'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 41

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Posted: 17 years ago
it was very cute n naughty updt....... ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
Vow amazing update yaar. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Raj ne kya kuch nahi saha oar phir bhi vo itna accha hai. ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Naina bhi Raj ko bahut acche se samajhti hai isiliye us ne Raj ko insist nahi kiya uncle aunty ko maaf kar ne k liye. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Naveen bechara kya kare Raj us ki koi baat nahi sunta hai par Naina ki hi sunta hai. ๐Ÿ˜†
Wrong time par entry maari Aky ne. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Poor guys. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Par vo scene complete ho gaya shoppine mall me . ๐Ÿ˜‰
Naughty Raj bewakuff banaya Aky ko. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Mall me bhi romance me laga hai raj kahi to Sharam kare.
Excellent update. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
@sweta
thnx!

@ashu
thnx!!

@rituka
thnx!

@vvdn
thnxx yaar!!

@aarthi
thnx!!.......

@shaina
thnx!!....raj is very strong!!.......ohh that was one of my fav too....the way naina says nahi before that.......i like that scene too!!....he is geting nayghtier...bingo!...and hell get more naughty!!...lol!!....yupp tommorows the enagagement!!..i mean real tommorow...lol!!...

@dolly
thnx!!

@lipi
thnx!!

@mahak
thnxx!!....yea naina aur raj bahut hi acche hain!!......rong tm pe entry marii aky ne...lol!!......bingo!...woh scene shoping maall ke trial room mein khatam ho gaya!..lol!!.......thnxx!!

@sweta
i am updtin now!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART-36

Naina-Raj umm....ah woh mainey nahi toh....kyun koi problem??

Aky-Arey mujhse keh kar gaya ki neelu dondh rahi hain...magar neelu toh Aalekh ke saath mast thi!!...

Naina-Ohhh acha Rashmi ko yeh dress dikha kar aatein hain!..

Aky-Hmm..

And it was a close escape!!..

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After loads of shopping these people got back home!!...

Aky Sees RAj alone and goes and sits next to him!..

Aky-Raj I am sorry about yesterday mujhe Maa baba ka naam nahi lena chahiye tha!.

Raj takes Aky's hand into his...

Raj-Dunt say sorry to me...

AKy gave a sad smile!.

Aky-Main tumse kuch aur puchna chahtih thi.....kya tum chahthe hoon ke beejee ayye!!.(raj's granny)

Raj ke chehre par ek muskurahat thi....

AKy-Dunt worry sirf bee ayengayi....mum dad nahi ayengey!

Raj-Dii main zaroor chaonga ke beejee meri sagai par ayeey!...aur di aggar aap apne mum dad ko bhi bulana chahthi hain toh please bula leejiye!...Di aap jaanti hain meri zindagi par aggar kisi ka haq hain toh woh aap hain....aap jo karna chahein woh beshaq kar sakti hain!!.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Aky gave another sasd smile!!..

AKy-Ab jaa thoda rest kar le....shyam ko guddi aa rahi hain...usse sagai ke barey mein nahi pata....pata hota to ghar ko sar par le leti....usse surprise kartey hain!..

Raj-Okk!!....

Naina aati hain!!..

Raj usse dekhta hain aur usse masti sujthi hain!.

Raj turns to Aakash..

Raj-Abeey aaj shyam ko meri ex-irlfriend ghar par aa rahi hain!...NIshaaa....my baby!!..

Naina yeh sun kar...RAj ki taraf dekhti hain......

Raj-I love her so much!..

Aakash and AKy laugh!..

Naina keeps blushing!!...The mall incident still running in her head!!...

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Its evening and time for Nisha to come!!....RAj tayyar ho jata hain...

Raj-Mein Nisha ko leney jaa raha hoon....anyone else interested??..

RAj naina ke taraf dekhta hain!!.....

Naina smiles...

Aakash-Hum chale jattein hain saali sahiba ko lana...

ANd he gets a punch in his arm from his darling wife!!..

Aakash looks at her question mark on his face!

AKy-Nahi Aakash tum bhul gayye humein woh kuch kam tha.....chalo Aakash.....

Navin--Raj mein Rosy ko pick karke aata hoon!!...Tum Naina ke saath chale jao!..

Raj smiles..

Naina-NAhi bhaiya mujhe kkaamm

Aky-Mein sab kar longi!!....tum jao!!..

Raj-Chalo na Naina....

Naina-Umm ok!...

Shona--Veeruu da shona wants to comeee!!

AKy ne dekha Aakash ke taraf...

Aakash-Baby wont you stay back and be with mama and the baby!!..

Shona-Noo shona willl go masi paas!!..

Aky frowned!.

Aky - shona you are not going!...chup!

SHona fake tears!!......hit formula!

Raj usse utha ta hain aur chup karata hain!!..

Raj-Baby....your are going with veeru da and nia ,masi pass..ok?

Shona-Hurray my veeru da is the best!.

AKy-Raj nahi its ok..

Raj-I need to say that...its ok...I and Naina are not some teenagers fresh in love!!...I mean common!!....we are not dieing for each others company....aur tum loog yeh kya natak laga rakha hain!!...

Aky-Raj you should be able to spend some time before your engagement na!..

Raj-DI relax....its just my engagement!!...Naina same hain mein same hooon....sirf 2 naya rings hongey!...so stop treating us like teenagers in love!!...

Naina was just smiling!!...

Raj left with shona and Nia.....

Shona was catching Raj's left hand....and naina was onto his right!..

Raj-Ek din shona ke jagah Raina hogi na??

Naina blushed!!...

Raj-Hogi na??...Tumahra aur mera ansh.....humari raina!!..

Naina-Hmm...

Raj-I cant wait for that day!!!

Naina-You will have to!!

The reached the car!!...Shona sat at the back and Naina in the front!!..

They reached the station !!...

Suddenly they saw this girl with 4 bagss waving to them,....wave kartey karteyy uskey sarrey bags ghir jattein hain!!......

Raj hasta hain...

Raj-Chalo nisha hi hain woh!..

Naina Raj aur shona jaatein hain nisha ke pass!!...

Raj-Gudi!..

Nisha-Hey Big B...Kaiseyy hoon??...

Raj-Acha hoon......

She hugs him!...

Raj picks up the bags!..

Shona--Masiii

Nisha--Shonaa!!...baby come here...

Nisha plays with shona for a minute!..

Nisha--Ahem ahem.....hi I am nisha....suna toh hoga mere barrey mein!!.....big b ke small s hoon....I mean BIg brothere ki small sister hoon!!.....Big B intro karao na!......

Raj-Umm hann...uh woh...Nainaaaa MY friend!!..

Nisha had a big smile on her face!!.....

Nisha--Nainaaa(she repeated)

Nisha--SO pleased to meet you!!!.bahut suna hain tumharey barrey mein.....................

Naina-Same here!!....

Raj--Umm chalien!

Naina turns with shona to go!..Nisha and Raj a little behind!!...

Nisha--AHem ahem....so BIg B...Naina bahut hi sweet hain na!!..

Raj-Umm haan...

Nisha--Bahut hi kind hain na!!...

Raj-Hannnn

Raj avoided talking much about naina...ab kaisey yaar apni chothi behen ko yeh sab bataye!!...

Nisha-Aapki friend hain na

Raj-Hannn

Nisha-App usse se pyar kartein hain na!

Raj-Hann

Nisha--Hannn?????

Raj-Umm I mean woh..uh...nishaa!!...chal ab!!...

Nisha smiless!!..

Naina kinda heard little little and she knew she was the topic of discussion!!

Shona-Masii Veeru da...walk fast fast....too slow!!....

Nisha--Aa rahein hain shona!!..

Raj and nisha walk up!...they reach the praking lot!!...

Nisha out of habit walks to the front door!...but suddenly realizes what she is doing..

Nisha--Umm mein peche baith jaati hoon....aap aggey baith jayei!..

Naina--Nono first cut the Aap.....second tum aagey baitho mein peeche baith thi hoon!....

Nisha--Nonoooo please aap aggey baitho!...I mean tum!..

Naina smiled....raj stannding on the other end hearing this conversation!!.....smiles!!..

Raj-Nisha Naina.....tum duno jhagda bandh karo....shona ko aagey baitha doo!!...

Shona--Yaayyy!!..

Nisha--Noo shona wiill sit behind!!...

Shona-bad masi!!!!...

Nisha smiled!!..

Nisha-Evil masi!!..

Naina-Shh!..Shona come baby wont you sit with Nia.....let masi sit with veeu da!!...

Nisha bechari aggey baith jaati hain!!..

Nisha-I tried making her sit in the front!....lekin nahi manii!..

Raj smiled...dint answer her!..

Naina and shona sat behind!!

Raj adjusted the mirror so that he could see Naina's reaction!!...She was calm and composed!....no difference!...she smiled!!....

Nisha watched this....she moved the mirror!!

SHe whispered to him..

Nisha-Listen ghar zinda pahunchna hain....usse dekhogeyy toh bas humara accident ho jayega!...so for god sake...mujhe jijz se bhi badla lena hain....aur plus meri toh life abbhi tak set nahi huyi!....shadii hi nahi huyi hain merii!...please mujhe appke pyar ke chakkar mein nahi marna!!....aur bechari shona!...uska toh sochoo!!......bachhi hain!!....please usse kuch der ke liye mat dekho!!..

Nisha said with an innocent smile!!!.....

Raj looked at her...a hopeless smile on his face!!...he shook his head in disbelief!!...

Raj-Apney Big B ke taang khichthe huye sharm nahi aa rahi!!...

Nisha smiled--Nahii BIg B,,,,,Ab please gaddi chalao!!...

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Ting tong!!..

Aky got the door...

She hugged nisha right there!!..

Nisha-Di I missed you so much!!!!!!!

Aky-I missed you too Nisha!!....

Nisha-Jijz kahan hain??

Aakash-yahan hain tumahra dushmann!!...

Nisha-Jijz!..

SHe went to him and hugged him!!....

Aakash-How are you ??

Nisha-Bored without you!!....

Aaksh smiled!!..

Nisha-But now I am a free bird!!...Mein apni college ki padhai yahan karney aayi hoon!....I am so happy!!.........

Aakash--Uff hum tum huamre saath hi rahongi!...hey bhagwan bacha lena!!...

He got another punch in return!!..

Shona Raj and Naina were a little behind!!...

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After dinner sarrey ho gaye ikhatein at the hall!!...

Raj-Nisha tumse do baatein chupi huyi hain....ek me realted aur ek Di related!!.....so di waali khabar mein dunga....aur meri khabar di dengi!..

Nisha-Hmmmm....Do cheez mujhse chipaney ki himmat!....well aapki news toh shayad guess kar bhi loon!...lekin di>?,,,,uummm!....mushkil hain....batao!...

Raj-Umm Humarey pyare Jijz.....humari di ke zindai mein ayye!.....di ek se do ho gayi!....unhhon kuch mahan karnameyy kiyee jiss se weh do se teen ho gayyee!!....aur ab

Nisha-HAlt!...Your are so predictable BIg B...

Nisha uthhii!!..

Gayyi AKy ke pass!!..

Nisha-I cant believe itni badii khabar mujhse chipayi!..

Aky-Arrey kal hi pata chala!..

Nisha-Toh bula kyun nahi!

Aky-Surprise!!..

Nisha-ss baarr toh please ladka hhoon!!..I am so happy for you!!.....

Nisha hugged her!..

SHe went to Aakash!!..

Nisha--Hmm...SO phir see papa!.....karoo mazaey karoon!!.....Congraxx!!.

Aakash-Thnxx nish!..

Nisha-Aur abb Big B ki khabar....is equallly predictabale!!..Mujhe koi surprise nahi huaa!....kyun joo mein soch rahi hoon woh right hain na Big B.....

Raj-Umm...woh...maybe!.

Aky-Kal tumahrey Big B ke sagai hain!!..

Nisha-WOee!!!...sagai!...now thats a surprise!!...kaafi tez nikleyy!!.....hmm mujhe toh pehle se hi shaq tha....hang on.

She went close to him and whisperd...

Nisha-Yeh kahin woh purani walli ladki toh nahi....3-4 saal pehle waali...jiska naam appney nahi bataya!...

(remeber raj ne kaha tha....ke nisha uske barrey mein sab jaanti hain!!)

Raj-Yea right!!..

Nisha--Hurray!!

Nisha-Congraxx Big B and Naina!!...

Aky-Tumhe kaisey malom?? ke woh ladki naina hain??

Nisha-Well Nish the great ko sab pata hain.....station pe pata chal gaya.....mere pyar bhai toh inki shakal dekhe bina itney beetab ho rahe the!!...

And there started a new round of teasing and blushing!!....

The night passed soon!!....Evryone was tired....moreover all were looking forward to the new day!...A day full of hapiness....a very important day in their lifes!.........in raj and Naina's life!!!...................

All waitin for tommorow!!..

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Even you have to wait for tommorow!!
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Nisha Singh Shekhawat!!.
Just finsihed her scholing from outside delhi!!....Back to delhi for her college....very bubbly girl!...the life of the shekhwat family!!....very enthusiastic!...loves her BIg B a lot!....respects him a lot....shes carefree!...and is very casual!!.....loves being with freinds and family!!...and is adored wher eveer she goes!!.......

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waitingg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
too good ๐Ÿ‘ loved shona ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› waiting 4 the next part eagerly
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Posted: 17 years ago
๐Ÿ‘ just one word...awesome...this fic is my fav one.... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Bal bal bacche dono!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Shona bhi aagayi dono ke sath!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

And you also little little...tum Shona hogayi ho kya?? ๐Ÿ˜›

I loved Raj's dialogue!!!!Ek din Raina hogi unke saath...uska aur Naina ka ansh!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Raj ko rear view mirror mein bhi usko dekhna hai!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ So sweet!!!

But Nisha was too funny!!! ๐Ÿ˜†

Nisha ne Raj se kaise ugalwaya... bagon mein bahar hai...bilkul waise hi!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†

Raj bhi naa...akash ki khichai kar raha hai!!!News dete huye bhi!!! ๐Ÿ˜†

Looking forward to the engagement!!! ๐Ÿ˜›

Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome ๐Ÿ‘ .plz cont soon.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ it was a fabulous updt.....

whos playin nisha??

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