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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Thank God Naina ne acchi dress peheni and she bleww him off his feet πŸ˜† πŸ˜† !!!!And not knee length skirt but short one!!!!!

Shona struck again with Aalekh and got both of them embarrassed!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Office mein kaam nahi ho raha hai πŸ˜† πŸ˜† !!!!Pata tha yehi hoga!!!!! 😑

Par yaar he loves her and she loves him toh uske karreb gaya toh problem kya hai??? πŸ˜• Even she wants him to be near her!!!!

And the scene in the cabin was soo good 😳 😳 !!!!!Raj ke upar Naina and Raj is not able to concentrate 😳 😳 πŸ˜† !!!!!Hoga bhi kaise sara concentration toh uspar hai naa 😳 😳 πŸ˜† !!!!!

Waise now I hope they talk and sort out their differences!!!!!

And yes your first link is not working!!!!!Put it up again!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
@rituka
thnx thnx..... well there is r-n scene....but r-n doesnt mean raj-naina it means rosy-navin...lol!!...we hv both the r-n scenes...

@rani
awee romanticc updt....lol!....thnxx....glad u lykdd this part so much.....

@daisy
ohh no probs...adb.........thnxx......

@litika..
well dunt feel bad....dey wld be happy happy soon..lol......haan yaar no more rona dhona....umm little more..lol....but happiness is round d corner........

@shaina
thhnxx... shona iss wayy to smart...she ganged with alu nd made her veeru da feel weirdo..lol....officee mein kaam nahi ho raha accha hain na gussaa kyun ho rahi hoon??........problem kuch bhi nahi hain....duno ke duno pagal hain...hahaha....they wldd sort out deir dffrnces soon.....hopefully....lol.....ahh i ev been dying to ryt that scene wer raj gets distracted bahut pehle se mere dimag mein tha.....

As a matter of fact that scene i was supposed to be ryttn in college days....tabsee mere dimag mein idea tha...lekin aftr all that happened...i decided its for this fic..and finaly ystrdayy i cld post that part....

Ahh the first link is nt wkin..thats weird ill put it again....
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART-18

Naina had gone out alreadyy not able to control her tears...... 😭

Raj put his hand on his head knowing what impact it culd have left on her....he wanted to shoot himself for this...... πŸ˜‰

He saw the clock it struck 12...

HE remebered Naina's words..

Naina--AT 12 you said that ...

Raj--Ohh gawdd!!...Now what do i do... 😑

He dint have a choice...work was important too....anyway maybe naina just needs some time alone....

Raj stood there still confused..

Raj-Naina we cant go on like this....i think we need to talk...i have had enough of my time...i cant take all this anymore....we need to talk and i need you!!....i cant control myself any longer!...i jus need u

And raj decided to shake it outta his head.....and he needed to finish this meeting...and then decide thhe rest......he was a proffesional....he had to see thru the meeting..

He attended the meeting though he was not fully attentivee he managed to concentrate and solve the problem!..

LAter after the meeting he spoke to the receptionist!..

SHe informed him there were 2 more meetingss one with the team leaders and one with the guptas....guptas were defaluters who were in some problemm.....

Raj--Please cancel both....reason-personal..

and raj walked out from there.....

On the way was the canteen there he saw her sitting..,... looking confused...she was fighting too....she wanted to be with him but after sorting out other stuff....like this both were confused soulss

Raj went back to his cabin........

He saw his cell 7 missed calls. from aalekh.....

Raj called him back...

Raj--What happend all fine? πŸ˜•

Aalekh-Raj please come homefast..

Raj-Hey what happened?? πŸ˜•

Aalekh--Akansha di is not well..

Raj--What happened?

Aalekh--I dunnno we were sitting and suddenly she fell unconsicious 🀒

Raj- I am right there... πŸ˜•

Raj put on his coat took his phone and outta there....straight to the canteen.......

Raj--Naina..

Naina looked up expecting something else..

Raj just pulleed her out..

Naina-Raj whats this?

Raj-Di isnt well and we are goin home!...

He left her hand......and they both walked out of C&G for the second time together and many people did notice this...
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Navin was driving.....rosy by his side.....little sadd....thinking about rohan..

Navin--Rosy rohan will be fine..dont worry....

Rosy--Hmm......

Navin--SO lets speak a bit i am getting bored driving and seeing you sad sad...

Rosy--Hmmm so what do you wanna speak about? πŸ˜‰

Navin--Just anything...

Rosy--so tell me do you have a girlfriend... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Rosy was ready to have some fun with NAvin.. πŸ˜†

Navin dint knoe why was she asking this..she knew he liked her thn....

NAvin--Well as of now no...

Rosy--So you broke up with some one or your gonna ask some one out soon.. πŸ˜•

Navin--Umm both!... πŸ˜†

Rosy laughed...

Navin--Wat about you?? (something he never bothered to ask)(but anyhow lets confirmm that she is single)

Rosy--Ummm should i tell you the truth or a lie..

Navin-Whatever you wish

Rosy--Yea I am seeing someone...... 🀒 🀒

Navin was not expecting this ....she was seeing someone.....

Navin--Ohh since how long? πŸ˜•

Rosy--u noe its lyk i had this crush on him since college days....and i never told him....again after few years he came back into my life.....and from then its been 2 years...... πŸ˜›

Navin--Ohh..... 😑

Silenceeeeee

Navin-By the way was this truth or a lie....

Rosy started laughing.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy-It was a lie.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

And navin took the biggest heavy breaths a breath of relief...she was single ready to mingleee!!...

Navin--So what about crushes and stuff...

Rosy--ohh i have had this biggest crush on this same guy in college....but never told him.......i am waiting for him to ask me out....we arent seeing each other as of now... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Navin--Truth or lie?

Rosy--This time truth!...(she said looking at him) 😊

Navin stopped the car at a corner..

Navin--I am tired need a break...

Rosy--Hmm...

Navin--So whose that guy in college...let me also knoe..

Rosy-I'll tell you when the time comes...

NAvin--Hmm....

Rosy-So what with Raj these days...he's lukin xtra haappyy... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Navin--Yea all of us have noticed that.....since yesterday morning somethin rong with him.....his niece came yesterday evening......soo hes too happy with her also....and naina is back his partner in crime,.....so probably hess very happy....

Rosy-Whats with Raj and Naina... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Navin--What do u mean?

rosy-No just asking naina's back so hes happy....there's bound to be a reason...you noe wat i mean....

Navin--They were best friends....so its just that before you start thinking anything else....

Rosy--Hmmm.... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

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Navin and rosy reached Pune ..It was probably rather late so they decided to take a hotel and see rohan tommorow...

Navin gave rosy the room key and sent her telling he would join her soon....she went...

Navin reached there with her bag....placed it on the bed...

Navin--Okk heres ur bag..

Rosy--And wheres yours?

Navin--I'll put that in my room..

Rosy--You mean your'not sleeping with me...(ok she dint mean that)(but wteva) πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Navin was shocked... 🀒 🀒

Rosy--I mean your not sleeping in this room.....

Navin-Ummm I guess thats why i said my room..

Rosy--Navin you could sleep here ..I mean the room is pretttyy big...why are you simply going in for another room.... 😊

Navin--Rosyy.. 🀒

Rosy--Shh....get your bags here....and cancel that room πŸ˜›

Navin was hesitant..

Rosy--Navin the girl doesnt have a problem why is the guy thinking so much... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Navin--Your one sample... 😊

ANd Navin left..

Rosy--ANd your in luv with this sample... πŸ˜‰

Rosy blushed...

Rosy--I am waiting for that guy to ask me out....i had a huge crush on him since college days....and that guy is Mr.Navin singh Ahluwaliya..... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Rosy started laughing..

Navin brought his bag and stood at the door..

NAvin--Are you sure?? 🀒

Rosy--Ufff just come in now... 😳 😳

Navin came in and they placed order for dinner....

Rosy was rather tiredd...

Navin--Tired??

Rosy--Yeahh....kindaa

Navin--Hmm..I think you should call upp and speak to Rohan.... 😊

Rosy--I think you are right..

Rosy ppicked up the phone called the boarding....She asked for Rohan...

Rohan came on the line rather very happy....

Rosy--Rohannn how are you? πŸ˜•

Rohan--I m fine Di how are you ... 😊

Rosy--Idiot I am fine...tell me howz your health now..

Rohan-What happpened to my health now?? πŸ˜ƒ

Rosy--Huh??You werent well this morning...remember..

Rohan--Who told u that? πŸ˜ƒ

Rosy--I got a message..

Rohan--From? 😑

Rosy--Some batchmate of yours called to tell me your not well..

Rohan--Must be some prank coz I am perfectly alright.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy--What???

ROhan--Not happy?

Rosy-You fool I ev come by roadd from delhi to pune....I am so shit tired...and for what nothing..ur perfectly fineeeee πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rohan--Hey you could meet me if i am fine right....have you signed some contract that you will meet me only if I am unwell.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy--SHut up Rohan...ur still the same naughty kid only.... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Rohan--Like you are not the naughty sister.. πŸ˜‰ ohh sorry for now the hott secretaryyy πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy--Shh!!...Okok now i wil come and meet you tommorow...and find that guy who called me....i ll bash him up.....i was so scared you knoe 😑 😑 ..what if smthin wld hv hppnd to u....gawdd

Rohan--If something would have hppnd to me den my share of property and money wld come to u........Now I am fine so relax........so what if you ev come here.....i am fine...my property is mine....till i am alivee. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy--Shut up rohan...u and ur sad silly jokes...i dunt need ur propertyy keep it wid u.... 😑 😑

Rohan--then why are u upset about cmin here? 😊

Rosy-I ev left my boss and come.. 😭 😭

Rohan--Missing him??? 😳

Rosy--Yeaa why not.. 😑

Rohan--Is that guy your boyfriend?? πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy--Rohann.. 🀒

Rohan--Tell meee πŸ˜ƒ

Rosy--No he is my boss my best friend.. 😑

Rohan--Ohh so den your missing your boyfriend.. πŸ˜†

Rosy--Rohann I am not missing anyone.. 😑


Just then rohan heard some sounds...Navin was talking to Raj that time...

Rohan--Ohh is he with you?? πŸ˜‰

Rosy-WHo he?

ROhan-YOur boyfriend... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy-Rohan I dont have a boyfriend ok πŸ˜•

That was rather loud and Navin heard it...but ignored...


Rohan--Some one is with you....your not alone in the hotel...oh gawd di....ek ladka ek ladki ek kamra ek raat ek bistar πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy-Rohan shut up....noww before i decide to smash you.... 😑 😑

Rohan--oKkkokok anything else??..I noe ur busy with that guy..hhe wont be letting u talk to me....bring him tommorow..let me see this guy who is sleeping with u today... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rosy was blushing.. 😳 😳

Rosy--Byeeeeeeeeeeee Rohann I hatee you.... πŸ˜†

Rohan--BYeee Looking forward to meeting him.... πŸ˜ƒ

Rosy kept the phone...her faceee blood red.. 😳 😳

Navin-WHat happned??

Rosy--Hes perfectly fine...someone just played the fool....his friends are like that only....shd hv thght bout it....aftr all i spoilt them....

Navin-Ohh thats ok but why is ur face so red....i mean ur blushing...after talking to your brother...thats kinda weird...


Rosy was laughing within herself....what should i tell u navin....my 17 year old brother is teasing me with the guy whose sleeping in my room which means you.......and thats exactly why I am blushing!!...what should I tell you..
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Here where two people were enjoying there what was with Raj-Naina..What happened to Aky?..Navin away from all this was enjoying.Now that Rohan was fine it meant spending more time with Rosy.What will happen here..DOes he really love her?..Or is it just another crush or infactuation..Or was Navin just flirting around.ROsy had feelings for him but what about him.Time would tell....What about Raj and Naina..Will they finally solve their problems or will there be another problem between all these problems!!...

Waitt and watch!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
kamal hain sareyy din mein ek reply!!..
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry for being late..when i come on IF ..i got traped on 1st page itself...now the update..1st part very sad sad lol(shona lan.)and very beautiful...why don't they clear out everything 😭 my heart is too aching to see our 1st RN together...and our 2nd RN..they r sooooooooooooooooo cute but a one no. fool..Rosy brother is soo cute..hahaha...uff aajkal ke bacche..a splendid part dear....thanku soooooooooooooooo much for this cute,sweet,sad,beautiful,fabulous,fantabulous and outstanding update... πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
too good...
just loved it..
plzzzz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Raj aur Naina ke bech problems!!! 😭 😭 I hope they solve it soon!!!Raj ne thank God meeting sambhal li!!!

He needs her and she needs him...its high time they get together!!!!

Akansha di fainted ............ummm........I think Shona is about to have a brother!!!! πŸ˜‰

Aur Rohan bimar hai hi nahi.......... I am smelling a rat here!!!A rat called Aalekh 😑 😑 !!!!Very bad!!!!

Aur yeh Rohan property ki baat karta hai πŸ˜† !!!!!Just like my sis!!!!

He teased her about her boyfriend πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† !!!!!So he finally gets to meet his Jiju πŸ˜† πŸ˜† !!!!!

Waise Rosy trusts Navin a lot!!!!I hope woh bhi Rosy se uthna hi pyaar karta ho jitna ki woh karti hai!!!!

Ab jaldi dono couples aka Raj and Naina and Navin and Rosy ko ek kardo!!!! 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
excelent n 22222222 gud dear, πŸ‘ ,

u'r last 2 updates r realy 222 gud n makin the fic more intrestn 😊

dialogues r simply super dear πŸ‘


All the best 4 the next update,


Aarthi

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