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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳Thank you everybody so much for appreciation of my FF!!!🤗🤗🤗 I really want to update,but I can't because I have to attend freshman welcome day for college and so many tests! I cannot wait for the Summer and start updating more rapidly!😃 I promise I will try to update as SOON AS POSSIBLE!😆😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read it it is awsmmm plz pm me next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya! Thanks for the PM. First part of Chapter 3 was just awesome. Hmm so they were best friends back in college.. is it unrequited love that's making RK act like this? Did he love Madhu somehow and she didn't know? Hmm i wana know why she slapped him in the hospital😉So many mysteries huh! I like the dark turn this is going to take😛So RK's sister and mum know he's acting outta revenge! Hope they will be her allies when she gets married😉Really can't understand how Madhu's family can readily believe what they saw. And that Maasi just wish she'd get lost..each time pointing fingers at Madhu! Liked RK's reaction when he put that strand of hair behind Madhu's ear at the end of the first part!😊


The flashbacks do indeed help. So it was Madhu who proposed and that damn idiot cheated on her with that witch Aditi! The gall of the man to compare both and just because Madhu doesn't wear clothes that flaunt her curves! Typical of a foolish man. Madhu so didn't deserve him and glad he went off with Aditi. Foolish couple made to be together😛 What's up with Nandini? How mean was she to Madhu! Seriously can't believe this! On top the cruel words of her own mum. I felt so sad for Madhu!😕How can a mum utter such words? Pfftt hmmm the near-fall. So RK does love her and is punishing her for not loving back right? Because the fear in his eyes when she was about to fall indicates something for sure! Liked the lil fun and teasing in the mar vaala bit😊Somehow hope is not lost but they will have to go through a lot of dark and twisted revenge right?😉Why should that Varun be angry? he made his choice and has to live with it! Hmm the SR was fiery! I really wana know what made RK become like this since Madhu knows him to be sweet and caring! Nice promo.


Can't wait till you update! Continue soon!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi..
Weekend is here 😆...where are you hun ?? 😉..come soon and update please 😃
Edited by aDarkAngel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read all parts in one go 😛 I really liked this so far. It seems really dark. And this RK is really evil. I am really happy that Varun guy is married to Madhu's cousin . Made for each other couple 😆. I wish both RM turning soft towards each other . Wants to know the reason behind RK's evilness . Can u pls pm me the next updates. I tried to buddy u but i am so sorry my email id seems troubling me 😭.It shows error . Can u pls send me a buddy req pls pls😃
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Exellent start Dear 😊 Pls continue soon & pm Me 😃 & Pls can U send Me a friend request?
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I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS AND CONTENTS OF THE SHOW MADHUBALA-EK ISHQ EK JUNOON!
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OMG! Sorry guys! I was at CAL DAY Yesterday!!!!!!😳 This chapter has more ANSWERS!THANK YOU so much for comments and likes!🤗 Please do comment, like, and criticize!😊Sorry NO PM's this time because I had too much work to catch up on.Thanks!😳

Chapter 4

I stared at the floor in silence as I felt my body ache in distress. Life seemed to have catched out of me as tears were not evident anymore and unbearable. I sat there in my bridal attire as I repeated the moment over and over again when RK had brutally touched and hurt every pin of my soul. Sadly, I feel that more would be done than just pain.

My breath caught out of me as I began to search for the exact moment when RK had changed in college,but I couldn't find it. I closed my eyes as I remembered my third year in college.

Flashback:

I quickly grabbed my books as I sighed after a long day of Organic Chemistry studying at the library. I checked my watch as I noticed the next train would leave in fifteen minutes as I had to necessarily get there in time in order to get home.

Quickly, I grabbed my backpack and zipped up all my books and supplies in it before making a dash towards my bike that was locked outside of the main library. I winced as I fixed my glasses and tied my hair up before unlocking the bike and beginning to peddle down the hill and the rocky pathway towards the nearby train station.

I smiled as I said "Hi" to the yoga team nearby the small bank of river that ran by the university as I looked up at the falling autumn leaves and still green leaves that showed through and crimsoned under the Sun. I quickened my speed and suddenly I felt a jerk. My mouth widened as I looked up and noticed another tall guy quickily riding the bike towards me. I pressed on the brake to slow down,but I couldn't and before I knew it I felt my bike coming towards the other man.

"Ahhh!" I screamed and I felt my hands fly up in the air as a loud rumble hit my ears as my bike hit the bike opposite of me as I felt the metal hit my leg as my face hit the rocky ground.

I felt another bike drop and heard footsteps running towards me. I felt my head move up as a hard hand laid under it. My eyes shot open as I felt a touch under my body as my voice cracked and saw a face above me. The man carried a French faced look and had long,dark shaggy black hair that fell near his eyes. His mouth widened as I felt a warm touch near my cheek as I felt a shock a through me as his touch created goosebumps.

"Are you ok?! Oh My God! I'm so sorry!" The man exclaimed as I shook my head and got on my arms as I sat up.

"Yeah! No problem. It's not your fault...my bike's brakes were apparently not working," I mumbled as my face flushed in embrassment.

"No problem. I shouldn't have gone to fast on you," The man mumbled as I slightly smiled and shook my head.

"Oh My God! Your hand is bleeding" The man exclaimed as he grabbed my hand and looked at it. I looked down and up at him.

"No,it's ok...I'm fine." I said as I got up.

The man quickly went to his backpack and pulled out a band-aid and walked up to me.

"Here, you should put this on it, to stop the bleeding," The man said as he stared at the cut. I shook my head and smiled as I placed on the band-aid and looked up at him.

I felt his stare at me as I felt uncomfortable and moved back and down on my foot.

"So,where were you going?" The man asked as he grabbed my backpack and handed it over to me.

"Ummm...to the train station," I spoke as I felt my voice break as I stared at his nearly tanned skin and tight muscles that showed through his shirt.

"Oh...I was also going there. It pretty long away from here unless if you have a bike...Do you want a ride?" The man asked as he gulped and looked at me.

I looked up at him as my eyes widened and I began to bite my lip and fidget. The man seemed ok and not too bad,but it's too hard trusting people these days. Sometimes, trust cannot be established too fast.

"I'm RK by the way," RK said as he put his hand out for me to shake. I looked up at him and then his hand. He gave a slight smile as I gulped and slightly smiled as I placed my hands into him.

"S-S-Sure," I whimpered as I felt guilty that I kind of crashed into his bike and how he was still being courteous to me. So, might as well allow him to give me a ride.

I smiled as I hung my backpack on the bike's handles as got on the seat as I felt two large arms around me as they were placed on the handle.

My breath stopped as I never felt a man come so close to me. His chest touched my back as I felt his hot breath near my ear.My face turned deep red as he began to ride the back.

I shook my face as I stared down at the pathway as RK rode the bike along. I felt the sun hit our face as a blush appeared on my cheeks. His strong arms seemed to touch my arms lightly as he smiled back at me as I gave him a light smile too.

Flashback ends:

I felt the cold water run through my body as I closed my eyes and tried to come back to reality. Wishing, I had stayed back in the past,but I couldn't...Everything had changed. RK was not sweet anymore and perhaps lost his charm. He had become pure evil and I was unfamiliar with the reasons for it.

Sadly, I wish I had kept that RK I met the first day forever,but now I only have his dark side left with me. Nothing seemed proper and appropriate at this moment. My eyes lowered as I felt tears washing down my face.

My hands ran through my anarkali suit that seemed to touch the floor. I grabbed my long red duptaa as I dragged my red and green suit across the floor. I took a deep breath as I slightly opened the wooden door and peeked through it.

There slept a silent RK as he laid at the center of the bed with his body spread out on it. He laid like a baby on the bed as his face portrayed peace that once should it's darkest evils.

I quickly grabbed my duptaa and tiptoed out of the room. The room seemed to be in chaos as I noticed the pillows of the floor and broken glass on the wooden floor too. I took a deep sigh as I tied my hair up with a clip as I began to fix up the pillows. RK snored lightly as he laid on the bed with his abs perfectly revealing themselves he laid shirtless on the bed.

My cheeks flushed in embrassment as I turned my face around and stared down at the broken glass on the floor.

I grabbed a dustbin and began to brush in the glass. A small piece of glass not moving in with the brush. I shook my head in annoyance as I grabbed to pick up the glass and suddenly I felt a pain jerk into my hand.

"Ouch!" I yelped as I began to feel blood trickling down my hand. I bit my lip as I noticed a noise behind me.

My eyes turned around as I suddenly felt a tall,dark shadown tower over me. RK stood there with his arms crossed over as he had a glare on his face. My eyes immediately lowered as flashes of last nights slap and abuse appeared through my mind.

My tears appeared through my eyes as I dropped my dustbin and got up. I felt myself the need to flee,but I couldn't My feet froze as I felt RK still staring at me as he seemed to come a step closer to me.

I felt hair raise up on my skin as I began to step back lightly. His hot breath seemed to breathe through my face as I gulped and felt my heartbeat increase lightly.

Crap. My feet began to move back as I felt myself trip back on my feet. Suddenly, I felt a light, hand touch my waist as my eyes widened in shock. His touch seemed to seep through my skin as my hands held on to the wall.

I felt my eyes look up at the sharp,French-faced features that stared back at me. I startled as I felt my feet fly up as RK pulled my hand and placed me hard against his chest. My eyes lowered in shyness as a blush appeared on my face and become deep hot.

RK seemed to admire my features as I felt his eyes rolling over my body as I felt his breath near my ear. His breath moved up and down my face as I closed my eyes and moved my face down. My lips opened as I felt his nose touch my cheek as he loosened his grip on me as my hands fell down.

I felt a smooth, hard hand touch mine's as I looked down and noticed RK touching my hand that laid in his. I suddenly jerked my hands as I began to move backwards as I felt a hard object hit my back as I jerked and felt the wall touch my back.

I lowered my eyes as RK approached and stared at my hand that had glass pierced through my hand. I bit my lip as tears fell down my eyes.

RK moved back towards me as I hit the wall as I looked up and saw RK as his eyes were downcasted on my hand.

He slowly began to grab my hand as I felt myself shake as I bit my lip.I was ready for the worse as I closed my eyes. Suddenly, I felt warmth touch my hands as I felt a thumb caressing my hand in silence. I felt myself shiver as I looked up and noticed RK staring back at me as he caressed my hand.

I felt him come closer to me as I backed up against the wall and felt my duptaa fall down as it slipped off my shoulder. RK came closer as his lips seemed to caress my face as his eyes caught my hand. I suddenly felt my hand pull up as a hand softly wrapped around my waist and oulled me up into a cradle positon.

RK's arms wrapped around me as I stared back at him and placed my hand around him. His face seemed to feature the same worried expression the day I had met him. He looked at me with furrowed eyebrows as he shook his head and walked me up to the bed.

My eyes lowered as I tried to hide my tears.His heartbeat seemed to close to me as I felt him wrap myself into him. I felt him lower me down on to the bed as he placed me lightly on it. I felt him above me as his body pressed upon me and stared at me in silence as I looked up and stared into his eyes.

His lips parted to say something,but stopped as his face came closer to mine's. My heartbeat increased as he placed his hand on my face and suddenly stopped. He seemed the need to touch me,but you couldn't as he parted his hand away and released himelf away from me as he walked away to the dresser drawer.

Flashback:

I stood there in silence as RK stood next to me as he had helped me get to the train platform. I heard the operator announcing the next train as I sat there in silence and looked up at RK.

"I didn't know you also boarded this train," RK said as I slightly smiled and shook my head.

"I know. I never saw you too...the world is a huge place," I noted as I looked down and stared into my hands.

"But, my mom used to say that every and each person meet each other at least twice in their lifetime even as strangers. Perhaps, we will meet each other again in another time," RK noted as he stared into the darkness and crept secrecy on to him.

"Perhaps,we would've changed completely from five years from now and meet each other again," RK noted as I looked at him and began to giggle.

"Nobody really changes so drastically in one lifetime," I noted as I looked back at him. RK looked back at me and gave me a serious look.

"Sure, but people do change...You'll find out later in life after some exp...experience," RK noted as I shook my head and looked at the train.

I heard the train whistle as I got up and move up on to the near edge of the platform and suddenly I felt my foot trip and hear screams before a strong,hard hand grabbed on to mines.

I felt my heart beat as my eyes widened. I felt myself getting pulled up and turn around as two arms wrapped around my waist. I looked up as I felt my hair fly as RK looked up at me and stared at me with a worried look.

"Are you ok?!" RK exclaimed as I stared back at him. Friendship had begun...

Flashback Ended:

You were right RK. Everybody changes,but I feel you didn't. I thought as RK grabbed a band-aid as he walked up to me and sat down on the bed.

I sat up as I stared at my bleeding hand. RK grabbed it and began to press on the wound with a cotton ball as I bit my lip in pain. RK shook his head and stared back at me.

"Why do you make me so mad?! God! Do,something properly at least. Look at this!" RK yelled as I felt tears unravel themselves and come down my cheeks. I felt the pain like thorns as I yelped and screamed. My hand instantly went to RK'S shoulder as I gripped on to it and closed my eyes shut.

"Madhu...why do you always do this? Pain is often too unbearable to bear," RK noted as I looked up at him with blurry vision. He created the same mystery around him.

"I'm...s-s-sorry,"I whispered as RK shook his head and wiped my wound. I suddenly felt a large pain through my hand as I felt my arm instantly go around RK as my face laid on his shoulder. I felt my face turn red with heat as I closed my eyes shut.

His muscles moved up and down as I buried my face into it. I felt RK sigh as he took the piece of glass out and laid it on the bed and began to place a band-aid on my hand. I felt tears fall down my cheeks as I grabbed on to RK's arm.

We sat there in silence as I began to cry and placed my wounded hand around RK too and hugged him. I broke down as I felt myself falling apart. Everything was wrong. Everything. My family hated me. My mother wanted to leave me. I ws used by RK. Nobody believes me. RK scared every inch of my body. I lost it. I lost everything...I felt two hands wrap around me as my heart began to beat faster again RK's.

Suddenly, I felt a hard push as I felt myself falling pack on to the bed as RK stared at me with anger.

"Don't you dare touch me!" RK yelled as he pointed his finger at me. He had changed. He left the glimpse of old RK that had appeared in him.

"RK...I'm...sorry," I whispered as I placed my hands on my cheeks as I got up and grabbed my duptaa and placed it on my shoulders. I felt myself anger as I felt RK stare at me in anger. Something,was wrong. I wanted answer. Now.

"What happened?...What's wrong?...Why did you change?!" I bursted as I kneeled down my knees and placed my hands on his shoulders and shook him.

"Remember how much fun we had when we bunked class? Remember...you...and me as partners? You always gave me confidence and I gave you my bubbliness. RK...listen," I said as I shook RK's cheek as he stared at me in still anger.

"Just answer me! What changed?! Why are you behaving like this?!" I screamed as I shook RK and crossed my hands.

RK stared at me in a cold-hearted stare. I was ready to get a slap before I heard RK roar.

"You CHANGED! You forgot us! You forgot everything we had!" RK bursted as he pushed me away as he got up and looked away.

My hands went up to his strong hand as I held on to them and tried to stop him from leaving.

"RK...at least...give me an answer! God!" I screamed as I held on to his hand tightly.

"That's why I married you...You will think all your life about what happened and why. You will never know what we really lost Madhu...Never..." RK whispered darkly before he shook me away and began to walk away...

Edited by xoxoJasminexoxo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update dear
rk n madhu were friends
but she forgot him...his friendship
in the process of loving someone else
i hope rishbala pave their way back together
Edited by christobelle - 11 years ago
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awesome update jas👏👏👏👏so rishbala was friends and tey seems so comfortable to each other but what happens that changed rk so much he is hurting madhu iam feeling bad for madhu 😭😭 but rk still care for her .😳 waiting for next update jas but jyadha intezaar math karwana😳
Edited by rekha.366 - 11 years ago
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Okay ...Nyc update so when will RK reveal the Fact? Plz PM me next time dear

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