Our KTLK - Kashmakash Chap 17 (pg 136) Updated

Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev
Too good...you made that boy Aayush's case very well...but aise cliffhanger ending kyoun chhod diya? You are worse than me.

More later, with your further episodes.
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Doc, if i have handled Aayush's case well, then the credit goes to a certain doctor from whom i took all the necessary information...😊

cliffhanger pe chodna aap hi se seekh rahi hoon...😉

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao
Suja...that was an incredibly painful read...I know it is the reality of life...but when it comes to children..it is heartbreaking..so...all I can say is ,even if Ayush is fictitiious, may he find his peace and joy in heaven!

sorry to make you go through it but i wanted Nidhi to come out of her own pain and return to her bubbly self very soon...and this seemed to be the fastest way to bring her out of the shell into which she went into when her mom passed away...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awesome update...

All human emotions of pain, helplessness, love, care, anger displayed in one day of KGH...👏The originality of this story makes it all the more interesting...n i look fwd to what more u'll be show casing!!!Nidhi's comment about the glasses being a new addition...🤣...wow...saw the glimpse of our carefree, bubbly Nidhi first time in this FF...part 1 had her all grieving...Eddie the elephant...wow...seems like you have heard this or have made it for your kids...looved the embroidery scene too much...n i am sure that feministic viewpoint of Dr. nidhi n Dr. Sanjjay's wife...will be totally loved by all female readers!!!👍🏼a toast to that!!Ofcourse, ashu-Nidhi convo was great...have no words to describe them!!!Thanks for the PM...update soon!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: turags

sorry to make you go through it but i wanted Nidhi to come out of her own pain and return to her bubbly self very soon...and this seemed to be the fastest way to bring her out of the shell into which she went into when her mom passed away...

Please do not apologize...what you write is your vision...I was not questioning that...I was only reacting to what I read...and for me the child and his fate took precedence over anything else...much like Mallika's child took precedence over anything and I found myself unable to digest Nidhi's questioning Ashutosh's wholehearted support to Mallika under the circumstances...!

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Suvika.

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Originally posted by: ruchshah
awesome update...
thank you
All human emotions of pain, helplessness, love, care, anger displayed in one day of KGH...👏The originality of this story makes it all the more interesting...n i look fwd to what more u'll be show casing!!!Nidhi's comment about the glasses being a new addition...🤣...wow...saw the glimpse of our carefree, bubbly Nidhi first time in this FF...part 1 had her all grieving...

thats why this chap has been brought so soon...i myself wanted to see our bubbly Nidhi back in full form...so from chap 3 on, fasten your seat belts!! she will be back with a BANG!
Eddie the elephant...wow...seems like you have heard this or have made it for your kids...
my kids fav story...no i didn't make it up...read it enough number of times to get it bi-hearted..😉
looved the embroidery scene too much...n i am sure that feministic viewpoint of Dr. nidhi n Dr. Sanjjay's wife...will be totally loved by all female readers!!!👍🏼a toast to that!!
😃
Ofcourse, ashu-Nidhi convo was great...have no words to describe them!!!
😃

Thanks for the PM...update soon!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: turags

dissection of story not required...😊

Eddie story is my younger one's fav...😃

i didn't want to be too obvious and on the face in that regard...he is not her only patient...i wanted that understood...

as for flashes of SK, yes, this role IS for him...remember? we planned to find a producer and make our own KTLK with the same star cast...😉

and finally, thank you. 🤗

I loved the story conveyed that Aayush was not her only responsibility and yet could sense that she was going out of her way.. Ashu noticing her too... The incidents were so believable that I could visualize the scene without wondering what.. how... it flowed so beautifully...

And haven't forgotten our deal.. but you managed to describe him such... ... the eyebrow... the crooked smile. there is no mistaking... awww...

need to catch up with some scenes and episodes... 😉 he is too cute...

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Suvika.

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I loved the story conveyed that Aayush was not her only responsibility and yet could sense that she was going out of her way.. Ashu noticing her too... The incidents were so believable that I could visualize the scene without wondering what.. how... it flowed so beautifully...

And haven't forgotten our deal.. but you managed to describe him such... ... the eyebrow... the crooked smile. there is no mistaking... awww...

need to catch up with some scenes and episodes... 😉 he is too cute...

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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beautifully written, and incredibly endearing.

an excellent read from start to finish.

a very original, and very fresh start to a beautiful love story.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

what a beautiful read ayush s story was so lovely in real life we see so much of this pain children have a way to touch our hearts good to read about nidhis compassion , and ashu (sk) was too good this luvstory is really going to touch our hearts ,waiting for more

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Posted: 13 years ago

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a great chapter sujatha ji👏👏

the part about aayush got me to be very emotional , could actually feel the scene happening and every emotion running through me...😭

u are taking the story forward with incredible brilliance,and freshness and very honestly the first two chapters have captured me entirely and made me a loyal to this story for the entire FF,It IS Actually that gripping⭐️

thank u for such a superb chapter👍🏼

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