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happygirl18

@happygirl18

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

hey loved your OS
very beautifully written
nd all the emotions are very well etched...........

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@missinguonly

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

very nyc wirtten
luv it

n more thing
i wrote os u told me about

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1484234#33815010

Edited by missinguonly - 15 years ago

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yasri

@yasri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

This is one of the best OS I've read in IF........ amazing the harmony and herarichy of events, the words you used to discribe the characters........ the idea in whole is original and different........

But I noted that like you start to feel tired as we approach towards the end......... there is one part where I felt that you could describe it better, where Gunji got hint fro that girl........ I think it should be more emotional....

Honestly, you showed a superior talent that what I've seen from MJHT cvs in their most tracks.......

Keep it up girl, you made my day by your touching OS

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

zee i just wanna request you to write more n more OS on sajan.Pls try to write on the current track where gunjan realizes sam's pain.It wud be great to read it from ur pov and in ur words.

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

ZeeeeJayyy OMFGGGG im Crying Here, Never Cried While Reading its The First Time .. This Was OUTSTANDINGG ! You Described Everything SO Beautifullyy ! SO Sad And Heartwrenchingg, I Cant Say More As Im Speecheless Just Want To Add .. One Of The BEST OS ive Ever Read ! Please Write More, Your SO Good ! Loved This One Like Anything !!!

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
beautiful
lost 4 word

u r awesome

thanks 4 da pm

thnks a lot dear, truly means a lot to me😊

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: preety88
lovely os.......it was soooo sad...u made me cry....awesome work

ohh dear thnk u soo much🤗

am glad u could connect so well that it got tears, didnt intend to make u cry sweety.

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: mjhtrocks2010
nice os.it made me cry.the way you penned it was amazing.

Hey dear, thnks a ton!

truly means a lot to me😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Zee you made me cry gosh this was so so sad

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi
it is the most beautiful os i've ever read....beautifully written...!!! tears welled up in my eyes...!!! amazing and terribly sad!!

divya

Ohh dear tht truly means a lot to me!! thnks a ton for such an amazing review🤗

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