Sack the director and editor ASAP

I'm expressing my apologies ahead plz don't take my words otherway round it's my POV

This is Critic call from my end :

Today was one of the episode i really want best execution but the super talented director and editors made kabada out of everything.🤢

They totally fail to left the impact of both IMP scene one from outside of raghu's mom house and other the road confrontation. This two powerful scene fail to impact because of poor poor execution from director end. Yes i agree the actor are new and they need to work on some scene but here i found it's not actor low skills but director is not clear about his aim.😵

They want show devasted boy who could not take it to loose family again due to henivous false accusation , scene were found too slow too fast mode, nothing smooth at that scene that bkwas bgm even making entry before emotons.🤔 kabada bana diya.

It's duty of director to check the scene pre/post editing if your not satisfied with what vierwers expecting from the scene man just retake it , don't you this much common sense and i'm pretty sure the director is not new unlike the actors.

Then at confrontation again the mahan editing in full scope scene she is having foowear, when focus on foot she was bearfoot , lame crying emotion, are naspeeto you are screening girl who's dignity torned away just few hrs before she is shatttered completly , words are ringing in her head and what you are showing a girl with full makeup , suck yr kaun banaya enko director👎🏼

Secondly it was so lame that she just normally came infront of his car suddenly , what's wrong with you man DOP where were you , what the hell was that shivangi was fully well makeuped in that shot like nothing had happened at least make up her like she had cried badly, her face dried with unstoppable tears..but nahi enko yahi pe apna classy makeup budget dikhana hai ...( I must say aise scenes me EK house ke shows ka koi hath nhi pkd skta they are best in excution of such scene story ko maro goli)

Today i feel pitty over both the talented actors sai n shivi unke teacher ne aaj unko fail kr diya otherwise they did there job far good (today i can't say better) raghu was better at confrontation scene bcz uski trf se outburst na dikhane ka scne hi managed pretty well but shivi was fantactic actor wasted in that particular scene like koi gali ka zagda hua tha jiska onfrontation hua ho..are ladki ejjat tar tar hue hai esi ladki kaisi dikhani chahiye etna bhi common sense agr director me nhi toh aage esase ummed krna bekkar hai aur maine frankly hopes chhod diye hai.

I'm again saying the writer needs to work very very hard over pallavi's character , what are you guys doing yr ..today viwers were very much ready for OTT from her end bcz that's the need of scene but again writer and director ki stupidity ke chlte they are ruining FL character to the death end and on one very sudden day they will show something totally unconnect with this fir public ko bolte hai ki story ko support nhi krte

bhae sahab pehle apne dimag me clear krlo ko tum log kya dikhana chahte ho fir public se umeed karo 😡

Bs bhot hua mai esase jyada gussa nhi kr skti else mera sir pphat jayega...but aaj ke episode i m too much disaapointed so i meade this huge lengthy crapy post .

Sorry guys

PS: inke show se better toh varsha ki FF series hai..hats off to that girl for her clear vision about every character👏 without much drma she had left the best impact on readers..sikho kuch hmare IF writers se

sorry guys for torturing you all with these lamba chuada post but subah se mera dimag hata tha..socha tha aj kuch nhi likhungi only read os in few times and go..but at last i fail

This is for you Hema 🤗

I thought I was the only one who felt this way but looks like you had the same observation. Indeed it was a turning point in the entire story and was a critical episode. Heck even the Ayi and Nikhil scenes were better executed.

I just give them the benefit of the doubt because they are rushed and relocated, etc. but yes, I prefer they don't show a scene than to make it haphazard.

I agree the execution & editing needs to be worked on. And it should start Now!

Pallavi needed to say a lot of dialogues & cry. I thought ek sad song sequence milega. Kuch nahi mila😒

It was choppy. I expected more rona dhona from Pallavi.

In madhubala, this kind of scene was beautifully executed.

They cut off the chance for shivangi to shine more.

Some scenes were a masterpiece like Raghav and Farhad scene was masterpiece. But Raghav outside amma's house looked forced.

And The interaction of RaghVi was damn short.

I haven't read any FFs till now in our forum. Shortage of time !!

Will probably try the one u suggested

Originally posted by: inlieu

This is for you Hema 🤗

I thought I was the only one who felt this way but looks like you had the same observation. Indeed it was a turning point in the entire story and was a critical episode. Heck even the Ayi and Nikhil scenes were better executed.

I just give them the benefit of the doubt because they are rushed and relocated, etc. but yes, I prefer they don't show a scene than to make it haphazard.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

I agree the execution & editing needs to be worked on. And it should start Now!

Pallavi needed to say a lot of dialogues & cry. I thought ek sad song sequence milega. Kuch nahi mila😒

I mean es writer ko kya dushmani hai yr pallavi ke character se....kyu uski puri lanka laga rakhi hai😵

I hate the night scenes of the show.

1. During Pallavi's kidnap in sangeeth

2. Raghav and courier guy scene

3. Today's Raghvi scene

My only favorite night scene is the time Raghav scare pallavi after the market slap. And the one where he tied her to chair.

They need to work on many things, the lighting is very bad in these night scenes.

And editing is not good too. One of the precap (during the hallucination of Raghav) they showed a lady but when episode aired they filtered her in air. What all we had discussed about that blue Saree lady. 😆

And Raghav's scene in front of the house was not good. I felt a bit of sympathy for him only when he tired to wipe that dirt off. And they should have given Pallavi more screen space. I would have loved if they showed that Raghvi scene in the next episode with a bit more of her breaking down. I hope they continue it from there. 😒

Only good scene was, that of Farhad and Raghav. (I think this scene was better because they shot that before they shifted, they had time to work on it.)

Like @ inlieu mentioned I will also give them benefits of doubt. They were in a rush to finish the scenes, from monday hopefully they will come to the track.

Originally posted by: christobelle

It was choppy. I expected more rona dhona from Pallavi.

In madhubala, this kind of scene was beautifully executed.

They cut off the chance for shivangi to shine more.

Some scenes were a masterpiece like Raghav and Farhad scene was masterpiece. But Raghav outside amma's house looked forced.

And The interaction of RaghVi was damn short.

I haven't read any FFs till now in our forum. Shortage of time !!

Will probably try the one u suggested

pallavi ka screen time bhot short kr diya o road scene me which is worst, overmakeup on her in confrontation, no cried hard look, amma ke house wale scen ki toh ab bt hi nhi krni i was like : yr ye director ko kopche me leke thoko yr kya kr rha hai 🤣

I must say whenever you get time go and read FF series by @varshaoforange with 36 chs as of now , the series is extremely well beautiful crafted with any drama and you will fall in love with her chs...just super the girl with perfectly crafted series, writer needs to learn such things in reality

I said so many time. They need to improve execution. It lacks grip. They have good story and good actor but no proper direction and execution and now story also started to get irritating. When I watched on tv it doesn't look that interesting. Sometime look scene are running from here and there.

Sickand should bring his yhm team. They were much better. This team lack proper vision and planning.

Sickand need to take incharge properly. If they won't improve even if given 11 PM it won't sustain.