The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~ - Page 31

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thnx sweetie i really liked it continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Neha

Thanks a lot.. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Debby!
So long part-by-part comment! Yay me! πŸ˜†
Part 29:
cute much? both sides are learning that they care for each other more than they thought.. There was little of SG though. But lots of MayUr (though seperately)..
Part 30:
Hilarious! You have captured Sammy and Benji's friendship so well! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Absolutely side-splitting! Poor Benji.. If Pooja finds out, woh toh gaya! πŸ˜†
Urgh I hate Sandhya! 😑 That was such a romantic moment for MayUr, and that stupid Sandhya 😑
Part 31:
Oh wow. That entire part was so entertaining! First Sammy-Benji interaction, then the sweet interaction between the sisters, Mayank-Sandhya confrontation (good riddance Sandhya!) then the note from Sammy to Gunjan.. So sweet!
Part 32:
so cute! Sammy confusing Gunjan (I got a bit confused too.. πŸ˜†), then the Mayank-Nupur scene was way too cute! And Benji, hai Benji.. πŸ˜† Amazing, superb, entertaining! So great! What does Sammy have for Gunjan?
Part 33:
Sammy is cho chweet! I want a Sammy! Debs, can I be in your story too? As a good friend/sister of Sammy's or something? Please? And that Dia 😑 Create problems for SaJan.. Hmmph.. Loved Sammy's description of everyone! That was so funny! Uday in slow-motion, Benji and his hot dates.. πŸ˜† MayUr interaction is always welcome! Building up to what happens right?
Part 34:
Ooohh, who's Vatsala? And CJ noticing MayUr holding hands, why am I not surprised! πŸ˜† And Sammy and Gunjan's friendship so sweet.. Sammy noticing MayUr's chemistry.. Fun times! πŸ˜‰
Part 35:
MayUr are really evolving as characters! That was so cute! And SaJan getting stranded, and Gunjan trying to figure out if Sammy is right about MayUr starts questioning her feelings for Sammy.. Things are heating up, Debs, and I need more! πŸ˜†
Long comment na? Now I'm all caught up with your FF, I still have to catch up with the show!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Radz.. I am overwhelmed.. it was super sweet of you to read all of it and comment individually. Hugs for you. πŸ€—
Hehe.. glad I got rid of Sandhya na? I had great fun writing their confrontation scene.. The Mayank in me wanted to tick her off badly. πŸ˜†

Yeah sure.. you are officially part of Sammy's life now.. cousin sis sounds good? πŸ˜ƒ
Vatsala is that fat girl who always keep eating. In Gunjan's class, remember?

Yeah.. I am building up both sets of characters.. will update tomorrow! 😊
Thanks a ton once again!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Debs! Isn't her name Ursula? I thought that was her name.. hehe.. Vatsala is better I think, Ursula reminds me of the villain in the Little Mermaid..
Cousin sis sounds great! And could I be Mayank's friend too? Or maybe get rid of Pooja and make me Benji's girl!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago

It was actually JUST GREAT!!!!

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Love Ya keep writing
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

Gr88 fanfic yaarrr.....superbbb fantabulous writing!!!!!

i recently joined IF...have read the entire epis in a stretch....ur ff is having an interesting turn in each epi....no words...huhhhh.....HATS OFF 2 U DebbyπŸ‘

really admiring ur writings.......cant wait 4 next update........plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
beautiful update debby.esp the SaJan part.....luvd it completely n the MayUr part was awesum toooo seemed sooooooo real .grt going,
do contd soon,
will b waiting,
n yeah advance Happy New Year.....
Luv RaeeπŸ€—
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Radz
Lol..I initially thought her name is Utsula. But in a recent episode, I thought Mayank called her Vatsala.. confusing name she has! πŸ˜†
Wow.. so many character possibilities u have given me.. why do u want Benji to break up wid his girl? πŸ˜› I will put u in a role in the next update.. hope u like it. :)

@Tina
Thanks sweetie.. so happy u liked it!! πŸ€—

@sherizzz
Hie, welcome to IF! And thanks a million.. It means a lot to me..
I will be updating soon.. keep reading. πŸ˜ƒ

@Raee
Happy new year to u too sweetie.. glad u liked the part..
Thank u soo much.. Love u! πŸ€—

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey it was a wonderful update πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
&&&&&&& i really loved it......................
hey debby do update soon yaar
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