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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a huge compliment ☺️ , I feels blessed πŸ₯°. Thanks a lot ChakorπŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Accha πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Dekh yeh Maddy ke request pe kar rahi hun. Iss mein naa Simi , ViDev scenes zyada honge. Haan beech beech mein thode bahut romance bhi dikhawungi..Tujhe abb lip kiss lolipop lagti hein 🀣🀣 Ho naa ho Nany, Monkish, Shinika sab matured streamy ViDev dikha dikhake Teri laalach ko badhava dee hein....Show mein Honeymoon bhi dikhaye , yeh alag baat hein kee wahan Amba ke aake spoil kar dee. Shaadi ke baad bhi unke Apavitra Prem hein . Wahan dekhke khush ho jaa. Yahan aise kisston mein hi milenge πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— πŸ€—πŸ€— Laalchi Paro.... Thanks a lot ☺️

Aisa nhi hai yrr hr koi apni jagah acha likh rha hai. Voto mein tere sath mzak krne k liye khti hoon kyuki mujhe pta hai you are not comfortable in writing romance. Kishton mein hi shi tu likh jo bhi likhna. Agar mjhe normal writing pasand nhi hoti teri to mein kbhi nhi pdhti. But i read all of your work n they all are very beautiful.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Paro , romance toh dikha sakti hun 😘😘😘😘 bas thode steamy scenes zyada romantic likhne mein mushkil hein mujhe. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— Tu bindaas laalach dikha lo 🀣🀣🀣Abb toh show mein pata nahi kya raita faila hein l? Donon ek number ke paagal huye hein 🀣🀣🀣

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Part 3

Dev : Mein pehle bhi keh chuka hun please Simi ke saamne aap donon ...

Abhimanyu: Mujhe afsos hein Bhai..Par kya karun ? Mein decide kar chuka hun mujhe kya karna hein.

Priya : Toh mein bhi decide kar chuki hun mujhe kya karni hein. Joh mujhe trust nahi karte unke saath rehne kaa fayda hi kya hein?

Meanwhile Abhimanyu's phone rings.

Abhimanyu attends the call and looks Dev.

Dev : Kya baat hein Abhi?

Abhimanyu: Inspector ne interrogate karne ke liye Priya ko police station bulaye hein.

Priya : What ? Par Maine Kiya kya ?

Abhimanyu; Tumhare woh gym trainer pakda gaya jiske saath .,...Bacchi saamne hein isliye mein kuch kahunga nahin.

Priya: Bhagwan ke liye mera vishwas karo Abhi. Maine aisa koyi kaam nahi Kiya hein jiske ilzaam aap mujhpe laga rahe hein.

Vidhi: Bhabhi,bhaiya please..Iss se pehle mamla bigad jaaye aap donon ko ek baar station zarur jaana chahiye...

Dev : Vidhi is right. Saare tensions aur inn sabka asar tum donon ke rishtey mein pade hein.. Please aap donon jaayiye aur sach kya hein iska pata lagayiye..Please.

Priya : Simi

Dev : Mein aur Vidhi Simi ke saath rahenge . Don't worry Priya.

Priya and Abhimanyu leaves.

Simi : Paapa - Mumma police station kyun Jaa rahe hein?

Dev : Beta woh log naa Inspector uncle ko dekhne Jaa rahe hein. Bas dekhke waapis aayenge.

Vidhi: Simi school nahi jaana aapko ?

Simi : Haan. But Taayi home work kiya hi nahi maine . Reeta Mam mujhe daantegi aaj bhi.

Dev : Tawu ke hote huye koyi angel ko kaise daant sakte hein. Abhi hum donon milke saare home work finish karenge . Chale

Simi nodded her head. Dev did so many things for Simi..He helped her in her studies, finishing home works and when she went for taking bath Vidhi came there.

Vidhi : Taayi aapko nehlayenge beta.

Simi : Mein itni choti baby nahi hun Taayi . Mujhe shy feel hoti hein. Mein khud naha lungi.

Saying this Simi went inside and closed the door.

Dev : Taayi, mujhe toh nehlayiye naa....

Vidhi : Sir aap yeh kya kar rahe hein? Aur mujhe Taayi kyun bula rahe hai?

Dev : Tum toh Maa ban rahi thi uski.

Vidhi : Toh aao bhi toh Paapa ban rahe the Sir.

Dev : Vidhi kitna maza aayega Naa jab hamare bhi choti beti hogi yaa chotu beta. Mujhe toh twins chahiye

Vidhi : Phir toh woh donon aapke laptop, diary sabke chillapot machayenge . Soch leejiye. Aapko godhi mein jagah nahi milenge. Donon jab ek saath meri godh mein soyenge...

Dev : Yeh toh maine socha hi nahi....

Vidhi : Sir abb aap bhi jaake fresh ho jaayiye...

Dev : Tum bhi chalo naa , saath mein nehlayenge ek duje ko.

Vidhi: Mein naha chuki hun. Abb aap bhi nahake aayiye

Dev smiled and went away.

Vidhi: Ek kaam karti hun..Simi ke time table check karke saare subjects ke books bag mein arrange karti hun..

As Simi came out from bathroom she screamed: Taayi!!

Vidhi looked her with a dull face.. Meanwhile Dev came there and asked; Kya huwa ? Kyun chillayi Simi beta ?

Simi pointed out her finger and Dev was shocked to see books, papers scattered here and there.

Dev : Yeh sab kya hein ?

Vidhi; Woh mein time table ke hisab se books rakh Rahi thi . Toh kuch mili nahi toh woh dhoondhne gayi. Tab tak Simi ke shelf se yeh saare chart papers gir Gaye..Aur phir yeh pens..

Simi : Taayi abb toh mein late ho jawungi.

Dev : Nahi beta. Tawu abhi theek karenge....Kya yaar Vidhi

Vidhi : Sorry Sir.

Dev and Simi together arranged books in order.

Simi : Abb mein jaldi ready ho jaati hun.

As Simi went for getting ready Dev looked Vidhi.

Vidhi : Pata nahi kaise sab kuch bikhre gaye .

Dev : Mujhe toh adaat ho chuki hein iss bikhrepan kee. Jab certificates maangi thi tab bhi aise hi kuch huwa thaa.

Vidhi : Mazak udda rahe hein naa aap mere ?

Dev : Mein bas tareef kar raha thaa.

Simi hurriedly came near Dev and said : Tawu baal bandhiye naa . Aur ribbons lagayiye .

Dev : Mein ribbons!!

Vidhi: Haan kariye naa Sir..Aap sab kuch kar sakte hein. Yeh toh rassi thodi hein, chotu saa baal ho toh hein .Acche se bandhiye , ribbons daaliye.

Dev tried a lot. But nothing worked.

Simi : Tawu aap se kuch nahi hota. Taayi aap keejiye naa.

Vidhi neatly combed hairs and tied ribbons on both sides.

Dev : Simi thodi der pehle toh aap Tawu ke side pe thaa. Abb Taayi ke side pe .Aapko toh Tawu bilkul acche nahi lagte hey naa.

Simi : Nahin Tawu I love you so much.

Vidhi: Toh aap Taayi ko pyaar nahi karti ?

Simi : I love you too Taayi.

Dev : Kis se zyada pyaar hein aapko ? Tawu se yaa Taayi se ?.

Simi ; Donon se .

Dev and Vidhi kissed Simi's cheeks respectively and said : We love you too Simi.

At Police station

Abhimanyu: Sir iss aurat ko bhi jail mein daaliye . Isne dhoka diya mujhe..Extra marital affair chal raha hein iska

Priya : Abhimanyu, you are crossing limits. Yeh saare ilzaam jhoote hein. I agree Gym trainer ke saath meri acchi dosti hein .Par Maine koine koyi affair nahi rakhi.

Abhimanyu; Toh photographs kaa kya ?.

Inspector: Woh sab kuch morphed pictures hein. Only the first pic is real. jiss mein donon ek dusre ko shake hand de rahe hein..Aapki wife kaa koyi affair nahi chal raha hein.Woh bas black mail karke paise lutane chahte the.... It's so sad that aapki wife baar baar yeh keh rahi thi kee uska photos se kuch Lena Dena nahi aap ne unki yakeen nahi kee.

Uss gym trainer kee baaton pe yakeen kiye. Anyways case is closed now. Aap log jaa sakte hein.

Priya: Thank you Inspector.

As they both started walking Abhimanyu held Priya's hand and said: Priya, I am really sorry for hurting you. Maine pata nahi kya kya kaha tumhein, ek baar bhi tumhari baat nahi suni.

Priya : Aapne kaha thaa Naa trust ek rishtey ki buniyad hein. Jab Aaj aap mujhe kuch tasweer dekhke mere character pe keechad udake mujhe Shaq kar sakte hein toh kal kaa kya bharosa ? Trust toh mujhe bhi nahi hein aap pe Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu: Tumhara pura haq hein gussa karne kaa. Tum chaho toh mujhe ek do thappad bhi maar sakti ho .

Priya : Abhi please. Kya aise ladne jhagadne ke liye hamari shadi huyi ?? Aap nashe mein joh bhi kiya woh galat thaa. Mujhse zyada bura toh hamari beti ko feel huwa hein Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu: Inn saare issues mein kitna rude behave Kiya Maine apni beti se ?

Priya: Mein bhi kaise rudely bata dee mere paas meri beti ke liye waqt nahi hein..Kitni buri maa hoon mein Abhimanyu.

Priya's eyes went teary.. Abhimanyu wiped her teras and said ; Priya , sab ke zimmedar mein hoon..Maine Bhai pe bhi chillaye..

Priya : Vidhi bhabhi aur Dev bhaisaab toh bas Simi ko sambhal rahe the..Hum donon apne clash mein apni beti ko pyaar Dena hi bhool gaye.

Abhimanyu: Infact hum ek dusre ko bhi pyaar karna naa jaane kab se bhoolkar lad rahe the....But I promise Priya aage se aisa nahi hoga.....

Priya: And I too promise you Abhi mein bahut pyaar karungi aap se bhi aur Simi se bhi..

They both held hands together with a smile.

At Raichand house

Vidhi : Kya aapko breakfast accha nahi laga

Dev : Kuch aur bana loon aapke liye?

Simi : Paapa ke haath se banaaye huye dish aur Mumma ke haath ke bane juice mujhe zyada pasand hein. Donon mujhe khilate the . Aur mujhe kiss bhi karte hein...

Dev : Tawu aap se promise karte hein abhi aapne joh bhi kaha naa woh zarur hoga.

Vidhi : Milapini maa hein naa ? Woh Paapa aur Mumma ko saath le aayenge...

Abhimanyu: Bilkul sahi kaha aapne bhabhi .

Dev : Priya , Abhi !!

Priya rushed and hugged Simi.

Priya : Simi I am sorry. Aap Mumma se naraaz ho naa

Simi : No Mumma....

Abhimanyu came near Simi...Simi in fear hide behind Priya.

Priya : Daro mat Simi..Paapa aap se sorry bolne aaye hein...Paapa abb angry nahi hein.

Simi slowly called : Paapa !!

Abhimanyu: Beta !! I am sorry.

He tightly hugged her and burst out his tears.

Simi : Paapa , Aap roye huye acche nahi lagte. Please don't cry..

With her little hands she wiped his tears.

Dev touched Abhimanyu's shoulder.

Abhimanyu: Bhai maine aap pe chillayi..I am sorry Bhai. Vidhi bhabhi , I am so sorry

Priya: Maine bhi pata nahi kya kuch kahi aap donon se . Sorry bhaisaab, sorry bhabhi.

Dev : Aap donon ek saath laute yahi hamare liye kaafi hein.

Priya: Abb sab solve ho chuke hein.

Vidhi: Milapini maa ne sab theek kee. Waise Milapini maa se ek baat yaad aayi..Mein naa mannat maangi thi jab sab theek ho jayega tab jaake darshan karenge Maa kee.

Dev : Wow . Yeh toh bahut acchi baat hein. Hum sab chalenge Maa Milapini kee darshan ke liye.

" Aur mein"

All were surprised to see Satyawati.

Priya: Mummy ji

Satyawati: Uff Touchy Touchy!!

Dev : Maa aap badi jaldi lauti.

Satyawati: Kab tak mein jeeji ke hile huye harqaton ko sambhalti Dev ? Yahan se wahan tak ke spaflarl baad mein ghar mein bhi yeh sun sunke kaan Pak chuke hein meri .

All laughed.

At Sharma Niwas

Dev : Aaj kuch special hein kya ?

Vidhi: Pata nahi Sir.

Priya : Hari Prasad uncle ko kya huwa hein ?

Bimla : Dev ji, Vidhi, Satyawati ji , aayiye naa aap sab aayiye

Satyawati: Bimla yeh Hari Prasad ji ko kya huwa ?

Bimla: Ji woh jaise hi Vidhu ne batayi kee Priya aur Abhimanyu ke beech anban hein sab kuch sahi ho jaane ke liye inhone ek haath mein Diya leke ek taang pe khade hoke kathor vrat rakhe hein.

Dev : Yeh Hari Prasad ji bhi naa !!

Dev came near him and said: Sankat tak chuka hein. Priya aur Abhimanyu ek ho chuke hein..Aapki prarthna Milapini maa ne sun Lee.

Dev took the diya from his hand..

Hari Prasad : Dev saab!!


They both hugged each other

Satyawati: Chalo anth bhala toh sab bhala.

Dev : Priya , Abhimanyu donon aarti keejiye.Uske baad Dev saab aur Vidhi bhi Karenge.

Simi : Mein kiske saath karun Aarti

Satyawati: Aap dadi ke saath karna beta.

And when the aarti sessions were finished they all had lovely conversations.. Hariprasad narrated story of Baal Krishna to Simi.

Satyawati: Abb agle saal Dev aur Vidhi ke bhi nanhe se baal gopal yaa nanhi see Radha aayegi donon ke saath.

Dev : Maa aap bhi naa

Satyawati: Pata hein Dev. Vidhi ko bahut kuch karna hein. Lekin uske baad toh ho sakte hein naa ...

Simi : kya hona hein ?

Abhimanyu: Kuch nahi aapke saath khelne ke liye ek chote friend aayega . Tawu aur Taayi hi unhein leke aa sakte hein.

Simi : Taayi, Tawu jaldi lawo naa usse. Mujhe khelna hein.




To be continued πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Definitely worth the wait, thank you ❀️❀️❀️

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Part 4

Dev : Simi beta abhi naa aap hi hamare Ghar kee choti angel ho . Chotu tabhi aayenge jab badi hogi.

Simi : Badi matlab Mumma jaisi badi ?

Vidhi : Nahin , aapne Ruhi ko dekha naa woh aap se thodi badi hein. Thode time baad aap bhi aisi ho jawogi..Tab chotu aayenge .

Simi : Milapini ma, mujhe jaldi badi kar do..Tabhi Chotu aayenge.

All laughed.

Dev : Meri laadli Angel .

Dev kissed her cheek.

Priya : Waise Bhaisaab Ruhi kaun hein ?.

Simi : Ruhi meri friend hein. Mujhe phir se milne hein apne saare friends se ,Rocky se bhi.

Dev : Why not ? Hum sab chalenge Baalghar.

Scene shifts to Baalghar

Hariprasad : Dev saab aapne yeh accha kiya..Inn saare bacchon ke liye ek Ghar diye.....

Bimla: Aapki Maa ki yaad mein banayi hein naa...

Vidhi ne batayi .

Satyawati; Gangaji kee tamannah thi bacchon ke liye kuch karne kaa. Shantanu ji ne yeh plot toh khareeda thaa par yeh Ghar tab bana jab Dev ne apni pehli salary iss mein invest kee. Dheere dheere salary ke amount iske kaam mein lagake aakhir ban gaye..Par afsos kee baat hein kee woh Maa aur Paapa donon aasman ke sitare ban gaye....

Hariprasd: Par unki aashirwad aapke bete par sada rahega. Aur abb Maa Milapini bhi saath hein Dev saab ke saath.

ViDev were playing with Simi, Rocky and other kids.

Simi : Tawu Tawu , aap gaana sunawo naa.

Vidhi : Haan Sir please.

Dev started singing Bam bam bole and kids had much fun playing with ViDev..

Abhimanyu: Aise kya dekh rahi ho Priya ?

Priya : Bhaisaab kitne relaxed lag rahe hein inn bachon ke saath..Simi ko bhi dekhiye kitni masti kar rahi hein Bhaisaab aur Bhabhi ke saath

Abhimanyu: Ho naa ho Bhai aur bhabhi ne toh thode time ke liye parents jaise Simi kaa khayal rakha .Aur abb bhi rakh rahe hein...

After a week

Simi : Taayi chocolate khaa lo , aap semester exam ke liye Jaa rahi hein naa. Mumma mujhe hamesha khilati hein.

Priya: Beta dahi shakkar khilate hain, aapko woh pasand nahi hein toh aapko chocolate khilati hun.

Dev : Pyaar se khilaye har cheeze meethe hote hein.

Satyawati: Jahan pyaar ho wahan sab kuch possible hai


Abhimanyu: All the best bhabhi

Priya: Acche se likhna .

Satyawati: Milapini maa se prarthna hein kee exam acche se ho jaaye aur meri Bahu MBA holder ban jaaye.

Dev : Abb chale Vidhi !!

Vidhi : Sir aap kuch nahi kahenge.

Dev : Love makes Life Beautiful.

He kissed her cheeks and said : Mere wish karne kaa yahi tareeka hein....

And the journey of ViDev continued there after. Thank you Maddy for suggesting me to write about the bonding of Simi with ViDev..Writing this one made me very happy and hope you will like it. Expecting all my readers to suggest me something which I am able to write ✍️ If possible I will write on them . Thanks to all for reading and showing your love. Please drop your views.

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Please read and drop your views

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I literally love this one.. ❀️❀️❀️❀️

Thanks alot Revu for writing on my demand.. 😍😍 if i got something in my mind will surely get back to you.. 😍😍❀️❀️

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All parts are fab revu!!!

Very heart touching and soothing to feel this ViDev moments with Sunni. And saw the glimpse of parent side of videv. For simmy they are this much sweet and pampered if when their own kids come it will be so lovable to watch.

Thank you so much Revu for writing this and gave sukoon to all NUKSH forum in this worst phase.

Waiting to read more!!!

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Thank u revu itna pyara likhne k liye. Dev ka kids k sath ek cute bond hai jo tumne share kiya hai yhan😊

Tumne suggestion manga to mjhe lgta hai k humne show mein dekha hai k vidhi ko dev se pyar hua pehle. Kya tum aisa kuch likh skti ho jahan dev ko pehle pyar ho jaye vidhi se aur vo use ehsas krwana chahe lekin vidhi is se door bhaage than dev use realize krwaye baar baar. Means k story ko reverse order mein chlana hai. Jese ki dev ko pta chl jaaye he loves her but vidhi se khne se dre but achanak se vo vidhi se confess krde n fir vidhi accept krne k baare mein soche. Chalegi office life hi. Agar tumhe thik lge to likhne ki koshish karna.

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