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bubulswt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

superb update dear

love the bonding between Gandhari and Draupadi

Gandhari understands Draupadi batter then Kunti

indeed every one love Arjun and he deserve every bit of it

Gandhari way of punishing Yudhisitir is amazing

lovely update👏

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bubulswt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: ltelidevara
Thanq very much for appreciating my story.What more do I need than such encouraging words? Welcome to the dream land of Arjun Draupadi. Feel free to comment whenever you find time.

Thank you

I will definitely comment

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shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

it was outstanding, amazing update..
loved d way u portrayed d scene of gandhari draupdi n arjun..
gandhari is really a goden hearted lady..
she still loves her favourite daughter in law n her phalgun..
she is one of d characters in mahabharata i adore d most..

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Gandhari fired Krishna." Vaasudev the whole Kuru clan got wiped off. The brothers who should have lived happily together ,fought with each other and lost their lives.Not even one son remained alive.

Keshav, I don't blame my sons. I don't blame Pandavas.But certainly I would accuse you for not doing sufficient effort to stall the war. If you really wished you would have stopped the war.

Arjun interfered ."Mata Madhav came to Hastinapur and tried his best to bring peace.

But Duryothan wished for war only."

Gandhari nodded her head in disapproval.She continued." Phalgun, That is not sufficient.Your Madhav could have done more to bring in peace.

Keshav you know how gruesome it is to lose all the sons at one go?

You know how sorrowful it is to see elders like Santanav and GuruDron fall down?

Krishna, Do you know how unbearable it is to see the only daughter become a widow?

Hastinapur doesn't have male population now.

Every one fought the war and died leaving behind the children and women.

Kuruvamsh lost every great warrior . There are no children to succeed Pandavas.

Veer Abhimanyu died.Laksman and Dussasan's son died.

Upa Pandavas died causing Panchali lifelong suffering.

I blame you only Govind for this ultimate loss. And I curse you with my power of penance.

The whole Yadava clan will get wiped off before your eyes. No one will remain.You will

See this and realise my pain. It is inevitable."

A thunder like noise resounded in the sky as Gandhari pronounced her. Curse.

Arjun looked at Krishna horrified. Yudhishtir Bheema Nakul and Sahadev rushed to Gandhari

To stop her.Draupadi shivered and agitated.

But the one who faced the curse remained calm and composed.

The smile on his face stayed there. He folded his hands and said." So be it."

As they came out Arjun confronted Krishna." Why did you keep quiet? You are the one who did work towards truce. Gandhari Mata lost her sensibilities overcome by grief.Madhav,how could you be so cool in the face of such disastrous curse?"

Draupadi supported him." Govind.You are targeted by Maata unnecessarily..She is wrong. I know how honest you are in your efforts to stop war. You asked for five cities that also Duryothan did not oblige.

It is injustice."

Yudhishtir took Krishna's hands into his." Kanha for our sake you endured this much. We can't forgive ourselves." Krishna consoled him." Eldest everything happens by fate.Gandhari Mata could not avoid the pre destined happenings. Her curse is the fate of Yadavas.Dont worry."

Krishna pulled Arjun closer and patted on his shoulder." Now don't make a face like that. You are not seeing the destruction of yadavas now itself. I promise I will call you then."

Arjun asked " When""with a miffed expression.

Krishna laughed and said." When I bid farewell to my motherland. My last word and last thought will be for your sake only."

Arjun had tears in his eyes and closed Krishna's mouth from uttering more.

Krishna hugged him closer and assured him." Dont worry Parth. Still so many years are there for us to be together roam together and fulfill our friendship. I promise I will spend maximum time with you only."

Panchali gazed at them in awe. The inseparable duo, who have two bodies but one soul,Nar Narayan mesmerised her as usual.

Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
it was outstanding, amazing update..
loved d way u portrayed d scene of gandhari draupdi n arjun..
gandhari is really a goden hearted lady..
she still loves her favourite daughter in law n her phalgun..
she is one of d characters in mahabharata i adore d most..

Thanq Sruti for always supporting me with your good words.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: sweetka
wonderful update Di

Thanq Sweetika without hour comment I won't feel good.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: bubulswt
superb update dear
love the bonding between Gandhari and Draupadi
Gandhari understands Draupadi batter then Kunti
indeed every one love Arjun and he deserve every bit of it
Gandhari way of punishing Yudhisitir is amazing
lovely update👏

happy to see you like the story and charecterisation. Thanq very much for being here.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Ulupi stood in the middle of the Ganga waters reminiscing her first meet with Arjun. So many years passed. Still when she comes to that spot she will still feel the thrill.Before her eyes she could see the dark handsome anchorite taking bath in full splendour. Right from that day so many incidents happened in their lives.

Kurukshetr happened. Iravan passed away. Ulupi had tears in her eyes.Theson she so much cherished and felt proud fought for his father and met with a death suited to heroes. He proved he is Arjun's son.Ulupi smiled with satisfaction." Arjun. I offered my son to you to do his duty. I don't regret that. I know now I am childless. But I can consider chitra's son Babhruvahan as my own. Now that the battle came to an end looking forward to meet you my husband." Ulupi took a dip in the river and got up.Still she is in the waters.

Ulupi observed seven Vasus take a dip in the river. She knew them well. When she went to heaven she had the opportunity to meet them. She wanted to greet them and salute them. She approached them and found them absorbed in deep conversation. She stayed back and listened .

The Third Vasu said." The Kuru Kshetra ended. Now our Santanav Bheeshm who is our eighth Vasu would return to us finally."

The first Vasu said."Yes. We all returned to heaven immediately after taking birth as Ganga's sons, She threw us in the river and gave us Mukti.But the last one has to endure the curse for a longer period. He is Bheeshm."

The fourth Vasu said." Yes. He suffered so much due to the feud between Kauravas and Pandavas."

The fifth Vasu had a frown on his face." Don't you think that the way he fell on the bed of arrows is gruesome? Surely the third Pandav committed a crime."

The sixth vasu accused." Arjun did that by using Sikhandi. Isn't it disgraceful?"

The seventh Vasu stated." It is unpardonable. He incurred sin. He should be punished."

Ulupi got reeling sensation. She immediately prayed to her father who appeared before her. Kauravya saw his daughter's agitated face." What happened Putri? Why are you so disturbed?"He asked.

Ulupi told him the conversation of the Vasus. She pleaded with him." Let us go Pitasri to convince the Vasus not to curse him. Arjun is innocent."

Vasus thundered at Kauravya." Why are you interfering in this matter? We won't tolerate what Arjun did to Bheeshm.It is unrighteous."

Gangadevi appeared and said." Yes I agree.My heart broke on seeing Bheeshm on the bed of arrows. Till Uttarayan he has to bear the pain as he can not leave his body."

The first Vasu retorted." And those were the arrows shot from Gandiv.Surely the pain will be unbearable."

Kauravya requested." Arjun loves his grandfather a lot. It is painful to him to do so. Please forgive his deed. He did that only to pave way to establish Dharmaraj."

Ulupi prayed with folded hands." Ganga Mata you know Arjun is like a son to Santanav Bheeshm. He is so reluctant to do that but Pitamah himself wanted to submit himself. He wished Mukti from his dearest Arjun's arrows."

Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Ganga closed her eyes. She knew what Ulupi says is right. Bheeshm loved Arjun like his own son. The glow on his face when he tells about Arjun's achievements how can she forget? He declared before her." Mata Arjun filled the void in my heart. I forgot that I had no offspring. He called me Taat(father) But I prevented him and said I am his grandfather. Still I am swept off my feet by Arjun. His looks,manners and especially his affection for me made my rigid heart melt. He touched my heartstrings with his innocence. Mark my words. He will surpass me in achievements.

Whenever Arjun achieved a feat Bheeshm used to come to her and proudly tell her about his valour"

Third Vasu addressed Kauravya. " King of Nagas we decided Arjun should bear the result of his deed. That's all."

Ulupi turned to Ganga." Mata. Show mercy on him. He never wanted to fight with his grandfather. You all know how he threw his Gandiv on the first day refusing to fight. The lord has to instruct Gita to make him fight. Given an option he would have preferred living in the forest.

Sikhandi got the boon from Mahadev that she would be the reason for Santanav's fall.

That curse also should be honoured. That is why Pitamah asked Arjun to do that.

You know what he said when the arrows from Gandiv struck him? He felt elated saying they were caressing him with love as they belonged to Arjun.

Finally I dare say that Santanav Bheeshm himself never appreciates if you curse Arjun."

Ganga knew Ulupi's words are true.she looked at the Vasus. The first Vasu said." Ulupi. The Third Pandav is fortunate to have the love of his women. We consider your plea. But Arjun should get rid of his sin. Make him fall through the hands of his son Babhruvahan.it will redeem him certainly."

Ganga blessed Ulupi." Don't worry Naga princess. Govind will never let anything happen to his Parth. You do as per the instruction of Vasus"

Ganga and Vasus disappeared leaving Ulupi gratified.The Naga Princess understood what she has to do when Arjun meets Babhru in future. But still so much time is left for that to happen.

Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago