AvNeil RS : FALL IN LOVE, TRY thread2 (NOW COMPLETE) - Page 44

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Posted: 7 years ago
Haila double update.
Ab mera satisfaction gaya tel lene. Ab or control nahi ho raha . I am dancing like a mad.
Shaadi bhi ho gayi . Ab SR ki baari hai😳. But I know the babies are Sharif they will not do anything.😡
He was worried for the chunri and the flowers in her bun. So caring husband he is. That's why we love him so much.😛
Waise tumne mujhe PM me to add kiya hi nahi hai😭 to main chutungi kaise mujhe to tumhara update paane ke liye forum ko hi stalk karna padta hai.😕
Thank you very much sanju for completing the chapter.
And congrats for the half century of fall in love.
Lots of love and jhappie 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg sanju they got Married I am super happy Congratulations Mr and Mrs Khanna/Imam whatever 😉
Loved it 👏 congratulations on completing 50 Chapters
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I sensing another love story 😳 , super happy for them coming back to AvNeil I loved it how caring Neil was and i felt a little strange but again he is close to family so I understand why he felt very emotional thinking Avni chose him over her family and it might have been difficult for him to do the same but I am just happy that they both have found there happy place just hope her father comes around and understand there relationship 😊

Thanks for the update
Much love
Safia
Edited by Shaiksafia - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

44: awesome sanju baby loved how it had been a month since avneil had moved in now and now they were meeting the hum gang ... Loved how all were teasing avneil that bought a smile on my face... haha thank god dolly wasn't there otherwise neil wouldn't have been spareed,... loved how dd and riya were showing of their dance moves and they were actually enjoying avni company... I wonder what avni was thinking about and neil knew she wont tell him clearly...I liked how mithali told neil about the new project and how both he and avni can give it a try...loved how avni had decided to take neil for a fish pedicure and they had fun while neil took avni to a Rajasthani restaurant...yay finally both of them were selected for the lead role... loved how avni came out wearing the kurti that neils mom gave... haha I loved how neil also came out wearing the pathani that his mom gave and both of them took a picture...loved how they cherished all their fans gift,,,loved how neil had added the pictures which he saw at avni house for the first time...haha loved how neil had learnt to make roti without no butter...liked how when he saw his family pics and when he asked avni where she got that from she didn't tell him..haha the way u described the way avni prays made me laugh it was cute and funny at the same time...loved neil reaction when he found out avni never tried snow gola and how he took her out and made her try it... loved how she was sitting on the car bonnet while crossing her legs and neil stood in front of her... Haha avni loved the gola so much that she took neil... haha neil is so naughty...loved how avni likes that neil tries to spend time with everyone...and loved how he loves sleeping on her lap while she caresses his hair...loved neil scene with sid and teni...loved how when neil was on the way back home he tried to call to ask if she wanted to be picked up but no answer... loved how he was getting worried but finally the door bell rang and he saw avni and knew she looked different... omg did avni faint

45 I actually loved it sanju baby although I was shocked the avni was drunk... loved neil reaction when he got to know avni came in the cab.. I loved how he was angry but he also cared for avni and he loves her be it he doesn't like those who drink he still wants to give her space and let her live the way she wants to...I liked how when avni kept asking neil if he hates her and how he said ...I don't know avni...ki mai tumhe kaise samjhau... don't you trust me? Haan mujeh gussa aaya...you could have called me..cab mein avni? Tumhe idea bhi hai ki kya..."he stops mid way and sighs..."i love you avni... Mujeh laga ki tum uss baat ko bhool gayi...you told me that we were fine right? That we are over that? Phir kyu laga tumhe aisa? Pagal ho tum...what ever it is.. it's my problem...so stop worrying about it...n jo bhi ho.. i just can't stop loving you... shayad tumhe ye sab kal yaad bhi na rahe...tum jo chahe woh baat bhool jao...but...just remember one thing...I LOVE YOU... And this will never change... When neil left avni cried I liked how she trusts neil the most but im thinking did avni actually drink or was she acting... I loved how she went to neil room and crawls into the bed beside him resting her head on his shoulder and how she broke down while neil pulled her by her waist close to him and how she said sorry which he replied with a love u.

46:so avni was acting and neil realised it all thanks for clearing the doubt... loved how when neil had said love u avni cried even more... loved how neil turned towards her while she buried her face in his tee shirt... loved how when he said "I thought you trust me avni while caressing her back...and loved how avni said kudh se zyaada barosa karti hu tumpe...ok forgive me I have to copy this whole part because I just loved everything that neil said "I told you already... just trust me avni...we aren't hero and heroine of some shitty abusive relationships and disfunctional families kind of stories avni...this is our life...where there is no place for insecurities... because we decide what we want ... right?.. I'll give my everything to this relationship..to us... I'll never disappoint you avi...just trust me.."he says cupping her face with his one hand. "Avni... i know you are emotional now...but i have seen a strong woman..a fighter in you... you're very strong avni... fight your insecurities avni... I'm promise to love you the same way forever... humare beech mein koi nahi aayega... situations bhi nahi...i told you na...agar koi aayega toh dhakke maar ke bahar nikaldunga mai...and I'm not saying this just like that...i mean it.. i mean every word... Just fight them for me..."hayee loved it when neil said to avni I'm very selfish..about you!... I'm very selfish..about you! While avni was in a deep sleep she mumbles a hmm which made neil chuckle...yay so finally noor met neil glad how they clicked instantly...liked how u mentioned about the certain things they hate about each other and also loved how they became the regular customers for the gola person and he would wait for avneil even if they were late...oh wow loved how their new serial set was actually hum set as it would have bought back a lot of memories for avneil...haha loved how dolly came to avneil house and how both were surprised to see her... haha I just loved how dolly gave cold shoulders to neil while she was all warm with avni...haha loved how neil asked how she got the address and when dolly said "Tu baat mat kar mujhse...dhokebaaz aadmi! Tera woh dost...woh bandar hai na ...Abhi! ...woh mujhse kya chupa sakta hai bhala?."...loved how dolly and avni got along well...haha when avni had to go attend her cousin shaadi and neil asked loved how avni was like Noor ke chachi ke papa ke teesre bete ki chota bhai ke dadu ki behan ki bete wife ke sister in law ke brother ke beti ki shaadi.."... and loved neil reaction when he blinked his eyes twice before asking again to which avni says its her uncle daughter wedding... loved how neil rolled his eyes and said she could have said that in the first place awww poor babies missing each other... yay loved avni surprise where she booked a ticket to come back early in the morning...aww loved how when neil got back home he was surprised to see avni and how his eyes lit up seeing her...omg I cracked up when neil shouted no when avni was about to switch on the tv and she finally was able to switch it on when neil closed his eyes I was thinking as to y he was behaving like that but seem avni expression I understood lol ... Damn like neil even I was shocked when avni said shall we watch it together...haha neil was watching avni expression while avni was watching the tv loved how at the end avni looked everywhere except at neil,,, haha neil needed a shower again,...loved how avni was recalling the sounds from the movie and tried to ignore it while her hand reaches to her head

47 loved this part especially how things were going between avneik actually loved how they would have small arguments and all loved how neil decked up the living room to pacify avni... loved the promises they made to each other that was the cutest thing ever... loved how avni mentioned to neil that she loves him with the stubble and how she was been romantic with him... loved how avenil met Fatima every week and how she and avni had developed a close bond... awww poor neil was so stressed loved how he forwarded his hand and made avni sit resting his head on her lap and took her hand and placed it in his hair saying please while avni knew something was wrong... when avni got to know it was about the loss I felt sorry for both but loved how she stayed strong and was comforting him that everything will be ok soon... loved how the next day avni was going to have a shower but neil didn't want her to go as he wanted to sleep but like avneil even I was shocked when I saw neil family along with avni while abhi was also there

48 ufff this was a shock yaar the family reaction was just,.. I was shocked when neil got pushed but happy that his mom and avni held him on time ... damn things got worse between avni and ashish again but I was happy how avni chose neil... loved how abhi also hated neil bua and felt like kicking her out of the house... I actually was happy that neil family along with diksha was supportive for avneil while neil was surprised however I loved it when diksha said "mujeh bura iss baat ka laga ke avni ne mujhse ya baat chupaya...i have nothing against your love...bas ye baat mat bhul na...that you both are responsible for everything in your lives...you both are equals...ek dusre ke responsibility lene se mat bhaagna..."... Loved how neil hugged avni when she was crying and told her he is there...tbh im actually speechless with this chap as I loved it and it also made me emotional somewhere

49 UFFF LOVED this part sanju baby ... loved how ishika fought for anveil that was the best thing... I loved how neil was in the balcony and remembering avni words that she said to her dad and how he was thinking would he be able to stay without his family as he cant as he needs avni and his parents... loved how avni had hugged him from the back... aww im already in love with abhi and noo liked how abhi said avneil need some time to themselves now... hahha love abhi and noor khatta meetha convo.

50: congrats for 50 chapter babt loved this part .. but big jhappi to u... finally avneil r married... liked how neil had turned back to face avni and asked soyi nahi while pushing her hair back...awww liked how when neil looked at avni he got emotional with the way she was looking at him and loved how he pulled her close and kissed her forehead... I was actually in tears when avni broke down and how neil was saying "I love u avni...shh ek aasun bhi nahin...I cant see u like that...ill be whatever u want me to avni im your now and always...liked how they will give there 100% to their relation... loved how neil went to get a blanket from his room and thank god this time he locked the balcony door through the hall making sure the curtains were closed properly and went through the corner room...I loved how abhi and noor were watching out for avneil...I actually loved how he was caressing patterns on her arms while saying he will try to be the best husband... haha I kind of chuckled when neil said best father, son In law if your father stops been shakti kapoor in our lives,,,liked how noor came to wake up avneil in the morning... glad how avniel decided to invite Fatima...haha gd that abhi mentioned he should invite dolly...hehe now neil understood what it felt like watching his bride walking towards him...liked the scene between ishika and avni somewhere I wanted ishika to tell avni that she is saba but the reason u gave was amazing so finally ishika decided she wont reveal to avni that she is saba and this will remain a secret but I hope avni finds out in the future...everyone was going one by one haha I loved how abhi was telling noor indirectly but she wasn't understand so he had to be direct with her... loved how avni walked to the room and neil followed her... I loved neil care for avni when he saw her with so many flowers around her bun and helped her take the pins of loved how he also helped her take the ghoonghat which our neil babu calls a cloth...aww loved how neil started massaging avni neck and shoulder while avni enjoyed that...loved how they talked about what happened in the past few days but liked how neil didn't mention about avni dad as it will make her upset but hope somewhere ashish understands avni happiness is with neil...loved how avni pushes herself close to neil and puts his arm around hers and says "we r married neil...i cant believe we r married and loved how she held his hand close to her heart... do update soon sanju baby lots of love from your shona

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Posted: 7 years ago
Okay thank you soo much guys😭❤️
Individual replies soonish...

Now this is the inspiration...for that scene/seq
You can guess what it is .. right?


Maine chhode hain baaki saare raste
Bas aayi hoon tere paas re
Meri aankhon mein tera naam hai
Pehchaan le...

Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaungi kabhi tujhe chhod ke
Ye jaan le...
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Posted: 7 years ago
I could understand your feelings when you have written this part. It's such overwhelming . They are officially married . It's just like a dream . I can only imagine AdiZa here . I saw myself travel with them experiencing their feelings of getting married . Balcony scene was so good . Neil couldn't get words to express how he felt that moment when she chose him without a thought whereas he couldn't do it . I remember their terrace conversation where she question the same and he said he will choose his family which includes her . You must have added tere sang yara in the update .
Noor and Abhi 😆 I didn't expect Noor couldn't get his hint . Looks like another couple is on the way . Noor is a teacher 😆

Now comes the best part first night . It started with him massaging her

Happy 50 baby 😃🥳🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Firstly, 50 beautiful chapters!!! Congratulations are in order. So big hugs and. Congrats !
Loved both the chapters. Initially I thought Neil was more invested in the relationship than avni but her choosing neil over her dad and agreeing to get married in a jiffy proves that both are equals in all aspects.

Yayayya!! Tgey are finally married. Couldn't be happier.

I loved that the ceremony was short and sweet. Only loved ones, and the fact that Neil is going to try his level best to mend avni's relationship with her father. Ishika decides to stay as saba, if avni ever needs her is also a good touch. Noor and abhi huh?? Dolly kabkya hoga?? Lol!
Very well written. Update soon.

Ps. I am receiving the pms. No problem on this side.

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Posted: 7 years ago
omg...they are married? wow, unexpected, and so fast too...but i kinda liked tht. loved that saba identity wasnt revelaed and the goonghat moment reminded me of the show:) terrific update...hope you have more in store
also your other story, do u still have those missing chapters coz i hate that i missed those :(
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sanju first Congo for 50 updates
Ani updates chala amazing ga unayi
E update chala spcl ma sis 50 complete chesindi n avneil shadi ...Loved it inka chala cheppalani undi ...Update gurinchi ayithe na dagara no words ... Truly amazing😳...❤️
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sanju kaha hai tu
Congratulations for 50 chapters I hope it reaches to 100. Chal koi nai . Update next part soon. Waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sanju where are you pls show ur mercy to us also. As the episodes are becoming quite unbearable now and we need the breather from you.
Pls update soon waiting waiting.

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