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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cspcheziyan

Overwhelmed by ur feedbacks on my imaginary 1& imaginary episode 2posts. Thank you so much friends.

Well it's an another try: -
Ishwari niwas..
Everyone is sleeping blissfully in their room without any fears and worries as one MAN is there to stand as a IRON WALL to protect them.

But the MAN in the story is not sleeping but dictating orders in the phone to some poor soul.
Why poor soul? Then who- in the freezing cold of Delhi -at freaking 4 a. m noting down the boss's orders without any frown.

"Ok. Sir. Everything will be done on time. You don't worry Sir. ""

Thank you and sorry to disturb you at this time. Dev said in a guilty tone.

"Its ok sir. I can understand. And All the best for -today sir.

Oh thank you . It's much needed for me today.
He takes a deep sigh and cut the call.

Tina smiles thinking of his last words.

Tina???. Yes of course she is back. She was the right &left hand of Mr. DEVRATH DIXIT some years back. Not only secretary but she was a genuine soul who wished every good thing for her boss.

Dev was the "epitome of perfection" then. Tina witnessed his hard and earnest work to achieve the heights. Still she felt something was missing in his 'perfect'life.

At that time as an God sent Angel "Dr.sonakshi Bose " came into his life. From the first when he forcefully brought her as ishwari mam's nutrition-to till she became his soulmate -Tina knew everything happened in their love life.

Tina is the first one who knew dev's irrevocable love for sona even before he himself realized it. She was so happy for him and saw how happiest her boss was that time.

She was with him when the first break up happened.
She saw the worst side of his "world's best " boss then.
She prayed to God everyday -to somehow reduce the unbearable pain Dev was going through..

She saw her boss became a dead soul then. She somehow managed to get sonakshi to visit the office and witness his devasted state.Tina saw the same pain reflected in sona's eyes too.

And God heard her innocent pleas. . They got married. Tina was the "mosttt happiest" soul - that time.

As her sister needed her most at her delivery time- she went to Canada and couldn't attend Devakshi marriage . On returning after five months She got the shock of her life.

As Dev became a devastated- Nomad and an " entirely changed person" and Vicky as a CEO doing some illegal business -her inner self didn't allow her to work there. She resigned and joined in MNC and got settled with her sister.

But when life ceases to surprise you.
One fine day she got a call from Dr. Sonakshi Bose Dixit and everything fall in place in a beautiful way.

Now she and her husband got good post in ishwari communications and here at 4am she is thinking about her boss and smiling.

Her smile got widened when she thought about the nervousness in his boss voice when he was mentioning about today.. Hmmm so Dev Dixit's family mode on.. His strength as well as weakness is his family.

His ever young-ever adorable and ever cute wife sonakshi became her dearest friend now. Mrs. Dixit helped her to settle in Delhi-guided her in her delivery time-and always will be the first one -when she needs any help. And she and sona became inseparable friends in no time.

Her boss his correct. Sonakshi is THE most favorite topic to him. Whenever he speaks about her he has that "cute-shy-" smile on his face and will describe her as "amazing" always. And goes on elaborating what's that "amazing" mean. 😉 😳

Tina read in stories that true love never fails. That's cent percent correct in her boss life as their undying true love United them and now they are the "most contented -most blessed couple now.

Hmm long day.. Lot of work..let's start with a cup of coffee.. Tina murmuring these words moves towards her kitchen.

-first part ends-

Share your views pls. Coming back soon..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Agrata23

wow amazing dear..👏waiting for next part😊


Thank you. Will post it soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adi1913

Great episode👏

Waiting for the next chapter!


Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sjain

WOW Tina ..I simply loved her but she disappeared gradually sighh

Wonderful writing ..simple and interesting


Thank you so much. Ur words r encouraging
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gauri.0109

Woww... Tina is back, one of my fav characters in the show who disappeared midway...loved the story❤️



Thank you. Yes Tina is a well scripted beautiful character.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I always wanted to see Sona n Tina's bonding n they together making fun of Dev...teasing him 😆😆
Loved d fact that u brought back Tina. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

I know-i know it..
Sonakshi would have told Tina about last time.
I sensed her laugh while wishing me. Now a days Dev Dixit became the favorite pass time talks for this two ladies.. Ye Kharghosh bhi na..

What could I do? Shubh is just 1. 5 months old then. So fragile so soft as snow.We took him for vaccination. There I saw no ...heard only wailing sounds of all infants. The environment itself made me nervous. When our turn came I requested the other couple to go as I saw shubh blissfully smiling at me -clutching my fore finger and trying to nibble it.. And I didn't want to change the smile into a painful cry.

Then again our turn came. That time he was playing with his mamma's mangal sutra and trying to analyse the intricate designs in it..Oh how cute it was!! Who wanted to kill the beautiful scene with a painful needle insertion.So I skipped that turn too. 😆

My Kharghosh became an angry bird then. No other way to escape and we took him for getting the shot

my prince had such a look of betrayal combined with shock on his face when I handed him over to the nurse and then his mouth opened into an outright wail and all I could do was cry.

He wailed like I have never heard his wail before. He was completely mortified, afraid and obviously in pain. It was profoundly disturbing and I started to cry to, so much so that I could say nothing to console him. I just held him to me silently and cried all over him. I am supposed to be the grounded adult, but I became the hurt child too.

All I could do was cry with him. His mom was totally confused whom she should console first. Shubh cried for another fifteen minutes after it was over. It was truly traumatic for the both of us. Life is so cruel in such small ways.

Sonakshi dragged me to the house and seeing my state whole family started laughing.
After that experience, I decided that next time I will behave like a brave father. The day came at last. Dev Dixit it's time to prove.. . Dev pats himself and starts getting ready

Story Continues..


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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Wow beautiful thanks for writing this hope in future we get scene like this in show
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Beautiful 👏
Please update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Beautiful...I am loving this new born budding friendship...Tina and Sona should pair up and tease dev ...it would be really fun

PS thank you for the first part link...as usual it was beautiful😛

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