Prerish SS *His Promise, Her Realisation * Epilogue on Page 13 - Page 6

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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: dola2808

Hey! such a nice update. 😊👏

Read all three chapters and they all are simply superb. ❤️

Loving the fast updates. 👍🏼

Keep updating

Thank you so much🤗 I will surely update soon😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#52

Maine dekha hain unhe pal pal tutte huye. Ek ek hissa samet ke maine jora hain meri Prerna ko.


This line is so beautiful ❤️ The way he says that he has put together his own Prerna!


Amazing update Madhu! 🤗 Enjoyed reading a lot!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrsRishabhBajaj

Maine dekha hain unhe pal pal tutte huye. Ek ek hissa samet ke maine jora hain meri Prerna ko.


This line is so beautiful ❤️ The way he says that he has put together his own Prerna!


Amazing update Madhu! 🤗 Enjoyed reading a lot!

Thank you Manjiri❤️

Yes this line has my heart too😳

I am happy that you enjoyed reading it❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello Everyone. I am Madhusree. I am back with the 4th part of the story.❤️

All the converstions are in Italics.

This whole part has been typed in phone and there can be typo errors.

Happy Reading 🤗




Anurag smirked, thinking that at least now he can talk to Prerna without any interference from Bajaj.

The anchor of the party called each and every couple for a dance where partners will be shuffled.

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Rishabh and Prerna was discussing Business Plans against Basus when they heard anchor's call to join on the stage.

Prerna at once looked at Rishabh because she knew how these party dances were not at all liked by Rishabh, and she was right. The not again look on Rishabh's face was something to look at. Prerna started giggling but stopped at Rishabh's stare.

"Stop it please Prerna, you know na I hate these dramas." Rishabh said.

"I know Mr.Bajaj, but kya kar sakte hain. They are calling every couples and we are one so we have to go. Be a sport Rishabh, chaliye na." Prerna said, but she didn't realise that she had said his name for the first time in excitement. Rishabh was stunned, his name sounded as the beautiful chirping of birds. It was so soothing that he want to hear it for whole of his life.

When Prerna didn't get any response from him, turned and saw that he was looking at her very intensely.

"Mr. Bajaj?"

"Phirse kahiye,please." Rishabh said, almost pleading.

Prerna was clueless. "What?" She said.

"Jo apne kaha, abhi. Jaise apne bulaya mujhe, please ekbar aur."Rishabh pleaded again.

Prerna played the full scene in her mind and she remembered, Oh my god, she called him by his name in the excitement.

"Sorry, Mr.Baj..."

"Please Prerna, just one more time." Rishabh was a bit restless now.

Prerna closed her eyes, and opened and looked into his eyes and called, "Rishabh!."

She saw his eyes were almost teary now, he was overwhelmed, happy, feeling blessed and what not at the same time. She could feel what effect just her calling by his name had on him. She felt proud.

Here Rishabh's vocabulary just vanished from his memory. He couldn't form any sentence. He just looked at her, only her. No one in the world, nothing in the world mattered to him right at this moment. Prerna, his Prerna called him by his name. For last 8 years he have been waiting for this moment that a day like this will also come when Prerna will call him by his name, think about him a little, like him a little, will care for him a little. And he will live his eternity contently with that little love. And today as that moment appeared, he was knocking his door of vocabulary for a sentence but he couldn't open it. It was like his keys of vocabulary was lost, he was speechless.

"Rishabh, Rishabh" She tried to bring him back to reality.

"Huh" Rishabh finally got a hold on himself and said, "Prernaaaaa, Thank you... Thank you."

She could feel his true gratitude in his Thanks. She just nodded and said, "Chaliye."

Rishabh just clutched her hand and took her to the dance floor.

A romantic number started playing, the dance started from a close dance to a sensual one.

Meanwhile all the partners were shuffled but Rishabh and Prerna were so lost into each other that they didn't hear the change in song and didn't noticed the shuffling of partners. They just swayed and danced and drank into each other's sight throughout the dance. When the song stopped, they came back to reality and it struck them that they totally forgot the partner shuffle thing.

Rishabh looked at Prerna and found a beautiful blush which adorned her face, Prerna looked into his eyes and for the first time she felt Love. She was now sure that he loved her, is feeling love for her right at this moment and will love her for eternities to come.

Prerna excused herself a little on the excuse of going to washroom. She needed some alone time and space to think that did she also love him? Did she think of him much more than friend or not? Is he more than her strength and guide?

As she stood in front of the mirror of the washroom, her whole 8 years kept flashing in front of her eyes. How Rishabh stood by her in her most depressing times.

On the very first days of her in London she was nothing but a mess of emotions. The betrayal, loss of her child and everything created such havoc in her mind, that she had suicidal tendencies. She remembered how Rishabh and Kukki both day by day tried to bring her back to normal life. Today as she remember those days she thought, did she saw the same sadness of losing a child in the eyes of Rishabh? She was such a mess then, she didn't cared for such emotions then, but today she was feeling guilty, how Rishabh was also suffering and grieving for the loss of a child but still gave hope to her. There was no one for him, to give hope to bring him back to light. He had to gather his own strength and stand up to be the strength for her and Kukki. She was feeling miserable today, for 8 years he has turned the world upside down for her, but what she had done? Nothing, just nothing. She started sobbing loudly, "I am sorry Rishabh, very sorry. I love you Rishabh, I love you very much."

Today she decided to tell Rishabh how much his presence mattered to her, how his emotions mattered to her. Today she will definitely tell him everything she has on her mind.



Please don't forget to leave your likes and comments. Your reviews matters a lot to me.

Love,

Madhusree❤️

Edited by Ghosh.M. - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#55

Hey loved the part.... Very beautiful ... Finally Prerna realized Rishab's immense love for her and things he did for her and supported her when she was at her worst stay of minds and life. She understood her feelings towards him and so waiting the confession. Loved the part their conversations her calling by his name.. and the happiness he felt .. was beautifully described.. Please continue soon.. eager to read more... Thank you :) take care :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

OMG Prerna realized her love

Amazing update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very good going

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

Bajaj hates dances at the parties😆

She called him Rishabh for the first time

He is in bliss, no wonder he wanted to hear it again

Dance❤️

They forgot to shuffle the partner😎

I loved how she realized his love for her

I hope she confesses her feelings soon

Nice update Madhusree. Continue soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Hey loved the part.... Very beautiful ... Finally Prerna realized Rishab's immense love for her and things he did for her and supported her when she was at her worst stay of minds and life. She understood her feelings towards him and so waiting the confession. Loved the part their conversations her calling by his name.. and the happiness he felt .. was beautifully described.. Please continue soon.. eager to read more... Thank you :) take care :)

Thank you, Thank you so much you liked it😍😍😍 I will update soon 😊

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