DevAkshi FS: Eternal Sunshine Of Spotless Mind- Part 3&4 on Pg 17 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Abt 1st chapter!

Wow! Nikki & Sona were best frends
And Sona got attracted to Dev by looking at his photo!
And Dev was insecure😲 abt Nikki...aww😳
So Dev has fallen for Sona too...but is unaware abt her being the same girl whom he hated to the core!😉
Waiting for the next chapter😃


Thankuu somuchh for the beautiful comment Sona baby...

Yes...he is unaware about she is the same girl...

U will get next part today...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
will update today😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: binuuu


I guess u were not here when I updated this story Sona babyyy😳
Then I guess u were not aware about my previous stories too...😳
Haha...m rude😲 seriously?😲😆
Okiee sona...i will accept ur request dear...

This is my os realisation of love






Yeah!
I wasn't there!
Naah!...I don't know abt any of ur write ups!
Haha..I was kidding Di😆
You are very sweet!😃
Ok will read both ur stories & comment😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
This is very interesting...
Dev hating Sona without knowing her and on the other hand Sona lives Nikki and Dev's bond and love Dev...

Dev beta apne ghar mein dhundo...vo mil jayegi😉

Please continue dear...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Oh yes please do , you should continue...doesn't matter how many read or not ...what matters is it is lovely story...you started 1st chapter and lot of us liked it ...so complete the work you started and am sure many more will like it ...

Never even think of discontinuing what you started with so much of interest :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona


Yeah!
I wasn't there!
Naah!...I don't know abt any of ur write ups!
Haha..I was kidding Di😆
You are very sweet!😃
Ok will read both ur stories & comment😃



I knew u were kidding me sona babyy😆
Will wait for ur review sona😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Sharica

This is very interesting...

Dev hating Sona without knowing her and on the other hand Sona lives Nikki and Dev's bond and love Dev...

Dev beta apne ghar mein dhundo...vo mil jayegi😉

Please continue dear...



Thankuu somuch for the beautiful comment😳

Yeah...he will get her from his own home..but he is searching her everywhere except in his house...

U will get an update today...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
shall update today😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Oh yes please do , you should continue...doesn't matter how many read or not ...what matters is it is lovely story...you started 1st chapter and lot of us liked it ...so complete the work you started and am sure many more will like it ...

Never even think of discontinuing what you started with so much of interest :)



Thankuu somuchh for ur encouraging words aswathy dii...
I hope I can give u a beautiful update ..
Okayy dii..i will continue this one...
Will update second part today...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hai friends,
M here with the second part of this story...I know I updated months back n I don't know u guys still remember this story or not...Those who r interested please read it n share ur views..criticisms r always welcome...

Here is the new banner of story..How is this??


PART-2

It was the final day of Sona's camp.. She came to Nikki's home to say good bye to all family members,she was sure that she will miss this wonderful family. Ishwari insisted her to go back after having dinner. Sona was bit sad about she never got a chance to meet Nikki's bhai..
Ishwari called Dev and asked him to come home early.. Since there was no work left for him that day, he thought to go evening itself. When he entered into the hall of ishwari niwas time became still for him, the scene infront of him made him root in the spot.. He couldn't believe his eyes, he blinked his eyes many times to make sure that what he seeing is real. There she is sitting, the girl who was invading his dreams not awaring of his eyes. He was searching her past seven days and she is sitting in his home minkling with his sister.. Finally he took the courage and slightly coughed, Nikki and Sona turned to the spot of the noise .. Nikki ran to her bhai to welcome him and hugged . Sona's happiness was visible on her face, she passed a smile to him and he returned back.

"Bhai,Meet my friend Sonakshi Bose and sona,this is my bhai Dev"

Sonakshi Bose,the name was very familiar to him. He know almost every details about her. It was Nikki's friend who invaded his dreams . He couldn't believe his ears, the girl whom he hated once for no reason is the girl who caught his eyes. He chuckled lightly.

" Bhai ,why are you smiling"

He frowned for a moment.

"Mai abhi aathi hun " By telling this he escaped into his room..

Dev ran to his room and sat on his bed with thud. Past 7 days, he was searching for this girl like a mad man. He examined all faces to see Sona. But how can he saw her, she was here only, in his own house. He felt like a stupid. He was deeply in love with that stranger girl , within past seven days he got all proofs. It was like love at first sight for him. Nikki's continous tantrums and sleepless nights made him realise what he is feeling for that stranger girl. Never in his wild dreams he thought that the stranger will be Nikki's best friend Sonakshi Bose. A fear gripped in his mind, How Nikki will react after knowing the truth. He was in complete dilemma.

'Now forget about Nikki Dev. First of all concentrate on Nikki's friend.. First you have to impress her and you have to make her fell in love with you.. ' His inner mind warned him.

He went downwards to have dinner with his family. Dev and Sona sat opposite to each other... They eyed each other, but they were not aware that they were looking at each other.

After the dinner when Sonakshi started to take her leave Ishwari told Dev to drop her. He was on cloud nine at that moment. Both Sona and Dev took leave from Dixit mansion. All were sad because that was the last day of Sona's camp and Sona will not come regularly there anymore. Within those seven days Sona made a special place in all Dixit's heart.

Dev and Sona were in car last 15 minutes. None of them uttered a single word. They waited other to talk. Sona wondered about her own behaviour, ever talkative Sona had nothing to talk. Suddenly she made him stop the car..

"Stopp...Mr.Dixit...please stop the car"

"What happened Ms.Bose,are you Okay" .He suddenly applied the break..

"No..no..I'm not at all okay..Look at there Mr.Dixit...How can you expect I will be okay..."

First Dev didn't got any idea about what she was talking..Then he noticed dhaba on the roadside..

"Don't tell me Ms.Bose that you want something from that Dhaba"

"Yes Mr.Dixit..You guessed right..I want pani puri"

"How can you eat that Ms.Bose.. You just had your dinner,moreover roadside food is not healthy...Let's just go"

"You are so meannn!! If you are not letting me to buy panipuri, then you can go back Mr.Dixit..I will go myself..."
By saying this Sona opened car door and started to walk towards that dhaba. By having no other options he followed her, afterall she is his responsibility and he can't let her go alone at this odd hour.
Sona ordered one plate of panipuri where dev didn't order anything.And also she bought two icecreams from nearby shop and carried all these to his car and placed on bonnet and asked him to follow her and sat on bonnet.

When she offered panipuri he refused to eat, but Sona is Sona, how can someone refuse to eat her favourite dish..When Dev opened his mouth to tell something,without wasting a single moment she put panipuri in his mouth. Dev had any other option than eating that peice.. When he tasted panipuri he realised the real taste of panipuri and started to eat from her plate. After that they had their ice cream which brought moustache on their faces..They made fun of each other. Their awkwardness was all forgotten and they were behaving like they were best of friends since past years.Both of them enjoyed each others company.

Soon they reached Bose house.Dev wanted to ask Sona's number,but he was not comfortable to ask her.. What will she think..For God's sake ask her number man..His heart warned him..Finally he decided to ask her..

"Mr.Dixit..If you don't mind Can I have your number"

Dev heard what he wanted to ask in the form of Sona's words. Without wasting a moment he gave his number to her and told her to message from her number.


Dev was lying on his bed while thinking about the turn of events happened in that day. Suddenly his phone beeped and he saw a whatsapp message from an unknown... When he opened the message his smile grew wide..
"Mr.Dixit..Sonakshi here"
He saved her number and he was grinning when he checked her DP, ..It was their selfie which they took while eating icecream where they had moustache on their faces...
"An unforgettable day with a crazy person like me...#night fun..#ice cream...#panipuri...lot of #masthi...looking forward" .. From her status he became sure about she likes him and she is looking forward for their friendship...

He replied to her and their chat continued till late hours.. That was just a start of their friendship.. But deep down Dev was sure about his feelings, she is not just a friend for him, he loves her... But will Sona fell in love with him...An important question to be answered..

That was just a starting of their friendship, they got to know each other through messages and calls. They tried to meet each other in weekends and they became important person in each other's life. Dev got a best friend in her, she became his pillar of strength.. He had no one to share his feeling till he met Sona, he was his family's strength but he had no one as his strength. But now he has someone to share his feelings, his thoughts. He started to live his life in a new way, he started to enjoy every phase of his life... Sona taught him to how to live happily and she gave a new definition for life for him.. He reached in a level where he couldn't think about a life without Sona.

Tocken number 101,Mrs.Ishwari Dixit...

He heard call for his mom's number and walked towards Dr.Sonakshi's Bose's room with his mom to meet her new doctor.


That's it guys...I know this one was very short n Next time I will try to give long one..very very sorry for the late update...This time I will try to give update ASAP...waiting for ur review...
Lots of love
Binuuu❤️







Edited by binuuu - 8 years ago

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