RiShbala TS 'FalliNg fOr yOu !'||COMPLETED#30||(10/01) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Anntempleton

Nice start.

Congratulations on New story .[
Thanks dear..

/DIV][DIV]I liked the concept and its new and fresh.
Thanks.. Glad u like it..

Looks like Rk is a perfectionist . I like emotional but strong madhu[/
Yeah.. She needs to be strong..

DIV][DIV]First I was wondering if madhu was cuckoo. but felt sad when learned what happened to Trish . I guess after the incident madhu n Trish moved away from home.
Hahahaa.. Cuckoo.. Nice.. But her past made her like tthis..

Looking forward to Rk try to befriend madhu.

Thank you for pm .

Originally posted by: RM14

Superb update dear Aaniya..
congratz for new story ..keep writing AA.
its different story and different start too ..loved it.
Thankypu so much My DD..


Aww right now Madhu and Rk don't share good vibes
Madhu think Rk is not good but its also true that Rk helped her sis to be taken to hospital ..
and hope they get to know each other well in future..
In future yeah.. In starting itself misunderstanding created naa..


feeling so bad for Trishna ..
Madhu is taking care for Trishna ..strong girl..waiitng for her didu to be cured..
so all in all Rk didn't have good impression on Madhu and Trihsna but but abhi toh story shuru hui hai..
aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya?
Yep.. First impression hi garbar ho gayi.. Lol .



update soon though i came late but i am latest you know ..
Naa.. Not wprry abput being late.. Without ur comment i wont put up my next update.. Lol

thanks for pm dear and sorry for late reply..wanted to read it peacefully not in hurry.

Originally posted by: patelshradha50

Good start and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Awesome start..
Thankyou..

Madhu n her story is so heart wrenching .. but she is so strong n a fighter
RK he is ride but not bad but messing things
Ya.. In start its akready messed so he thought not to tangle it more..


Seems like he is totally into madhu though not openly acknowledging his feelings

Waiting for their story to proceed

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Awesome start..
Rk Mr.Perfectionist jisa sab kuch perfect chaiha work and life ma uska car ka samna trishna aagayi aur wo usa hospital le gaya wanha sa pata chala uska mental problem hai and uska relative ki koi news nahi thi toh rk mental asylum bhejna ka socha par Madhu ki entry hui jo apne didu ki search ma thi and jab sab bura behave kia toh trishna ka truth bola aur sab shock hai omg bahut bura hua uska saath.. Rk ko vi sad feel hua guilty hai wo itna kuch madhu ko bolna and behave kia is lia.. Madhu rk ka film set ma kam karti hai omg sikky,dipali lead hai film ka aur rk yanha vi mehul ki band baja raha hai.. Rk madhu sa sorry bolta hai par madhu nahi manti aur rk ka dil ma madhu ka liya ek soft corner hai jo uska care kar raha hai.. Madhu ki life character sab kuch rk ko intresting lagta hai jo strong hai apne didu ka liya itna kuch kar rahi hai rk usa jana chahta hai help karna chahta hai.. Hope rishbala friend ho jaye aur rk ka dil madhu madu bolna lage..
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Awesome.Loved it .Ur way of writing stories n portraying character is superb.

Originally posted by: HappySoul4ever

I agree the onlookers and people who pass by make it so big and let the victim suffer or soemtimes they will just stare at teh victims and ask dumb questions by just pushign aside the deal to help them first..HATE that but its the truth
Exactly.. They claim to be activr citizen bit in real they are just gossip monger for whom HELP word is just in dictionary.


LOL..the way RK dealt with such people is so good...At first I thought is that MAdhu but naah..we willd escribe our heroine ina dfrnt way so..I was kinda hoping it shoudnt be Madhu and TADaaa..she is Trish..
Hahaa.. I love u for this.. U exactly put on who is our hero & heroine.. They are matter of charm..


Loved this MAdhu,,she is confident, smart and has loads of self respect which I love..and then the way RK dealt with Trish is bad..I mean I knw he is pissed coz he lost his deal but but but ..oke lets accept that RK is RK and so is Bittuji hahhahah
Yup.. Rk is Rk.. So all these.. Well.. His way of dealing things..😉


The way Madhu confronted to them abt her Didus condition is heart wrenching...her life got shattered ..who is thta bas***d who did this to her..pls find him..I guess its gonna be SULLU ullu..if not them pls ignore my prediction hahahhahaha
Ur guess are always right.. And i wonder how.. 😉


and the way teh sisters talk and share sweet cute words..loved it..

RK si guilty...hmm really..for ac hange he got smitten by her confidence and self respect..way to go GIRL

He apologized but Madhu royallu shut him up hahhaha what a scene..LOl optimistic Radhaji hahahah..come on radhaji instigate him so that he will fall for her
Hehehee.. Royally shut up.. Hehehee..rk dwserves royal treatment.


LOved the last part too...whats RK gonando next...

I am waiting..thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: luvvivian286

Fantastic start
Congo for ur story

Originally posted by: cutical

nice dear trishgot hit by rk car rk took her hospital she is mad madhu comes hthere to takje her doic come to take her to hospital but madhu nt let him rk accused teeling she need money to fram him in false case madhu tells him that her sis nt mad she is rapoed and lost ber mentel balance rj shocked madhu working in rk studio rk tries to apo!gize for his behaviour buyt she gave him a cvold shoulder rk trs to know why ther ei s soi much pain in madhu eyes nice continue soon dear

Originally posted by: Sapnaf52

]congrats for new story. ..dear. .
superb start. ..
Thankyou.. Sappy

trishna is mentally challenge. .
poor trishna she is raped. ..
feeling sad for her. .
but madhu cares her lots. .
madhu is strong, self made girl. .
she didn't like some so sympathy on her sis. .
Ya.. Coz sympathy are just pity..


rk is producer. .
and madhu is hair dresser. .in rk's movie..
rk apologize his behavior. .
depali is heroine. .
and sikky hero. .lolz. .aani. .comedy movies bana rahi ho kya. .
Tum tph mujhe jaanti hi ho.. How much i love comedy..

I think comedy love story hoga. ..
bittuji bring all madhu info. .
early waiting for next part. ..
update soon. .
thanks for pm.