I'll have to put it down.
The whole story with 50chapters amazingly written. It's not easy, but you kept it going and you did splendid job. Initially I didn't like the idea of you relating to real situations but after sometime I fell in love with it. Your adaptation of real situations were just flawless. Very well thought and even beautifully executed. The way the whole story was carried through the 50 chapters just made me cry, laugh and stressed that when will you update next. Sometimes I would feel kash yeh real hota, the shipper side in me awaken nevertheless I will brush it off so I don't have high hopes.

In a nutshell, amazing work and keep writing. All the best



In this update there were some parts mentioned as Adiza, Zain and Aditi. Was that intentional?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey cutie pie.
Can't digest one fact that it's the end but if you have exams then concentrate on it as nothing is important than ur carrier. Also best of luck for ur exams and do well .
We all adiza shippers could connect with this story too well cos this is what we all want. Last chapter was too much rush we didn't see the SR properly and then comes the baby. They completed 6 years so soon and here comes second baby as a surprise. Khair I can understand ur situation ending one of ur dream project with so much rush is very hard but need to do it at some moment.
Bg the way ur dream is our dream to . We also want to see the post stating that they are married for real with each other . We will wait for that day.
Pls don't stop coming to the forum and at least connect with us with some or the other way as I will personally miss u a lot . U are the only friend of mine in this forum since the time I came.
And last but not the least miss this Ff a lot.

With lots of hugs and love and kisses.

Nidhi.🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Not an AdiZa shipper but thoroughly enjoyed this story! Loved that AvNeil were in character inspite of the pace of the updates! Some real nice touches - Ishika not revealing she is Saba, Abhi-Noor not happening (have to admit I was hoping it would!), Avni's dad not forgiving her, Neil's parents taking some time to accept Avni.. 👏

Good Luck with your exams!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dearest Sanju di,
So here I am keeping my promise.😊I know it's little early as I told I would do this after my exams but actually I have some other plans after my exams which need to be done before going to college so I won't get time even then. One of my real life friends told me that you are done with your last chapter so I thought I will give a read to all of them and finally will block IF.
So first of all coming to the story
A very big hug and lots of congrats for a successful ff which is very close to u🤗. U literally brought tears in my eyes coz u just brought back some good old memories of mine which are few but I cherish them a lot. My eyes just became numb. Reminisced some really very beautiful memories. This one story has rendered me speechless and this is happening after a very long time. I am a person who finds an opinion for every book I read and about every author. But this time I have no opinion coz you have really left me speechless. So u r one author who has left me speechless after JK Rowling and Enid Blyton. So now u r added to my list of favourite authors👏. ⭐️Keep writing bcuz u write things with an amazing ability to send your readers to a dreamland. Needless to say u even sent me to a beautiful dreamworld where I don't want to go and I hesitate even in thinking about it(U know why) but I did today😳.
The only thing I would like to mention is I would have chosen my family if I were there coz I am the only child of my parents and I will never leave their side in any circumstances. They need me as long as they are in the world and I would be there for them. They were with me always and I will be with them on every step of my life and their life. And I also loved the last line of the last chapter. U never expect love to happen but when it happens it just happens, what to do, just can't help it. It's very lucky to have someone in life who loves you as much as you love them coz one sided love is always very heart breaking💔 and u just can't let go at times but still life has to go on and on and on and we have to move on bcuz life can't stop for that one person.🥺
Anyways, u have done an awesome piece of work and have added a feather to your beautiful writing.👏⭐️
So I thought to finish this job first because I am trying to format my memories. Just keep writing and go with the flow. It will make you a perfectionist. U already are.
There was everything in this story. Love(from which I want to stay away😆), humour, emotions. It's not easy to keep on going but u have done it. It was stupendously fabulous, adorable, awesome, magical and now I don't have much words to express my gratitude for such a wonderful ff. Keep working the way you are. U will become an amazing author. This is just the initial phase. U have a long way to go.
Coming to virtual world
So now I have finally prepared myself and have made my mind to leave IF. Deleting my account was not possible so I have decided to block IF and I am having some ways to do that through my IP address. This is just my effort so that my brain does not give me triggers again to come back here😳. Or I will end up being here life long😛 coz now I feel it's time for me to leave this place(trying to move on from past). So I know I will miss u a lot and my little family here but what to do. I am no more a fan of avneil, neither I belong to NK fandom anymore nor I admire aditi and zain and I am no more their fan. So u see lost my reasons for coming here. U were one reason and u won't be here so I am also giving up forever. Whenever u feel like talking to me or contacting me, Safana di is there or else Safia di, Puja ji, Avni di or Rima di(I think u don't know her). Contact me through them bcuz they always stay in touch with me through mail or else u have my email id so if u like it then u can talk through it(waiting for u). 🤗I will be always there for u. Just remember me once whenever u need me, I will be there for u.😳
Would u like to have some orange flavoured chocolate?😆Ignore just kidding😆😳. Since your exams are approaching take care of your health and don't stress.
All the very best for your coming years and your future. I pray to god for your happiness and a very successful career. Take care of your health and your family. My all love and my heart is with you. Take care of your family and all your dear ones.
Much Love from this little child😉😃
Aditi / Adu / Wings Of Fire.🤗❤️

Edited by -WingsOfFire- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I have read all the parts now. Amazing story and I look forward to the next chapter. 👏
All the best for ur exams.👍🏼
Edited by sugar_candy15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dear Sanju. I have been a silent reader n u know what I admire ur imagination n writing skills.i usually don't read ff's on actors but here I couldn't resist myself from reading this. I felt as if all these happened in real. I used to eagerly wait for ur updates. While reading the chapters I always read it slowly coz I didnt want it to end..this was really an amazing piece of work!!! Thank u once more for this wonderful story n all the best for ur exams ...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Sanju are you writing 12th exams . All the best . Rock it .
I dunno what to say . This story is a full journey of a couple from strangers to friends to best friends to soulmate to married couple. A wholesome story which shows the beautiful journey of AvNeil and their perfect family . Last chapter was a perfect end to it showing how they worked out their relationship and with their family and friends . How their once dream came true of having a family together with kids . Adil and Zia. Beautiful names . I felt myself floating in the story travelling along with AdiZa. Last part definitely gave me total AdiZa feels . Even you couldn't stop yourself from writing Aditi and Zain in many lines . Adi and Zii 😆 so cute ! Neil fearing of losing her when she had complications in her pregnancy was so real and him caressing her wound . Total couple goals . I could imagine Aditi and Zain doing all that .

Noor 😆 Abhi must have found her as a unique piece without any substitute. I saw myself in her not her intelligence but her bonding with Abhi.

Again to say you rarely forget things . You included chocolate bond too 😆 BTW her idea to share the news was brilliant.

If you have time do write the parts you have in your mind like AvNeil reminiscing their moments . This story is special to me too as I never read AdiZa fanfictions. It made me dream about them together even if they aren't in real world. I can imagine AdiZa with Adil and Zia 😳 it's so real .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you Sanju for this! Cheers to this brilliant piece of work .
I have waited eagerly for your updates ,have laughed and cried too and... I shall carry this FF forever in my heart.All the very best for your exams.I know you will kill it .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mid march mid March chilati rehti thi na...So here is it..
Unres ko res karlete yaar abhi tak...par koi nahi...
Thank you soo much guys for such lovely comments.. reviews... They really mean a lot to me..
I'm sorry individually reply nahi karsakti abhi...
But yes, I'll try to write on the scenes i mentioned..
No, I'm in un second yr...so not 12th board...hihi
Nope.. mentioning of the names isn't intentional...bas flow mein aise likhdi...
Acha..Naye naam bhi manzoor hai...Anju bhi chalega...Riya bhi... Bas aap Ri se puchlo..unko koi problem toh nahi...haha..
Thank you for all the wishes..🤗
Love!
Tc guys.

Edited by ...SA... - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omggg I was waiting for updates on the thread since the 25th of Feb and today I finally decided to see if you had written anything about quitting the story or something because of exams and that's when I found this thread!! God, if I had known 😭 but thankfully I've found this and now I'm gonna read chapter 37 onwards in one go 😆

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