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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!
Guru Drona's entry.
Loved how he made Dury shut his mouth.. ehhehe..
Now waiting for Gurukul part...
excited.
Great part asusual Urmila.
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Drona's entry! I thought I have missed loads and Karna would be introduced Anyways, thank god not that much! I liked the end part! Reading your work gives a sensation of peace! And I loved when Yudi said "Thank god none of my brothers fell into the well." 👏👏 He is so caring!
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Posted: 10 years ago



Thanx A Lot For PM...
Edited by Sanya..25 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishali09

Lovely update as usual.

But missed ur philosophical takes and ofcourse, the poems !!

I understand, it's the intro for Guru Drona. So, it's okay.

So, I guess Yudhi will soon get his weapon.

Liked Arjun's enthusiasm for archery. If only I have half his enthu, I could have excelled in my studies.

Urmi, I have a request. I have always wondered on Bhishma and Pandavas relationship.

So, if time permits, can you write a chapter or another OS on this relationship ?

A small part on them. I just want to know Bhishma's concern n love for his Pandavas.






Thank you dear 😊 you know what, this FF is meant to be full with philosophical takes & devotional/deep poems/verses as it's Dharmaraj's pov 😆 he himself will fill the whole story with his Dharma gyan, so you will get them very frequently. Yes, only few parts will lack it, like this one.
Yes he will get his weapon in next chapter 😊
I will keep your request in my mind dear 😊 I myself love Bhishma-Pandava relationship very much, will try to write one emotional scene before division of kingdom, i.e, Khandavprastha 😊 hope you enjoyed the small scene of their relationship in chapter 9 😊
Keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Wow ! So Yudi Now Has His Gurudev ! Aww, Loved To See His Love For His Chote ! Waiting For The Next Part In Gurukul ! And Yes, The Best Part Here Was Dron Ticking Off Dury For His Arrogance !



Thank you Proteeti 🤗 yes my Yudhi loves all his brothers very much, including Krishna 😃 & Drona's ticking part 😆 well I wanted to show something like this 😊 glad that you enjoyed it. Keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

Awesome, nice part

loved it



Thank you very much 😊 I'm glad that you liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Drona's entry!!
Very nice update



Thank you very much Mamta 😊 glad that you liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lnidhi30

Super update, Sema

Yudi always thinks of others welfare...
Surely Dronacharya will have special moments with his special shishyas



Thank you very much dear 🤗 yes he always thinks for other' welfare & that's why I love him so so much 😳 yes Drona will have special moments 😃 keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sankadevimaha

Another awesome update di!!!👏👏 Finally guru dron hs come!!!⭐️😳😃 Arjun's enthusiasm towards hs bow nd arrow frm hs childhood days wer told very beautifully di!!!😃😳👏 Aur humari yudishthir ki good-manners!!!😳😳😛 Well every one must learn t frm him!!😊



Thank you so so much dear sister 🤗 Arjun's enthusiasm is an ideal before all of us dear 😊 we all should learn this from him. & yes, Yudhishthir ka good manners to sabko shikhna hi chahiye, look how concerned he is even for them who do not love him at all 😊 purest heart of Dwapar, as I always say 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11



Thank you very much dear 🤗 yes he always thinks for other' welfare & that's why I love him so so much 😳 yes Drona will have special moments 😃 keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!

Don't make Guru Drona scold Yudi, else you'll get a headache 😉😆
Eager for next part
A request: In future chapter please highlight Yudi's discussion with Arishtasena in Vana parva before yaksha war ...its such a delight to read, give your own spl touch to it 😊

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