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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

which one is the next update di ?

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Raman,

how do i start with my comments????

iam speechless-i dont know how many times i have read this update on page 1 of your second thread -

fabulous, fantastic, super duper, awesome, excellent - words like these are not enough to describe this update

Luved aru's feelings for arjun's mom and DJ - truly they are splendid people - very supportive characters for the story indeed - can't believe that arjun has told his DJ about all his wrong-doings to aru - luved DJ and arjun's mom supporting aru - the kitchen scene was indeed very romantic - aru has better things to be done in arjun's bed room than in Kitchen - very true

"He was not only a man in love but a man on a mission" - LUVED THE SENTENCE - very true - arjun is a man on a mission - MISSION TO WIN BACK ARU -

luved aru's jealousy when she saw arjun with sarai - typical aru i should say -

luved arjun's anger when he heard aru was about to see samir the next night

i agree with arjun - what aru is doing to samir is wrong - poor samir - he will be heart broken i suppose

aru should not take this any further

FINALLY ARU has realised she is in luv with him. luved the last two paragraphs tooo much - now its time to know what arjun's reaction would be next - will he make aru confess to him - will he make aru forgive him and take their relationship to the next level??

cant wait for the next update - Luved your update to the core - thanks raman

you are an awesome writer

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Pratibha Sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

congo for a new thread...
n wow what an update...m sooo happie...finally arohi admitted that she's in love...in luv wid wim...wid her arjun...
so swttt...thnx 4d pm...continue soon...n ya ur d best raman...tc :)

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590813

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Hold his cake! Why did she need to hold this yummy drool worthy chocolate cake. Taking her finger she took off some icing, closing her eyes in joy at the first taste. "Oh my god!" "That is so good." she mumbled breaking off another piece. He won't notice, she thought as she took another small bite. Hearing the door open and close behind her, Arohi froze, another big piece in her mouth. Staring down at the half finished cake. How was she going to explain that? "Thanks." Arjun said coming up and grabbing the cake out of her hands. Arohi stared back at him with a guilty expression on her face. Waiting for Arjun to say something about the missing cake. But he didn't say a word. Instead he started talking about some scene he was working on and how it was so intense. All the while he'd shoved the cake towards her with the fork. Not even looking at her as he ate. Arohi waited and then picking up the plate, she finished offf the cake. When she noticed a sandwich appear on her plate, she ate that too. Taking a sip of his drink without even thinking, as he described a particularly suspenseful scene. "If done right it will be something Indian cinema has never tried before." he said looking up at Arohi as she finished off her cake. Leaning back in his chair he gave her a slow knowing smile. His arms folded across his chest. "How was the cake?" he asked with a straight face. Arohi gulped. "Delicious" she answered. "The sandwich?" "Yummy" "My drink." "Refreshing." she replied, suddenly trying not to laugh. Arjun watched her lips twitch. "You could have saved me a bite of cake." he said. "No, the camera adds 10 lbs." "You're giggling fans don't want to see a fat Arjun." "That sandwich you consumed alone with all the other food probably already added a couple of pounds." "Believe me, the last thing you need is cake." she said...

that part just hilarious i couldn't stop laughing she ate his cake hahahaah.that was funny dii.just loved it.

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nams1303

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

This is like amazing... I have already read it four times... very cute scenes of Arjuhi... Raman please update soon... and please swte first... dying to know what will happen next... actually dying for this part also... is it possible for you to stop all your work and keep writing for us... I know I am being too very demanding but what to do... just love ur writing.. and ur updates are the only thing that I wait for these days... so please please take pity on us and update soon...

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-sanju-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Reading ur FFs makes me feel good...i do dat wen m stressed out...u srsly write so well...lyk so freaking well...i want 2 read n read n keep reading...😃 amazing job ya raman...👏.👏.👏...
n yea...congrats on d new thread...u truly deserve all d praises...

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-MissMinnie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

First of all I want to congratulate you on you second thread. Wow what an update. I woke up in the morning and i saw ur update. I just couldnt help bu scream! Thanks alot. Loved this update. Arohi has started falling for Arjun again. It seems like his plan is working. The cake bit was hilarious i would have dne that aswell I can never resist a chocolate cake. Its my favourite! Awwe Arjuns ill bless Arohi for taking so much care of him. Awwe please update this or either SWTE soon. Dnt make us wait to long. Youve left them at an exciting place ;) cya soon and congrats once again!