Rishbala OS - Code Red epilogue on pg 9 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Uma never in my life i thought you would get the traits of Kavya...😲

even you started killing the leads huh..😒

but it was very good...killer madhu huh...😎.

i'm waiting for the epilogue now...

@Kavya.. asar dikha diya tune 😡🤣

😆 Tanu... I love you re... Rofl!!!
Only you understand, how big a SADIST I am... Hai na!!! Hahaha
Uma has finally become my soul sister... She has become a carbon copy of me!!! See... This is my Charm!!! Hahahaha *Evil Laugh*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15


😆 Tanu... I love you re... Rofl!!!
Only you understand, how big a SADIST I am... Hai na!!! Hahaha
Uma has finally become my soul sister... She has become a carbon copy of me!!! See... This is my Charm!!! Hahahaha *Evil Laugh*

ha ha ha, there is nothing to blame kavya, as the story was planned that way and that is code red, u all will get a clear pic of the title in the epilogue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os 😃why you started killing the leads??????..😒
i'm waiting for the epilogue now... plzzz update soon 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: book.worm

ermm... what is code red?😕😆

nice OS... waiting to see how you wrap it up... i wonder whether rk is really dead as he went away to attend a call... hmmm waiting to read more

code red indicatesthat the said person is dead, can't explain more, as it will break the suspense, will explain in detail in the next update, I mean the epilogue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15

Uma... Thank you so so much for the dedication Sis!!! Love you!!!

What a story!!!! Brilliant!! The concept, the plotting, the characterisations... Everything was so perfectly written, Sis!!! You indeed did a splendid job!!
Starting from the background, I personally like the army plot... It adds a different touch to Rishabh Kundra as an army officer... And the same character I got here too... He is so intensely portrayed... Infact quite smart when it came to his work but poor soul... Got defeated through the hands of his heart!!!
And what to say about Madhubala... A suspicious, a mysterious lady to talk about!!! Less expressive in open but she too felt that love for him... A true love but was helpless in front of her mind!!! She actually had to betray her love for her commitment!!!
I never thought you would actually kill one of the leads like me;!! ROFL
NOW YOU ARE TRULY MY SISTER, UMA!!!! ROFL!!!
You left us on the cliff hanger... Code Red!!! A mysterious One Shot indeed...
I will eagerly wait for the epilogue...

thank a lot sis, happy that u liked ut, when I start tp oen down this concept, I decided to dedicate this to u, as I know how u liked my previous story on the same background.

Am happy that everybody can now define us equally, a sadist for kiling the leads, ha ha ha.

You got the characters right, that is the main thing with this part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

nice os dear👍🏼

oh my poor rk😭😭
here also bomb blast😭😭
if u ve any plan to continue this os then show that rk is still alive as he survived 4m d blast & make rishbala live happily together😃
keep writing more of different stories like this but pls no tragic ending, only happy ending of rishbala😳
thanks 4 d pm dear😳


sorry dear, can't pro ise u anytthing right now as it will break the surprise, and reg os, I can't promise for a happy ending all the time, if its ss or ff, we can bring a happy end, but not for an os, sorry dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Thanks for the dedication..😊😊
quite a daring subject..loved the plot and characters😊
Please do update the epilogue soon..
What's Code Red..
is this the treat?😉
very small treat😭
Edited by SreeRK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
fantastic os 👏but really felt bad for rk 😭
eagerly waiting for epilogue di so that i can know is rk really dead or he escaped from blast and what madhu is going to do next😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
really grt nd diff cncpt uma dear it... rishab army man nd madhu terrorist...
update soon Nxt part!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
So madhu is terrorist huhh ??
Poor rk...he died in a bomblast just like d rk in serial...
But madhu loves him...can u plz add me to ur pm list...
Plz update d epilogue soon..

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