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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh...i know how hard it is to do with mobile...i understand...so take your time :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww,u tk ur own tym dr. Bt m waitng 4 it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am rlly srry for the delay
Edited by karan.kritzkmh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2

Everyone was congratulating me
He was heading straight towards me just as i was about to say something (as he was infront of me) he walked away. How rude I thought. He went to Gauri and said its ook i knew you were the best they must have just annonced her the winner for no reason (he said that loud so Arohi could hear him.
Gauri: Arjun you are the best
Arjun: I know , just joking
Arohi thinking : havent i heard the name Arjun before. I actually noticed him in the colledge i thought he was hot but hes soo rude. Nobody treats Arohi Aluwaliya like that. He is a play boy I had been noticing him smiling at me and flirting with Gauri. Wat ever Aru so many boys are after you and you are thinking of this crazy man. But their is something in him which is different.
Gauri: Get ur brain straight he's mine k he's the Arjun Singhania so stop staring at him.
Arohi:( in her head) I was staring at him Gauri he's Arjun Singhania,
Gauri well yea
Arohi : OMG
Gauri: why wat happened
Arohi: Gauri plz go rite now my heads not alright ok
Gauri goes to Arjun and says shes mad
Arjun: I know
Arjun's Point of View
i wonder if she still has a crush on me, she looks way more hot now before she used to be that ok looking girl. Wow when i look at her i cant get my eyes of. Shes comming up to me how do i look is my hair alrite
Arohi: Dont get any wrong signals im not interested. ( he does look good Aru Remember what he did oh yeah i remember wat i did to.)
Arjun: So when did i say i am interested and it was u the one who had a crush on me
Arohi: I know but i regret it badly now
Arjun : In mind i wish u still had one
Arohi: Did you say anything
Arjun: no y did u hear anything.
Arohi: Ok i guess we are fair now i am going just before she went she gave those killing looks
Arjun: Arohi
Arohi : wat
Arjun: did u hear about the prom
Arohi: i kno wat prom is its not happeniing till November
Arjun: I know
Arohi: then why are u talking about it
Arjun: Because i wanted to ask u if u are free then
Arohi: (omg is he going to ask me out i would love to go with him) y are u askig me that
Arjun: Because maybe u could teach me some pick up lines on that girl
Arohi no i am not free
Arjun so u r not going to prom
Arohi: ahhh ( he spoiled my hope he wants to go n dance with shefali
Arjun : Hahaha Jealos
Arohi y would i be jealos i dont need to give n explanation bbye hate u monster
Arjun: ( Shes sweet i dont feel like it i hae to be honest but no one is as pretty as her Why i am i getting attracted wat ever Arjun dont care about her now its time to make her jealos im sure she would get jealos even if i danced with someone cuz i know she still has a place for me in her heart.

thnx for reading i guess this is the end of chapter 2


Edited by karan.kritzkmh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Childhood luv? Oh dats so sweet. I luvng it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
that was sweet one
arohi had crush on him
continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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childhood love! dats so cute!cant wait for the next update and he shud ask her out for prom!! then romit and arjun can both get the 2 prettiest gurls in collegee!:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cybergali

childhood love! dats so cute!cant wait for the next update and he shud ask her out for prom!! then romit and arjun can both get the 2 prettiest gurls in collegee!:)


i havent planned it yet i might add prom in but for now i dont want to cuz i want Arohi to go to prom with Arjun if he askes her rite now itll be too soon the next update might be the flashback
but surely if their is a prom they will have atleast one dance together.
thnx for the comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thankyou nxt one will be a flashback so itll be sweetier
thnx for the feedback
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Question
HEY GUYS can u give me a bit of an advice how do u want the flashback to be more of Jealosy or something else like fights between them. Also in the update do u want Arjun to find out Arohi likes him i think that would be good but it deepends in u guyz

IN ADVANCE
thnx for the advice
Edited by karan.kritzkmh - 14 years ago

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