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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Arjun: arjun is a very rich but an honest person. He is very respectful . he never had pride on his wealthyness n he is married to arohi

Arohi: arohi was a poor , bubbly n cheerful girl but now she is totally changed when she married to arjun . she is very responsible n caring person

Arjun n arohi both were though married but they never loved each other

Part1

(One month ago)

Arohi was sitting on her bed an as usual reading a book when her mom entered in. her mom just came n snatched the book from her hands n threw far away.

Arohi : maa ye aap kya kar rahe ho?(she got angry n got up from the bed)

Mom: ye tho mujhe phele hi kar dena chaiye tha?????????(her mom was really damm angry)_

Arohi: kya? Maa aap kya bol rahi ho mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha ? saaf ' saaf khenheye na?

Mom:arohi main tumhari shaadi karvana chahati hoon(her voice seemed very strict)

Arohi: maa maine aap se kitni baar kaha hain ki mujhe shaadi nahi karni fir aap meri baat samajti kyun nahi?

Mom: main tumhare baat nahi samajti tum meri baaat nahi samajti?

Arohi: maa mujhe abh shaadi nahi karni

Mom: abh shaadi nahi karni tho kab karni hai ? tumhari umar ke sab ladkiyoon ne shaadi bhi kar li haim

Arohi:baaki sab ladkiyoon ka main nahi janti? Mujhe abhi mere courier par concentrate karma hain not shaddi n all

Mom:courier? Kya karoge tumm courier banakar?

Arohi: maa main aap logo ko sab kuch dena chahati ho ho humare pas nahi hain

Maa main khud ke paero par khaada hona chahati hoon

Maa: vo sab kuch nahi jaanti tumhe shaadi karne ji hogi?

Arohi: maa plzzz aise mere sath mat karona plz maa

Maa: arohi phechele ek saal se hum tumhari shaadi ke liye tumhe tayaar kar rahe hain but u seem leat interested so abh humne tumhari shaadi zabardasti se karvayenge

Arohi: maa?

Maa: ha abh main aur tumhare papa aur nahi rukh sakte

Arohi: maa par?aap mere saath aise kyun kar rahi hoon?

Maa: kyunki tumhare pap ke pas ztaada time nahi hain , unhe cancer hain(as she said this a tear rolled down from her eyes)

Arohi: kya?(she was very shocked)

Maa: ha beta '.

Arohi was very upset n, sad . she was completely broken from inside , after listening this . she sat down on the ground hugging her knees n crying

Mom: beta tum apne aap ko samblah lena''''''aur uss baat par zarror sochna(her mom cudn't see her like this so she just walked out from there)

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On the other hand arjun's dad was convincing him

Dad: arjun tum samajte kyun nahi vo ladki tumhare liye perfect hain .

Arjun was totally ignoring him

Dad:arjun I m talking to u okk''''. Listen main abh kuch saalo ke liye out of India jaa raha hoon tabh tum yaha akele kya karoge? Arjun trust me vo bohut acchi aur sanakhari hain(he said this taking out arohi's photo)

Ye dekho uski photo

Arjun saw the photo , her innocent face , her beautiful eyes n her lovely smile

Arjun: okk dad main isse shaadi karne ke liye ttayar hoon but I really don't like her

Dad: arjun mujhe pura yakeen hain u will not have to regret on u r this decision

Arjun: lets see dad

(saying this he left from there

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The whole night arohi cried cursing herself n thinking her responsible of her father's illness while arjun just kept on thinking her , how was she? Wud she remain happy with me? they r gonna marry???????? There were lot of questions in his mind

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(present)

Arjun n arohi were buzy packing their bags to go to shimla for their honeymoon which arjun's dad had planned . tthey both loved shimla , they were not very excited to go there but were very clueless abt watz gonna happen there'''''''''.

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this was it

do tell me if u like then only i will continue it

do leave u r comments n criticism

do hit the like button if u like

love mitali 😃

part 2 - pg 9
part 3 - pg 15
part4- pg19
part5 - pg 23
part 6- pg 30
part 7- pg 33
part 8-pg 36
part 9-pg38
part 10-pg41
Edited by ...Mitali... - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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this was my first try to write an arjohi ff do tell me if u liked my efforts n also tell me if any changes r to be made okk?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it is great just give us some flashes about their wedding their first meeting their suhsgrsst so we can underctand where their stand is about this marriage
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mitale wow & my like button is not working 😔 & its awsome beaitful wow tu ff be lakhte sakte hai mujhe kabhi nahi pata tune 😈 haha btw its beautifull congrets for your first ff and dont werry now everone well press like buttun and comant here about your ff i love it 😉 and carry on
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was really nice, liked convo of both mother and daughter and father and son. you have left a bit of suspence at the end so cant wait to see what is in store next.
would have loved to see in your ff at the beggining there first meet and reactions, because from this chapter couldnt understand if they liked each other or evan had a convo together, but i can understand that you cant do everything in one little chappi.
ANYWAYS GREAT START AND PLZ DO CONTINUE AS I WOULD LOVE TO READ ON. PLZ PM ME IF YOU DO.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res 😉 love the CS will read l8r bit busy :-)

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phew !! mitali ur such an awesum writer...
srzly the story the CS the convo .. damn gud !!
update soon yaar !!
desperately waiting !! 😳
Edited by samhit_sanaya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's really good add me to Ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey mitali its very nice.....do continue n add me to ur pm list...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mitali plz pm me aswell
loved it
do continu3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its good, write next part soon and please add me in your PM list
Edited by rubal223 - 14 years ago

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