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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
that is nice update i love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 11

After hugging her I have forgotten the world ,bt she broked the hug ,she said to me ,no need to worry that model is waiting for ur appointment ,who left u for the money ,new she came to urge money from u ,if she really loved u ,then she would never done dis,by saying she went out ,I thought for a sec ,she is correct ,she is absolutely right.

I just followed her ,and called PRa..pragya ha right pragya I'm not able to do one thing ,can u figure out ,ya definetly she said ,pinky promise,ha pinky promise .again u should nt break it ,OK baba I'll never ever do it ,kk then I'll say I'm not able to remember ur name ,wt she yelled,ha ur name ,can I change ur name,wt ...,kk granted u can ,I said wait I'll change hey hw abt sweety ,nope its not gud it is also difficult, I yelled so many names .



After a long go I screamed hey I got it ,I got it ,igot it ,she asked wt ,ur name is chasmish, wt no no I don't like this name,bt I liked it nw onwards ur chasmish,hey chasmish see he sweet of it,no no pls change the name,nope nt at all whenever,I feel to change I'll change then,kk iam getting sleep gud nt Swt DMZ .

( though I said I didn't like the name ,bt seeing his happiness I felt I ll do wtever for his happiness ,even I'll sacrifice me and my love for his hpness ,every night with his thoughts I am feeling soothed in my heart meri ishq wala love has been started)

Tomorrow morning she prepared cholae battori wow wow I can't stop praising, it was awesome ,I doesn't know hw she know my taste exactly ,iam abt to kiss her ,bt seeing her crimpson cheeks I controlled myself , hey chasmish,be ready we will go to party tonight ,from nw u should start ur makeup ,because ur wife of rockstar ,so u should maintain the style . she said so I should wear ur dog tags which is meant for animals,hw dare u to insult my style wait I'll show who I am.


I chased her ,she said u can't catch me u can't catch me and she showed her tongue, wait wait I'll soon catch u ,hey i got u ,he dare u to say like that and I began to pour water on her she suddenly slipped and fallen I fallen on ground ,by seeing her I can spent rest of my life ,dis time robbin came inside we came into senses and took our positions ,hey chasmish iam living ,then robbin smiled little ,

I came to home I called ,chasmish chasmish ,she is coming down ,no no I guess she as an angel ,she wored white frock with simple accessories ,and with blushing cheeks ,she is looking like an angel ,I went near her ,I said ur awesome ur looking so good ,ur mind blowing ,ur simply superb ,bt suddenly I got my senses back ,bt not more than me iam a rock star ,so many girls follow me.ha don't show ur tantrums kkk.

( when he is praising I felt like I'm in heaven I am so happy to have husband like u ,up to know I cherished ur anger ,soon I'll be cherishing ur guilt)


Ma I don't know he gud u are bt u left me when I realised my mistake ,bt whenever I saw pragya I wish u came back .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
wow..very nice yaar.u r alwaus rocking...today really emotional and sad i m eagrly waiting for ur nxt epi .pls upload fast...Awesome yaarrr plzz unite them soon and eagerness overloaded 👏 😆 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Really good update continue pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Chapter 12
Rock star is ready ,for the party hey chasmish don't get jeleous of me kk ,hey wait a sec have u ever been to the party ,no I didn't get chance any time .oh so poor ,kk don't feel bad I'll take u know and I'll show u party culture.

Suniyae ,drive the car slowly hey Na ,wt did u say ,MATLAB I said drive slowly ,uske pichae ,suniyae ,ha this word ,can u repeat it once .y ,pls repeat it ,kk suniyae .wt strange feeling I engroced with this word I don't know bt when she said thousand guitars has banged at a shot ,I'm feeling strange inside ,USS ladikena ,she is making me crazy day by day.

Ya here we come ,chasmish this is party hall .come hurry up again ull be late ,late?? is this a school ,ha I guessed ,wt u guessed ,y did u get this four eyes,because...,ha because ull read more Na dats y ,don't comment on my books...,ha if I'll comment at ull do ,she glared angrily,hey chesmish don't glare like DAT ur chasma will broke.suddenly manager came and said sir enough of ur nhok - jhok this is party right ,ha right MR: GUPTA say to ur sir don't quarell like this.

Me ur blaming me ,ha u .sir ...pls leave it Na.kk Gupta I'll leave it for ur sake .I and chasmish went inside ,everyone eyes are piercing us ,everyone in the party began to say hw cute couple are they,with this comments pragyas cheeks began to grow red ,suddenly a girl came and hug me ,hey Misti hw are u ,it is long time since I met u ,M: SERIOUSLY abhi ur talking like this ,it is very strange ,with this change I really need to dance with u.A: ME ,ya of course to make pragya jealous I said k,bt inside I was trapped.

When I was dancing I felt really if chasmish had oocupied this place Na.it will be awesome,bt iam enjoying jealous also .I went to her and said hey chasmish don't be jealous of me.so many girls will pray to dance with me for life time ,P: Who said I'm jealous ,I'm happy in deed very much,A: really ,bt ur face colour is turning to pale ,ha ha ..u began to lie.


( yes when he is dancing with other girl iam getting angry ,not only angry ,I want to slap her bt he could I ,in his eyes I was his friend ,pragya hw to express ur feeling to him)

( Suddenly I saw him ,no its should not be him,definetly its should not be him ,bt he came to me and said ,hey hii pragya ,hw r u .bt I didn't answer to him,hey pragya don't worry I changed ,I have really changed .pls don't be angry ,I am saying dry also see.pragya I'm really sry.if u forgive me one dance with me ,first I hesitated,bt he said pragya I'm feeling lot of guilt inside.if u don't accept in my life time I'll be feeling this pain so I accepted to dance.when I'm dancing he began to misbehave ,I tried to escape from him,he didn't changed he was same person ,just acting smart by thinking this I thought to escape ,bt he catched me with iron hands )

( he is screaming I need u without u I can't live,abhi listened this and he came to him ,abhi catches his collar )

After ,listening to him ,I really got furious I began to smash him ,suddenly he stopped and said ,wt y r u smashing me .wt right do u have.hey mind ur tongue ,she is my wife .by listening to this word he catched pragya and began to say pragya hw can u do this to me,bt pragyas face is showing her unwillingness and her expressions are pleading me for help .I saw all this and began to beat him.


After beating him so badly .I just look back to pragya bt she is no where. I began to search her...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
continue soon...plz reveal pragya n dat mystery man relation in nxt episode itself...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Chapter 13
I called chasmish,hey chasmish, I saw her she was standing at corner of garden ,I asked chasmish let's go home ,her face is swollen with sorrowness ,she came my back and sat in the car ,while I was driving I continuously engroced in her eyes .her eyes are filled with tears ,bt they are strucked in the eyes they are sticked to her eyes.

Through the way ,see is silent finally we came home ,she skipped from there .abhi u should do something other wise she ll be like this ,bt wt to do.she is not at all speaking anything,wt to do abhi ,hw irritating of u abhi u don't know hw to cool a person .u be Na ,kk abhi enough of thinking ,lets see he was she and I should ask who is that person.


With this thoughts I began to search her everywhere .finally treasure hunt has completed .I found her she is seeing towards the sky .I called her hey ,chasmish .wt are u doing here.she was silent.I thought she need some privosy. Bt no if I'll leave her she ll become still more dumb .hey chasmish .she said ha.wt r u doing here .she said she was seeing the stars.I asked y .she said u know if we see falling stars.our desire will come true.for a moment I forgot the rest ,because this was frequently said by my mom .when I was a kid.


I suddenly snuggled her towards my heart.u know chasmish this was frequently said by mom.after my mom u was the one who said this to me.u resemble as my mom.chasmish u know abt my parents.my dad left all of us with marriage of other one .then my mom also left me in dark shades .I thought my mom also engaged with some one else .later my granny died all happened with in span of 5 yrs .I felt all alone .

Later that is after tanus incident ,I got a call from a lady ,she said beta ur mother is no more.can u pls come for rituals.first I thought not to go ,bt my conscience forced me to go .later the truth revealed my mom is not engaged with any one .that too she recorded in phone .when she was in hsptl she gave it to her neighbour.

I listened her open heart she said beta I know u very angry on me .bt listened to me once .do u remembered ur dad has talked to granny and went .what he said means if I be with u ,he will not give money .he said nw it is her wish whether to be or not ,by this he went.when he told like DAT I began to think .I can't earn the money for ur education and also for grannies medicine.so I thought to live u both.bt my mother hood didn't support me .dats y I came every weak to see u .after grannies death I searched u everywhere .bt u appeared as rock star .know iam very happy .DAT u don't want to depand on any one .I'm really sry .pls forgive ur mom...

After listening to this I snuggled my mom I felt guilt.DAT hw can I misunderstand my mom.bt to say this my mom is no more .bt nw I felt I have a person to share this .now my guilt my sorrow is becoming lighter .if u feel iam the person for u to share this feelings u may.

By this she began to melt and started to say he is suresh .my boy friend in CLG days .we loved each other .I enjoyed his company so I use to be with him for ever moment .later he began to blackmail me if u don't agree wt I said I'll keep this pictures in internet.those are morphed one .later some how I escaped from his iron claws .that's y if any one will corner us..she began to SOB
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
love your part 13 keep doing awesome work
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Chapter 14
Thats y if any one corner and we don't have support we will be very much affixed to depression later I felt hell ,that day when press has cornered u I felt I was in the same position .that day press was posing u many questions neither u don't have answer nor I have the answer ,I thought I'll be support for u if I do this bt I became burden for u .by this time am finished I took wrong side .she is very genuine in her life.she never thought to deceive me .when she said she is my burden I closed her mouth .no chasmish I was wrong ,u need not to be sorry at all.I am the one who should say it.

I removed my finger .pragya if u want to shout .or u want to slap ,do anything because I abused so many times for which ur nt liable at all.she closed my mouth .pls don't say like this .I can't see u like this .pls pls..,no chasmish I'm feeling guilt ,iam not all worthy for any relationship.pls u don't say like this .and she began to wipe my tears.this time ,minutes began to seconds ,hours began to seem as minutes. In her company my time began to decrease .

We settled down ,we began to see moon no no actually ,she began to see moon ,I began to see her ,when she was seeing the moon ,the happiness in her face ,the way she is expressing ,were very cute .wt she was talking I am not able to receive ,I'm continuously glancing her .suddenly she clapped in front of my eyes.I came into sense,she said wat MR :ROCKSTAR wt r u thinking deeply.I murmered about u.wt she asked ,I said nothing .we began to chat with each other.

Suddenly I slept .when I woke up I am on pragyas lap she is leaning on the head board ,we slept in the balcony itself,bt I didn't disturb pragya ,when she is sleeping she is very cute .I took her in my arms and placed her on my bed .I began to spread comfort on her.she shriveled herself ,whichever she does during sleep ,she will be cute.suddenly my mom phone snoozed .I glared at my phone angrily .

My manager ,sir u need to come soon actually we need to do promo ,as soon as possible ,sir pls come soon ,kk am coming ,I went leaving pragya there .sir ,though u don't like the model u need to work with her ,because we need to shoot promo by tomorrow itself as it is quiet necessary ,no other model is free by tommorow .

In my heart no ,hw can I do with tanu ,I can't do with her ,when she is coming my hear beat began beat tightly ,my blood began to boil,she came and said shall we do abhi .she began to smile sarcastically. I felt slapping her.I said to manager I need to make me up .let me go for vanity .

I sat and began to think,I pushed my self harder ,abhi only one programme pls do it after that u never ever see her face.in this train of equation ,I got solution I got call from pragya.I lifted her call.bt I felt don't trouble by saying all this .she asked where are u ,I searched for u every where.I said I'm at studio .ohh are u engaged in work .ha bt ur voice is low ,is everything fine...,I said yes and I went to location .I went near tanu. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
that is nice update why not abhi make his wife model for promo shoot with him if he do wana come tanu

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