'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Superbbbbbbbbbbb update !

what a romance !
i enjoyed every bit !

Dutta naughtiness in KItchen !
naku drunk and last part

wohoooooooooooooooo

love dit !

It was amazing !
plz update fast this time :D

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
My place ........... a very nice updt..........reallly luved it.......... thanx fr a long updt............
Nakku is trying to stay awy frm Dutta.............too shy.................... OMG!!! Dutta cums searching fr hr to the kitchen....... Nakku hurts herself with the broken glass........... Luved the way Dutta nurses her and carries her to their bedroom.......... OMG!!!! Nakku drank to get relief frm pain....... luved the part how she behaves with Dutta........ she doesnt remember anything in the mornig...........luved the stubborn Nakku in the end...........updt sooooon yaar............ luving the flow of the story.......... Plzzzzzzz updt sooooooooon........Thanx fr the PM..........

hi, thanks for commenting..glad you enjoyed the update. really appreciate the way you guys follow my ff and highlight the parts you liked. thank u.
Actually i thought i might be going off on one with this update but the truth is i really enjoyed it too..
it was fun writing something light..and hopefully funny...
will update soon..
jagruti

Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
awesome update

aww naku gt drunk😆 n cld dutta, ey n thn dutta sriram patil😆 n thn handcuffed him😆 bt 1 ? wer did tht handcuff appear from? such toys exist in PN? lol......i cn jus imagine a drunk n giggling naku

awww babi angry n dutta amused... hmmm wonder hw naku wil react wen she cums 2 knw tht she was drunk

pls update soon😃

hi thank you for reading..nice to know you enjoyed the update. yep naku gets drunk and a little be casual with dutta..as for the handcuffs there was a pharagraph in there when dutta leaves the bedroom after dressing nakus cut he tends to the capture of one of moreys men.
Duttas gaurd had handcuffed the guy and when he takes it off..sethji happens to take it..as a toy and leaves it with naku.
there is that explanation in the update or you could think up your own reason😉 i dont mind.
As for the drunk naku..yey actually i think that would be quite funny to see.
yep i guess baabi is being the typical mother dissapointed but dutta is taking it quite lightly..
you will have to wait and see what happens next..will try to update soon. thanks.

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Great update and unexpected twist :)
Loved the drunk naku and no hangover and no memory either :)
Update soon please!

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Sophia21
My Spot!! :)

Edited;;

Hahaha Nakku got drunk😆😆 Bless her...she sounds so cute!

Handcuff😆 LOL key in the middle of the room.. Bechara Dutta!!

Had to call Sethji init.. but why did babi come? 😆

Well im glad Dutta didnt get angry... but yaar babi needs to calm down..

Even her hubby didnt say much... woh naraaz kyun hain?😕😆

Send Sethji and Babi back !! 😆

I hope when, if he tells her, she doesnt feel guilty.. 😃

Awesome update 😃

yep all drunk..😆 so i can say that you guys liked that bit then.??😉 i think we do have to say that he is a bit bitchara here.. dutta bhao ki halat kya kar di..
baabi was just a tag along shes just noisy init..has to be in the center of attention. lol i think thats something that will surprise naku too.. that he didn't react..he loves her too much plus i think he realizes that he may have put the idea into her head.
As for baabi shes a mum, mums always over react..i think she is just disappointed that she did something out of character..maybe that was against her upbringing. Or just scared of duttas reaction what dutta would think of naku...etc..etc
she does need a chill pill though..😃
er.. sending them back..yep maybe..i'll give it a thought.. they will go later though.
as for nakus guilt..havent really thought how i'm going to approach that yet..
have to wait and see
thanks

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: dc17-7
hey jagruti,

nice update dear........

naku as always so innocent.....

will look fwd to the next update.........

tc
divya

hiya divya..
thank you very much glad you enjoyed the update
and yep naku is always dead sweet and simple in her own way ..
will try to update soon..thanks again.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: kiran255
Superbbbbbbbbbbb update !

what a romance !
i enjoyed every bit !
Dutta naughtiness in KItchen !
naku drunk and last part
wohoooooooooooooooo
love dit !

It was amazing !
plz update fast this time :D

hia..thank you very much..glad you enjoyed the update and your too kind with your words..
the kitchen bit was just imporvisation last minuit thing that just came to mind..i didnt think anyone would notice that bit..thank you for highlighting it.
As for naku yey ...lol i think it would be something different for naku...something that would create a reason for some sweet talk..or romance..
anyways thank you for your lovely comment will try to update soon.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: droopy_asleep
Great update and unexpected twist :)
Loved the drunk naku and no hangover and no memory either :)
Update soon please!

thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it.. little bit of experimentation from my
side i guess..nice to know you liked the update. will try to update soon.

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

hey awesome FF...
been reading them ...and told myself to come back and comment ...totally forgot😳 sorry
Its great... i am enjoying reading it a lot
loved naku drunk 😆 enjoyed that...loved how she was all stubborn at the end !
haha she doesn't remember and the alcohol had no effect on her... but should she not remember taking the drink and drinking the bottle 😆 she was sobber going for it I assume lol
very nice update ... please add me to your pm list 😳

post soon :-)

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: dg0628
hey awesome FF...
been reading them ...and told myself to come back and comment ...totally forgot😳 sorry
Its great... i am enjoying reading it a lot
loved naku drunk 😆 enjoyed that...loved how she was all stubborn at the end !
haha she doesn't remember and the alcohol had no effect on her... but should she not remember taking the drink and drinking the bottle 😆 she was sobber going for it I assume lol
very nice update ... please add me to your pm list 😳

post soon :-)

hiya..o thank you very much its nice to know that you are enjoying the ff. Actually to be very honest im having fun writing it too. Thank you very much for commenting..its fantastic to speak to you guys who are reading..
As for the drunk think ..yey...i'm just pretending that she remembers nothing..😆 influence of the cvs i think who seem to skip details, guess i'm doing it too..
Thank you very much...i will add you as a buddy if thats ok so i can pm you with the rest of the readers.

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