Rishbala OS - journey of Jealous to realisation of love

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey friends , I am back after a long time to our forum and penning down a os on our Rishbala. Hope you guys enjoy it.

Journey of Jealous to realization of love

characters sketch

Rishab Kundra :

The elder son of kundra's age 24 completed his masters in UK and returned to India to take over their business. Rude and arrogant to outer world but very soft and loving person to his family members.

MADHUBALA MALIK:

Princess of both kundra's and Malik's age 22 perusing her masters. Bubbly, jovial and down to earth can fight with anyone for her family and friends.

KHUSHI KUNDRA:

Younger sis of RK and best friend of Madhu studies with Madhu and in relation with Arnav.

ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA:

Only son of raizada's who are family friends of both kundra's and malik's. Treats Madhu as his sis and loves khushi a lot.

Deepali:

A ugly witch according to our Madhu and khushi. she is always jealous of Madhu and wants to get RK not that she loves him but loves his fame.

RK's pov

Finally back after a long time to my home I didn't inform any of my family members about my arrival. I wanted to surprise them and was about to get down the car

i saw a figure climbing the wall of the house next to ours that is malik's mansion, but who can that be i was about to call and was shocked to see it was Madhubala Malik the irritating yet cute girl of mine. she is with a man OMG, is she running away? wait a second isn't he Raizada uncle's son Arnav ? at once i felt a wave of Jealous seeing them but it was replaced by another shock to see my sister Khushi accompanying them. I don't have words to express my situation one side it's my sister and on the other side my doll and that Arnav ahhh what is he upto.

I silently followed them they three climbed onto the wall of another house. ahh i forgot that uncle's name he is hell irritating kind of a person what are these 3 upto

when i am in my taughts those 3 came back and are having a grin on their faces more than everyone its Madhu

who is smiling ear to ear. I taught to deal it with later as they are coming towards my way so i went back to my car as if i have seen nothing when my sister whom i taught to be innocent climbed the wall first and waved back her buddies but her gestures towards Arnav felt something fishy but it gave peace to my heart somewhere, then my doll gestured her to call once she went to her room. Then my doll too did the same and waved back Arnav and went inside her house. In my thoughts i didn't realize that it is already 4:30 in the morning so i went towards the door and rang the bell and as expected everyone were surprised.

Next Morning

Its Holi today, its a tradition from our childhood that the festival is celebrated together by both Kundra's and Malik's. There my sister is waiting for me to join with her, so she can go to her friends when i came down we went to the backyard which is combined for both the families as both the houses are in the same compound and Madhu and I have our balconies facing each other.

Any way yeah when we reached back yard as expected Arnav and Madhu are waiting for Kushi and there my doll was looking too cute in her white suit but she didn't even notice me.

All the 3 are having their concentration towards the gate from where a girl with nonsense dressing style came with the irritating uncle yeah now i remember she is the same girl with whom both khushi and Madhu are hell irritated. yeah her name is Deepali, wait what happened to her hair its too unnatural k if you guys think i notice her too much then its that she has the hair which remembers me of some dish wash scrub those three are giggling so much don't know what happened as I was surrounded by guests I missed the entertainment. They did something to that witch that she ran away and the 3 secretly hi -fied each other. Later even Arnav came and greeted me including Madhu's bro Sultan but she hasn't looked at me can you believe the girl who used to be always around me hasn't noticed me. When my Mom called her and introduced me to her, first she was confused later it turned into frown and my mom is grinning like a fool even Arnav and Kushi I taught to ignore it but felt somewhere insecure at the taught that she is not the same anymore. Don't know why but I couldn't be myself that day, taught to clear the matter later as I was hell tired. As I have to go to clz next day

even though my studies are completed and took hold of our company i am going to clz tomorrow to give a lecture on business economics that to where these three stupid's study. I haven't told them as i wanted to give them a pleasant shock more to my doll.

next day

I am moving towards the class room where Madhu is coming in front of me with her eyes closed and the expression on her face showed she is hell worried i was about to ask her what happened she at once kissed me

okay its just a peck but i was sweetly shocked how much i want to enjoy i couldn't as we are in the class room packed with students she backed and i don't know what to say. She ran away from there and Kushi and Arnav also ran behind her. other than those 3 there is one more person who is hell worried that is Deepali. I don't know what to say when I heard about its being bet I was so angry on Madhu that just for a bet she did this.

Madhu's pov

Holi day

Today early morning I got call from Kushi saying my RK is back. can you believe bappa my Rishu is back I was so happy and wanted to meet him at once but my friends made me to promise them that I would ignore him so that I can know his feelings. when maa, I mean rishu's called me and introduced me to RK i was confused first, but then saw everyone in the room are grinning like fools and trying to pull my leg , including Maa who always supported me and save me from their teasing. so I frowned at her and moved out.

next day:

Deepali gave me a challenge as she got to know that its me who stick chewing gum to her hair and poured lots of gum and also again it's me who mixed itching powder in colour water poured on her and made her embarrass in front of everyone, she thought to take revenge yes you heard it right I did all that because she tried to create misunderstandings between kushi and me even tried to seperate kushi and arnav yes they are in relation. And after all that I done in the night she had guts to attend holy party when I got to know she is attending that to, to get close to my RK I along with my friends prepared that special color specially for that ugly witch.

so where I was yeah her revenge, she challenged me to kiss who ever enters first into the class I taught to drop even though she gave me a tempting offer that she would be do whatever we 3 want her to do but I couldn't as i want to share my first kiss only with my Rishu at that time arnav messaged me that its rishu who is entering the class. Though I was confused of him being in college I taught I can hit two birds with a single arrow but seeing my RK's expressions I felt disgusted of myself and felt suffocated and ran away from there and my two friends followed me. Arnav side hugged me and comforting me and opposite to us stood my RK with his ever so famous Smirk and my two friends left me with him, can you believe bappa these love birds left your poor baby to this Right Kamina.

RK's pov

I came there to scold her but her one expression once again made me confused making me think is she that innocent. she cutely told sorry and started saying her bet story and started blabbering that it is the first time she did pull this type of stunt and promised me that she will never do. Listening i am the first one to kiss her okay ahh peck i felt so relieved and went back to take the class whole class was hell shocked to know i am the guest lecturer. And the day passed on.

1 week later

It is the party of armaan where these 3 including me and other family friend's children attended as it is strictly only to the younger generation in a night club. There Vicky a guy who is also a family friend but not a good character guy tried to misbehave with my doll before arnav or armaan can react I beat him black and blue even i don't know what i was doing at that time when Madhu stopped me and thanked me i told her i would do the same even if there is another girl in her place. she felt hurt i taught it was because of Vicky. when armaan came there she rushed to him and hugged him i felt like volcano erupting in me but when she called him bhai i felt so serene and peaceful.

Madhu's pov

I felt so hurt when RK said he would have done the same if any other girl in my place, as i taught he is doing it for me when ammy came there i rushed to him.

kushi's pov

i am towards the back of my bro and i have been observing his feelings when Madhu called armaan as bhai his expressions showed his feelings towards Madhu. even after going home he is seeing towards Madhu's balcony i felt so happy for my bro and my beastie i along with my darling boyfriend and our family members made a plan.

Next morning i told Madhu about it, and i have noticed hope to get her love in her eyes.

RK's pov

I was informed that i have to meet a girl actually for my marriage can you believe when I realized and taught to tell Madhu about my feelings my family gave me the biggest shock of my life , more than my family it's my doll who wished me all the best , dejected i went to say no to the girl.

Madhu's pov

when i told Rishu all the best he felt so hurt that I wanted to reveal him it's me whom he is going to meet but somehow stopped myself from doing that.

evening RK's pov

I went to the hotel booked by our parents there in a corner a couples table was booked for us, there a female figure was sitting facing her back towards me whom i felt familiar when i reached the table i received my surprise i felt over the moon to get my doll as my soon to be bride sitting in front of me clad in a sari .

From her i came to know it's our family who planned it. we had our first couple dance there on a slow romantic beat,


later after dinner I took her to beach and proposed her. then even she told her feelings towards me at last we kissed each other our first complete kiss under the shining moon and between the pleasant sound of the waves and cool breeze .

hope u all will like it.

Let me Know your opinion friends. plz do like and comment.

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ananya2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Poojitha congrats on the new story.
Awesome OS
Loved it.
Rishbala, Arshi everybody in the story.
Love the family bonding.
Rishbala together forever.
Do write more on Rishbala.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I never knew that you write on rishbala too.arshi too.surprising.loved madhu and arshi bonding.loved how you narrated the story in each person's pov. rk's description about deepali's hair was funny.rk as their guest lecturer was interesting and unexpected. madhu kissing him was a surprise. but it was for a bet. armaan is also there.surprise.madhu's pov was surprising..she too loves rk. poor rk was sad when his family found a girl for him without knowing that its madhu.rk finding out that its madhu and feeling over the moon with her was lovely. their dance..proposal and kiss on beach with moon on background were romantic. perfect pics.esp the rishbala pic with moon suited the scene very well
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely os..
Loved it from start to end...

Loved Rishbala's bonding..
They both had feelings for each other but never confessed..

Finally they confessed...
Do write more os like this..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely story
light and funny

I loved what they did to Deepali
Edited by Hend_Refai - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey..

welcome back..

and that was superb..

the two favourite couples in one update..

the love & bonding between them was superb..

from start to end.. all amazing..

loved reading it..

thankyou so much for this :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome back
Superb and beautiful OS,
loved it,
loved the 3 friends bonding,
finally Rishbala confessed,
thanks for this awesome story,do write more stories on Rishbala
Edited by harini_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome OS. Lovely story n way of telling the story is amazing.Pics r perfect. Bonding of three friends is nice.Rishbala moments r romantic. Write more .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful and so Fantastic Story
I just loved it
The bond between both the Kundra and the Malik families are great
while RK now back home seeing his doll with Arnav and jealousy kicks in
but loved that he proposed her at the end
Khushi and Arnav are also happy

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely,beautiful n cute os.
Love rishbala as well as d bonding among madhu,khushi n arnav..both kundras n malik made plan to bring rishbala together.wow.

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