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Note:Hi guys...Thought i could start with an OS in this forum. Will try updating my ff's but give me some time cause i need to think. This idea flashed my mind, so i thought i would pen it down. Comments are appreciated.

THE RISE OF A SUPERSTAR

He was done for the day. This film set was consuming just too much of his energy. He was a superstar and yet he was working for more than ten hours on the set, a rarity to him. Thanks to the inexperienced heroine who had to give several takes to get the scene right.

And if that were not enough, he still had to shoot a song sequence which had to be shot today, thanks to the tight scheduling of the film. Boy! He would never again sign a film with newcomers, but this one was pretty and he was all for beauty, he smirked.

The set was being decorated for the song sequence and all the female junior artists were busy trying to catch his attention, but did he care? He just wanted to get this film over and done with, so that he could party all night with his super model friends.

The director asked everybody to gather around to start the shoot. Just when they finished rehearsing and the director called ACTION, they were interrupted by the opening of a door in the sets.

If his mood was foul, it couldnt get any fouler. Here he was trying to complete this damned sequence, to be interrupted by all these useless people. He was so angered that he just walked out of the sets to give a peice of his mind to the person who interrupted his shoot.

As he inched closer, he could see that it was a female. He pulled her by the shoulder and turned her around roughly, but what he saw took his breath away.

He had been with his share of beautiful women all decked up, but never had he seen such an etheral beauty. She was dressed in a simple white salwar suit with her curly hair kept at one side, but her radiance could be seen even through her simple clothing.

Her beautiful almond eyes looking at him nervously, stirred something inside him which he thought was dead. He did not know how long he had stared at her before somebody called out,

"Madhubala, tumhara costume andhar rakha hai. Agli baar agar late aayi, tho tum Kaam se gayi. Jaakar junior artists ke saath song practise karle."

He was brought out of his trance when she jerked his hands away and walked off, but not before turning and giving him a second glance.

It was then he knew that she was no junior artist. Today he knew he had witnessed the rise of a superstar, hidden behind the facade of a junior artist. Not for long, because she would rise from the ashes, like a pheonix rises, with all its beauty.

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So how was it guys? Biting my nails, thinking about the comments i will recieve.😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful dear ❤️ 👏
so well adept to exactly how its shown !! 👍🏼
Perfect !
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

edit
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Edited by drashsree100 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great one dear ... seriously ... do continue... i would love to read more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: drashsree100


Beautiful dear ❤️ 👏
so well adept to exactly how its shown !! 👍🏼
Perfect !
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

edit
me first
😛

thank you...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshdb

great one dear ... seriously ... do continue... i would love to read more..

Thanks... But this was a short OS. Wouldnt know how to continue it...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..awesome
luvd it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome. 👏Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice OS...

liked how they met...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was beautifully written 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!! Awesome update!! Pls write more :)

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