MY premeer story 2nd part soon to get married

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next part

PREM still holding HEER arm ask her to take blessing from BAUJI they both bow together.

BAUJI covered HEER with the duppata.. He said to PREM

BAUJI: PREM bring HEER home I am going to tell your mom that her HEER is coming home.

PREM: OK BAUJI I will bring her with me. (PREM walked to his car HEER followed her but nervous and shy he sat in open the locked of the front door she sat in PREM did not looked at her just waiting her to close the door. he reversed the car very fast HEER was bit frighten looked at him he did not pay any attention HEER got courage and said

HEER: PREM I want to talk to you ( still driving fast not looking at her she put her hand on his shoulder )Plz listen to don?t do this to me plz me .

He suddenly stops the car on the road side

PREM: yes now say is any thing left between us or... Pause

HEER: please .... PREM

PREM looked in her eyes put his finger on her lips quite. What you thought I did

Not know you love me .you took out my picture from my wallet I heard what you said

To Meher (now PREM will not stay with us) when you were lost in Darga I felt my soul is ????.. Paused then when you were drowned how scared I was? how I saved you ?you never thought of me when I left my parents I did not die but if you will go from my life I will die (HEER crying for the last time INSHA ALLAH ) I fought for you from the world and you?????

HEER: Plz PREM forgive me

PREM: last night when I was in your room I went to sleep there you thought I was asleep but I heard what you said (HEER😳😲 )

FLASH BACK

HEER thought PREM is asleep next to her bed .she just playing with his hairs and talking to him PREM how you know I want to see you stay with you I will go from your life tomorrow I will go for ever only your thought will be with me (she did stare him the whole night and he acted as if he is sleeping) I heard you saying that

HEER very nervous PREM put his hand in his pocket and gave her the kangan

PREM: wear this if mom comes to know she will be hurt

HEER : I don't deserved you PREM

PREM: ssssssssshhhhhh (he himself hold her hand and put the kangan on He notice the ring which she was Wearing)
PREM: HEER
HEER: HMM

PREMM: (naughty smile on his face) Why you did not take off this ring which I gave you? (WHEN NO ONE KNOWS BUT THE DRAMA SAY THAT PREM GAVE HER THAT) HEER with a shy smile woh mobile is ringing

PREM: OH BAUJI (still holding her hand staring at her talking to BAUJI)

OK I GOT you

HEER with a blank look PREM with a smile as if he got the whole world switch off the mobile.

GET READY HEER NOW WE WILL HAVE FUN 😊

To be cont.......... do add comments plz

Edited by pisces26 - 17 years ago

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tanyaaaa26 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow very nice heer now we will have fun ohhhh prem said this my shy prem i cant believe this heheheheh anyways very nice do cont soon i willbe waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

wow very nice heer now we will have fun ohhhh prem said this my shy prem i cant believe this heheheheh anyways very nice do cont soon i willbe waiting

he can 😳 when he can get angry he can say this too i think 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ohhh....prem said ...we'll have fun!!!......ahh.....we too will have fun.......well written.....waiting 4 next.......seems loads in store!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was awsome, when you find the time then do continue.
Zainab
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: thephworld

ohhh....prem said ...we'll have fun!!!......ahh.....we too will have fun.......well written.....waiting 4 next.......seems loads in store!!!

my dear his bauji planning wait and see 😳 dj they have to sort her out
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its toooo gud... loved the convo b/w them... and i magined all that prem is angry an heer is trying to talk but he is driving...and plz cont soooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnn.....

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I love it dear, you're doing a wonderful job.

I can't wait to see what Lalit has cooking at home - I'm sure DJ is going to be in for a taste of her own medicine!

I'm excited that Premeer will henceforth be happy.

Can't wait for the next part.

Love,
~Payal
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice Nadia..
i got soo emotinol...
very nice story!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i loved it
the part wer heer said tumhara phone was just awesome
n now i commented so part 3 better be cumin up soon

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