MMFF-Partners In Crime- FINISHED! last updt pg 99

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kunalkiAC143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

amazing...😊 mohan is again journalist... feeling good... waiting for next...all the best...👍🏼

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Aditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

its just really amazing a entire new story is to come with the characters to explore and same as nbt the plot is going on with mohan and megha . you write really well and the chapter one was amazing and we have to wait one weak for next chapters . if you could update then update fast and you are keeping the relevance of the characters and keep on doing it.your story will be a journey to explore and keep on giving like this awesome chapters and i forget to introduce my name is aditya13yrandmyffalsomoving

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AK3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Laxmi, the first part is very good. You've described everything deliberately. Keep going with the flow & thanks a lot for the pm dear! 😳

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Nuzhat Qadir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

chapter 1 is quite interesting you describe everything in detail will wait for next chapter...

Keep going well done...Thanks for pm

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purvi08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

its so nice lakshmi...

nicely described...

waiting for more to come... :)

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Senpoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Good start Lakshmi ! The introductions are done pretty well!!! 👏

Mahesh is Mohan's bro but who is this Suresh here? May be just another character that you didn't want to describe much? 😊

I like it - Villupuram station! Villupuram is my hubby's place so I already kinda closely related to this story now! 😉😃

And will Mohan be willing to change his berth or will Megha want to keep Mohan at sight?!!! That will be interesting to read! 😉😳

What a title, girl 😉! I think you mean to say Love is a Crime! 😉😳

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deepika padukone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey Lakshmi...really a very good start!! 👍🏼
Its really gripping & intriguing
Looking forward to rest of ur updates 😃

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LonelyGlider

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Thank you KKK143 , aditya, Amanat- , khush_nelofer, purvi08, -...mohini...-😃

the next update will be probably on next saturday

and thanks a lot to Senpoo, for pointing out 'Suresh', you have a sharp eye 👍🏼

i had initially named Mohan's dad Suresh.. but after going through some season 1 episodes, realised it was Arvind actually... and I forgot to correct it😳

the story is indeed about love, not any crime...still, a little bit of investigation comes in-between...Mohan is a journalist afterall 😊

actually,i've not been to villupuram station myself😳...i would've visited the place myself if i had chosen to study at the nearby university (which i envision to be Megha's)

you expect Mohan-Megha meeting now? Hmm...well I can't say much...but Megha will indeed meet someone who will become important to her ..