FF: Tangled Love[Mayur&Sajan] Intro Pg2 5/6 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yes rohit.u r the best!!!!and wht about sajan-contract marriage/frosted flare??when will u update????can't wait more...i think these days u r busy....try to update soon. 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1



"Hey Darling!!! How are you...???" A husky voice came from her back, Nupur gasped as she felt his hands encircling her slender waist, pulling her closer to his perfect body. He encircled her slender figure in his protective embrace and planted his cold lips on her nape which was visible to him. Nupur gulped feeling his hot breath touching her bare shoulder, she sighed feeling his hands caressing her waist and her belly. Feeling him caressing take over her sense she closed her eyes feeling herself tremble. She bends a little resting her head lightly on his well toned chest. She sighed thinking hard, they were in the relationship for past one year.



"Oohhhh.....I love him....???"
she whispered to herself.



"But why do I not feel secure in his arms......why....??? Why is it so..?"
She thought,"Yes she didn't felt any kind of security, any kind of belonging ness, any sensational feeling being with him...I don't feel those Goosebumps, even i don't feel enthralled when ever I kiss him, when ever I Hug him...Why...???" She thought resting her head on his chest and felt him kiss her loudly. "I don't feel those chilling sensation....why....???....Is it true that people feel Goosebumps run through their body when they are with their Love....Do they...Was that all novels wrong...??" She sighed thinking...Yes that is what she believed through that numerous novels that she had read... "They were her second partner..Her second friend"



"Ummmmpphhh...i am fine honey...." she answered



Turning back she looked into his eyes searching for something, confused not able to find it
"Was it there...??? Why am i not able to see it...why...???"




"Hey honey....How was your day..??" She asked him, looking into his eyes.


He pulled her closer to himself kissing her lightly and sensuously on her nape, He moved her hairs which were landing on her shoulder on her back and kissed her deep on her shoulder. He grinned hearing her gasped.."I just love her so much..." He thought looking at her perfect face. She was beauty. Even pamela Anderson, even Britney spear was nothing in front of her. Not even the gorgeous Aishwarya rai...He looked at her trembling lips and caressed them. He smiled seeing her open her eyes and look at him.




"
It was all fine gorgeous but I really missed you...I can't spend a minute without you...?? Was it...??? How will I leave without you...??"He asked sighing looking at her. She was going to states for a month before their grand event.




Nupur giggled looking at his sulking face, she sighed cursing herself for being judgmental toward him.."He is just a sweetheart" she thought
"Awwww...He will miss me...!! i am so stupid to think that this might not be love...It is love.....!!!!"




"Honey i have to go yaar....You know naa Sheena is calling me long time. Its her wedding yaar. I have to go.. i Promise not to let you miss me...I will come in your dreams...you can talk to me in your dreams"She giggled looking at him as he pouted looking at her, Not liking her visit to States for such a long time.




"Awwwww.....Plssss Honey....Ok i will call you everyday..." She sulked looking at his pouting face, She had to go it was her friend's weeding. She looked at him and lower herself to him giving him a full kiss on his lips and sighed parting...."Why is it so...??? Why is it so different...???"



He looked at her making a 'Puppy-dog face'...He sighed groaning...She always does this...He just cant resist her this look. "she knows how to get through me."



"Okiessss....you can go....." He whispered to her hugging her and kissing her sensuously.



"Ohhh...Thank you 'Samrat.....I Love you' ....!!!!" She whispered to him running off. "Ohh I just love her" Samrat whispered back looking at her parting figure.



"Yeah...yeah....I know....But after 15th you are all mine.
" He told her looking at her childish act smilingly. She was giggling, dancing, she had a gut feeling that something was going to happen in this journey..Has destiny planned something for her...Has it....!!!!



"Yeah cutie pie i am all yours after our wedding...."
She whispered kissing him back.



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Comment if you want me to update more of this one....!!! This is the Intro for the Fic!! No silent reading plsss, if you could take time to read it then you could at least press like Tab or leave comment If i wont get good no of comments then i would be pming parts not updating here😆😆 same with other fic, You could discuss here later.....How is that idea?? I would try to implement for all....First would be contract marriage as hardly 6-8 ppl comment on it, so next update for my all Fic would be seperate pms to readers who reply to me😉.

Edited by Rohit86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
OH MY GOD.....rohit you gave me a heart attack...💔
thats samrat with nupur..well i dont know ...but at the start i had it in the back of my mind that u were gonna do something like this....tumhari ffz per per ker ab itna andaza to ho hi gaya hai...😉
WELL it was a great start....per iss baar meri taraf se warning haI.....DONT MAKE MAYU A BALLI KA BAKRA THIS TIME PLZZZZ....i hate to see him all sad..😭
awesome..as usual...do update jaldi jaldi.....
keep it up..👍🏼

aisha...
Edited by cuppycake990 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOL....I guessed it the minute she thought that "why does it not feel like in the novels..?" that it was Samrat!!
Ohkay...really nice concept!! So I guess she has an affair with Mayank while attending the wedding...? And Gunjan comes somewhere in this...?
I'm really interested in reading this...is it something like KANK...?
I didn't really like that movie but I'm sure I'll love reading your Fanfic...LOL!
If you're continuing with this then update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuppycake990

OH MY GOD.....rohit you gave me a heart attack...💔I Did Huh??😆
😆thats samrat with nupur..well i dont know ...😆😆😆...Yeah He is!!

but at the start i had it in the back of my mind that u were gonna do something like this....tumhari ffz per per ker ab itna andaza to ho hi gaya hai...😉

I am glad ki you could atleast make this much out of my fic, but this would be different i think🤔


WELL it was a great start....per iss baar meri taraf se warning haI.....DONT MAKE MAYU A BALLI KA BAKRA THIS TIME PLZZZZ....i hate to see him all sad..😭


Bali ka bakra would be sammy and nups...😆😆😆 atleast not Mayu...He would be all cool....😆😉


awesome..as usual...do update jaldi jaldi.....
keep it up..👍🏼

aisha...




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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hgrhr

LOL....I guessed it the minute she thought that "why does it not feel like in the novels..?" that it was Samrat!!

Awww....You too guessed it haan...Ie great😃

Ohkay...really nice concept!! So I guess she has an affair with Mayank while attending the wedding...? And Gunjan comes somewhere in this...?

Yes gunjan will come lets see where!!
I'm really interested in reading this...is it something like KANK...? No not like Kank, there Both couples are are married. here they arent!!

I didn't really like that movie but I'm sure I'll love reading your Fanfic...LOL!
If you're continuing with this then update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
wowowow tht was amazinggg rohit
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Posted: 16 years ago
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So that means she DOES have an affair with him...no matter if they're married or not....hmm...interesting yaar!!
Never read this kind of fic with Mayur....😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey it seems to be a nyc story............
plz continue soon....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg it was samrat..😆.....i literally spilled my water out on the computer screen😆..
awesome rohit as usual........tere dimag mein aise ideas aate kaise hai yaar?????
update soon......pm me.😳

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