Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (PraShiv SS) - Page 2

Part 2

Majestic update.... excellently written

Nice nice 👍 I like the suspense

Her life just keeps getting worse

Woah Glad Prarthana Is Safe But How Will Shivansh Protect Her From The Police?

Part 1

Surprising that Shivansh is a father. Shocked about the murder but happy to see Prarthana's bravery. Mouni's edit looks so real. Does Seema truly love her stepdaughter or is she pretending? Prarthana and Shivansh praising each other was nice. Even family members in today's time can't report to the police if a girl amongst their family goes missing, they just think about society that they will say she ran away. I wonder if Seema is truly tense. Shameless Bhavesh has such dirty intentions. Perfect pics.

Part 2

Glad that Prarthana could escape. If this story would've been written by Inkie, can't imagine what the readers would've gotten. Sad that Prarthana left. Good that Shivansh is ready to help her. I wonder who was the kids mother. Nice that Prarthana filed a police complaint. Wonder what would happen next. Perfect pics, waiting for next

Thanks a lot.This ss is inspired by a movie.In the real movie the girl got raped.But i changed it here.

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Part 1

Surprising that Shivansh is a father. Shocked about the murder but happy to see Prarthana's bravery. Mouni's edit looks so real. Does Seema truly love her stepdaughter or is she pretending? Prarthana and Shivansh praising each other was nice. Even family members in today's time can't report to the police if a girl amongst their family goes missing, they just think about society that they will say she ran away. I wonder if Seema is truly tense. Shameless Bhavesh has such dirty intentions. Perfect pics.

Part 2

Glad that Prarthana could escape. If this story would've been written by Inkie, can't imagine what the readers would've gotten. Sad that Prarthana left. Good that Shivansh is ready to help her. I wonder who was the kids mother. Nice that Prarthana filed a police complaint. Wonder what would happen next. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (My Heart is with You)Part 3

The credit for the PraShiv edits goes to the unknown editors.

A police cop came to Shivansh's house.

He:I came here to arrest Prarthana.

Prarthana and Shivansh were shocked.

Shivansh:But why Sir?

He:We got an information that she is into immoral traffic.

They were shocked.

Prarthana:No Sir.It's a misunderstanding.

Shivansh:One second Sir.Who filed this complaint?

The police cop:Niranj Randhawa.

Shivansh was shocked.

Shivansh:Sir,it's just a misunderstanding. Prarthana is not such a girl.

Police cop:But because of the complaint I have to arrest her.

Shivansh:Just because a wealthy person complained,you want to arrest her without even checking whether it's true or not?What kind of a police officer are you?

He got embarrassed.

Shivansh:I can give you any amount of money.But please leave this innocent girl.

The police cop:I don't want any bribe.We will do a proper enquiry and if it gets proved that Prarthana is immoral we have to take action against her.

He left from there.

Prarthana was in tears:I don't understand why all are after me.

Shivansh didn't know how to console her.

Immediately Shivansh went to meet Niranj Randhawa.

Shivansh asked him angrily:How dare you file such a dirty complaint against Prarthana?

Niranj:That girl is living with you without marrying you.What should I call such a girl?

Shivansh:I am not dirty and filthy like you Mr.Niranj Randhawa.And what right do you have to raise finger against Prarthana?What should I call a middle aged man who cheated a woman and impregnated her?

Niranj was embarrassed.

Shivansh:Stay away from our lives.Make sure that the police man you hired to arrest Prarthana never comes back to trouble us.Otherwise I will also reveal your dirty secret to others.

Niranj became dull.

Shivansh left from there angrily.

Niranj cancelled the immoral traffic complaint he had filed against Prarthana.

Shivansh took Prarthana to his office.

Shivansh:Now onwards you are the manager of my company.

Prarthana couldn't believe it.

Prarthana:But...

Shivansh:You are well educated and in need of a job also.Instead of looking for a job outside you can work in my office itself.

Prarthana:I don't know how to thank you.

Shivansh:My ears are paining because of your thank you.

They both giggled.

Prarthana was going through the photo albums.

Prarthana:Nice photographs.But why your wife's photographs are not there in any of the albums?

Shivansh became dull.

Shivansh:Because I am unmarried.

Prarthana was shocked.

Prarthana:Then your children?

Shivansh:They are my dad Niranj Randhawa's illegitimate children.

Prarthana was shocked.

Prarthana:He is the one who complained about me.Right?

Shivansh:Yes.He complained against you because you are living with me.That shameless person was having an affair with a woman.When the woman came to know that he was already married she had broken ties with him. But after she got diagnosed with cancer she informed my dad about it and requested him to take their responsibility.But he refused to take their responsibility. So she approached me.I got a shock after knowing what my dad did to her and us.He was cheating on my mom,me and his girlfriends.After that lady's death,i looked after my siblings like my own children and left my dad.I can't forgive that dirty person.

Prarthana became emotional.

Prarthana:How beautiful your heart is!

Suddenly Pratham and Harini came there.

They:Dad...aunty...

Prarthana:Not aunty...call me mom.

They were surprised.

Shivansh looked at Prarthana in disbelief.

Prarthana:If you can give them love by becoming their dad,I can also love them by becoming their mother.

Shivansh smiled emotionally.

Pratham and Harini were excited.

They:Mom!

They hugged Prarthana and Prarthana kissed them both.Shivansh smiled.

Prarthana cooked good food for the children and fed them.

Pratham:Thank you mom.You actually saved us.

Prarthana:How?

Harini:You saved us from dad's horrible food.

Shivansh was embarrassed. Prarthana laughed along with the children.

Shivansh, Prarthana and the kids enjoyed a lot.

Hansati Khelati Masti Se Bhari
Duniya Pyaar Ki Duniya Khwaab Ki
Naazo Mein Pali Mishri Ki Dali
Naazo Mein Pali Mishri Ki Dali
It’s My Family
Hansati Khelati

Pyaari Si Baat Hai Mithe Git Hai
Pappaa To Dost Hai Mammi Meet Hai
Pa Pa Pa Pyaari Si Baat Hai
Ma Ma Ma Mithe Git Hai
Pa Pa Pa Pappaa To Dost Hai
Ma Ma Ma Mammi Mit Hai
Duniya Mein Hai Sab Se Achchhe
Ye Pappaa Aur Sab Se

Prarthana told bed time stories to the kids.

Achchhi Mammi Ku Ku
It’s My Family Paa Paa Paa

It’s My Family Ma Maa Maa
It’s My Family

Prarthana made Pratham and Harini pray.

Shivansh watched it happily seeing Prarthana giving good culture and values to the children.

Phool Jo Khil Gae
Maali Hai Magan
Pyaar Se Mahakaa
Hai Mera Ye Chaman

She helped the kids to study by teaching them.

Pha Pha Pha Phool Jo Khil Gae
Ma Ma Ma Maali Hai Magan
Pa Pa Pa Pyaar Se Mahakaa Hai
Ma Ma Ma Mera Ye Chaman

All 4 of them cracked jokes and laughed.

Duniya Se Khushiya Maagu Main Kyu
Mere Ghar Mein Hai Itani Khushi U U
It’s My Family Paa Paa Paa
It’s My Family Ma Maa Maa
It’s My Family Hansati Khelati.(HDDCS).

Prarthana saw Shivansh with wet hair.

Prarthana:Shivansh,why did'nt you dry your hair?

Shivansh:I have no time for that.I am getting late.I need to go to the office now.I have so much of work to do.

Prarthana;If you don't dry your hair,you will catch cold and fever.Then you won't be able to do any work.You are so careless.

Prarthana held his hand

and made him sit infront of the mirror.She took a towel and wiped his wet hair.

He thought:No one has cared for me this much.

Prarthana saw Shivansh's dry feet.

Prarthana:Your feet have become so dry Shivansh.Why don't you take care of your skin?

Prarthana held his hand

leading him to the bed to sit.

She took the moisturizer and applied it on his feet.

Shivansh was lost in Prarthana.

He said in his mind:I feel nice when you take care of me.I am falling in love with you every moment Prarthana.

Shivansh dreamt of romancing Prarthana.

Kya aapko ehsaas hai
Baat ab yeh hi khaas hai
Aapka dil hamare paas hai
Hamara dil aapke paas hai

Shivansh carried Prarthana in his arms and twirled her around.

Aapka dil hamare paas hai
Hamara dil aapke paas hai
Aapke paas hai

Kya aapko ehsaas hai

Yeh kyoon aaj resham si hai roshni
Yeh kya geet sa in hawaaon mein hai

Shivansh moved closer to the gloomy Prarthana.

Tumhe chooke resham hui roshni
Mere dil ki dhadkan fizaaon mein hain

He blew air at her face.She smiled shyly.

Baheke baheke kayee dil mein jazbaat hai
Jaagi jaagi koi ankahee pyaas hai
Aapka dil hamare paas hai
Hamara dil aapke paas hai
Aapke paas hai

Shivansh was singing romantically looking at Prarthana while playing the guitar.Prarthana was blushing.

Woh badal utarne lage jheel mein
Parinde darafton pe gaane lage

Jo tum humsafar ho to ay humsafar
Hamein saari manzar suhaani lage

Shivansh and Prarthana pampered their baby which was the symbol of their love.

Manzilon se gale raaste mil gaye
Sapne sach ho gaye, poori har aas hai

Aapka dil hamare paas hai
Hamara dil aapke paas hai

Aapka dil hamare paas hai
Hamara dil aapke paas hai
Aapke paas hai

(HDDCS).

Prarthana heard the office staffs gossiping.

"Guess Shivansh Sir is in love with Prarthana Madam".

"Are they serious or just having fun?"

Prarthana felt hurt

and walked away.

Shivansh went near Prarthana.

Shivansh was blushing,

He said shyly:Prarthana,we have been living as Pratham and Harini's parents.Why don't we make it true?Why don't we get married?

Part 3

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