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Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Chapter- 17 When Reality Strikes

Update agayaa!!!! 🥳🥳

I was waiting for you to write something to break the bubble they were in... One way or another they were due for this reality check and this is precisely what Vidhi had been avoiding

The reactions were very in sync with how Dev and Vidhi are and considering how much Vidhi internalizes her feelings, this will be a big learning curve for her to be able to live life on her terms and ignore the bias the society carries

Please keep their moments intact! I love the intimacy they share not just physically but emotionally too

Looking forward to the next part already ❤️

Minami yaar, loved it ❤️❤️ we had to get back to reality and this was perfect for it. Glad it was a small dose of reality 😄

Loved the pace, pictures and progression! Was looking forward to your update and it was beyond expectations 😄

Thank you hmhss and sns for the feedback.

So good...you write so well...i am already waiting for the next update ☺️. Do it soon please 🥺.

I think this is currently my favorite ff, I'm loving the story. ❤️❤️❤️

Thanks for writing big updates 😊😅💙

Finally, I read chapter 17. Bahot acha tha. Last mein bura laga vidhi ke liye. I hope she understands dev and everything goes well. Pls next chapter mein Arjun ko bhi videv ka sach bta dena. I thought kahin party Arjun toh ni mil jayega wahan dekh lega videv ko saath, chalo, next time sahi. 😊

Thank you for the feedback.

Yes Arjun will get to know soon. Poor thing. 😒

Just finished reading part 8 and part 9 . Sorry yaar kaafi late huye iss baar padne mein....Kuch kaam aa gaye, phir aaj baby ke ear piercing ki function thi aur Ghar pe relatives the. Isliye itna late huwa. Aww 🥰🥰🥰 kya kahun mein ? I liked both parts very much. Part 8 where Vidhi was realising whatever she was feeling had mere infatuation or any sort of magic had been written beautiful way. I really enjoyed reading it . Her colourful yet worried kiss 💋 dream in elevator huhh I wish we could really see that thing in show. But naa joh log baniyan hi bhool jaate hain unse kya hi expect kare ? How Vidhi was trying to get normal, how Dev noticed her changes everything was so beautiful to read..The birthday celebration, Vidhi's saree how Dev adored her beauty 😍 😍 reminded me how the way he was Ghooring Vidhi in saree at the show....Aww poor Dev he is such an attention seeker wanted to be with Vidhi . How he was annoyed when Vidhi left in between for work. Then our jalkukkde Dev in next part who just stole my heart. The artistic piece , Dev's imagination Awww it was so so so so so so lovely to read. How Dev was targetting Vidhi and Dev when they invited him for party, how he behaved bit arrogant to Vidhi and our innocent Vidhi who felt sad over this strange behaviour from Dev Sir, it was so realistic. Amba se flirting 🤗🤗🤗🤗 huuh Dev is so chaalak. Poor Vidhi how she got disturbed with these things. Both chapters were too much lovely to read.

Thank you fir reading and providing a detailed feedback Revu. Hope ur kiddos ear is fine now.. I just finished reading ur second update. Very good premise. Keep it coming👍🏼