Prerish ff;STAY part 10+epilogue updated page 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part1:

OMG!!! I LOVED the concept❤️

Prerna lashing out her feelings at him and he is clueless initially.

Her demand to never let her go, to make sure she stays here with him, with his family, as his family, as Mrs. Prerna Rishabh Bajaj

And he would make sure her every wish is fulfilled.

I absolutely loved these:


“Ok Mrs Bajaj if that’s what you want you’ll get it, every wish of yours is my command my love I’ll make sure you never escape you never think of leaving ill make sure you become Mrs Prerna Rishab Bajaj in a sense that you never think of being someone, anyone else.”He promised

You’ll stay I’ll make sure you stay.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2:

She is on a mission to make sure to change everything in their relationship & their dynamics.

She is taking an initiative to reach out to him and will make sure she succeeds this time in removing thee masks and the indifference he always shows.

Lovely update. Waiting for the next.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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PART 3

Mehra greeted his employer, and he was sure the man had not gone home the previous night which was very… unusual it had never happened no matter how busy he was,how important the work was, how big the problem or profit was he was always home in evening to have dinner with his daughter. Always

He had worked with Rishab Bajaj for 15 years, and he was sure It had something to do with her, it always had something to do with her. Prerna Sharma had created chaos in Rishab Bajaj’s ordered life even before she had stepped a foot in it.

Mehra had seen his employer conflicted for the first time in years when his quiet daughter had come running to him with a smile, laughing and with eyes filled with mirth. And he had been determined to find the woman who had evoked such reaction in his daughter, who had made her so happy.

And he had,though he had never said anything Mehra had disapproved of his employers ways,it was one thing to be cruel, to take over someone’s company and completely different to take away a woman’s choice, her dreams, her love.

But he also knew Mr Bajaj would not care, he never cared.

He had felt his heart go out for the young girl who had been forced to become a women, a mother and a wife of the man she despised from the bottom of her heart in just a matter of days. And Mehra had been sure that no one would survive that, the women would break he had been sure of it until… he had met her.

Prerna Bajaj had been broken but not bitter, she had suffered but refused to surrender and it had left him both astonished and hopeful and so he had prayed he had hoped against hope that she would not run that, she would not leave.

Rishab entered his home only to be greeted with silence which was an unpleasent surprise, usually he was welcomed home by the sight of his daughter creating some ruckus or the other and his wife either trying to pacify her or being apart of it.

“chandu Mrs Bajaj kaha hai” he asked as the head of staff got him a glass of water.

“mamm aur sneha bitya unki maa ke ghar gayi hai sir”

The pleased smile on the face of his head of staff at the mention of his wife did not go unnoticed by Rishab and he couldn’t help but chuckle at that.

During the initial days of his marriage before he had known her when she had been just sneha’s mother and nothing else he had wondered what was it about her that Anurag Basu was so determined to have her back even when he thought she betrayed him he had wanted her by his side. The man had been ready to destroy himself his family’s legacy if it meant prerna was with him. And it had intrigued him to no end

Why had his daughter been in love with that woman in the first 10 minutes of meeting her,why had the every member of his staff loved her why did Mehra unknowingly smile by the mere mention of her name.WHY?? he had often questioned himself.

And now he finally knew why, Prerna was magic there was no other word, no other way to describe it.She did something to you something that didn’t stop until she had gotten under your skin in a way that no amount of water, alcohol or acid would wash her away. she would get to your heart and once she did there was no way out you were forever trapped, forever tainted,forever hers.

“Papa” his daughter,s sudden cry of his name had bought him back from his thoughts as she ran towards him laughing.

“to din kaisa tha” he asked taking her in his arms

“Bohot acha nani ne mera favorite lunch banaya aur shivani massi mujhe park le kar gayi”his daughter had happily recounted him tales of her day.

And while he had listened to everything his daughter said his eyes had been trained to his wife as she had been laying dinner out like every other day, there had been no regret in her brown eyes no, shyness on her face no stiffness in her posture she looked completely at ease, completely at home.

And he wondered, he wondered if she actually meant what she said yesterday or had been just a moment of madness whatever it was it had changed something between them for the better or worse only time would tell

“Mrs Bajaj,I didn’t know you were going to meet ma today, how is she?” he had asked her later that night after sneha had gone to bed, in an attempt to start a conversation, in order to test the waters.

“It was a sudden idea sneha wanted to meet her nani ma so I took her home as we had nothing much to do, maa is fine and so is everyone else” she had replied easily.“Rishab could you please pass me my phone its right next to you”

He had stood frozen at his place, he wasn’t prepared for it, for a second he had thought he had miss heard her she had never said his name never, not once in the 7 months that they had been married.

“Rishab my phone” she had repeated herself and he had looked at her there was no hesitation in her words and she knew what she was doing.

He had slowly picked her phone and walked towards her with the precision of a predator he had expected her to walk back like she always did like everyone always did but it seemed like his wife was in no mood to back out in any way, in any sense because every step he had took her way had been countered by one she had took his way.

She was so close that he could smell her perfume, clear jasmine mixed with something earthy,something raw he couldn’t quiet recognize.

They were too close for her to back out now and it had nothing to do with their positions. Rishab would make sure she would not run. This was the time, this was the night either something would begin today or everything would end but there would be no more running, no more lies, no more sick, twisted games at least not for tonight.

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SO how was it? Expect the next update on Friday.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome 👏👏👏

The way you described Prerna is magical.... And this story's Prerna suits that description.... Rishabh's musings gave a lot of insight into their life till now....loved the way Prerna is handling the situation now.... No hint of re-thinking or backing down anytime..... And she caught him this time with the use of his name....eagerly waiting to see what's going to change now.... Hopefully it's for their best.... ❤

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Mehra knows his employer. He knows how is Bajaj and though he felt bad for Prerna he thought she may not survive this phase. But Prerna surprised him along with everyone else in Bajaj's life. She has made a place of respect in Bajaj's staff.

Sneha is happy with her parents and her extended family Sharmas.

Prerna is at home, she is at ease knowing her decision is made. He is still contemplating her words and her decision to test it. Let's see what is in store for us now.

Nice update, continue soon.

Edited by MR21 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update. I’m anticipating a some awesome fireworks. Prerna is such a strong person here and RB - gosh he’s such a darned lovable doofus.. he’s thinking he’s going to come out victorious in this confrontation but I’m guessing he’s going to be bamboozled by this Prerna and ultimately both are going to win together. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Fabulous story loved it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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In my story no komolika or basu baditrack took place.

PART 4

Prerna looked at the man who was her husband and one look at his eyes had told her something was going to happen tonight something that would either destroy he ror build them.

Her husband hid every emotion under the mask of indifference so well that she often wondered if he was made of stone but those eyes, the coal black diamond’s often gave him away at least to her.

The way he had looked at her tonight throughout the dinner and while she had been putting sneha to sleep had unraveled something inside her she was scared to acknowledge. He had looked at her like she was a puzzle he couldn’t wait to decode, a gift that needed to be unwrapped, like there was nothing else in the world to see and it had made her feel divine and powerful in a way she had never felt before.

When she had uttered his name it hadn’t tasted sweet on he rlips like she had expected it to instead it had tasted like the man himself, intoxicating and forbidding, like sin she had realized a second later.

“It’s a very dangerous game you are trying to play love, back off, run, escape before you destroy yourself.” he whispers against her ear, his voice dangerously low,lower than she had ever heard.

“I married you and survived 7 months, I know what I am getting into” she spoke determinedly taking his hand into hers.

“Stop before it’s too late Prerna” he warned half heartily

“Do you want me to?” she questioned.

Something changes in his eyes then, too many emotions all in conflict with each other. Looking into his eyes feels like seeing a hundred different worlds colliding, being destroyed and repaired all at once.

“No” he answers truthfully “The only time people have seen the real me is at the time I destroy them. You wouldn’t want to stay after that prerna, no one does, you’ll want to run but it would be too late.”

“Why do you think I can’t decide for myself, I’ll decide what I want to see, where I wan tto be” fury lacing her tone, and then it suddenly softened “I am telling you in no uncertain terms that I want to be here with my family, in my home with our daughter, I want to know the man I am married to, you know I don’t lie.” The fight leaving her body and gentleness replacing it.

“There is too much I can’t tell you… not yet at least” he argued.

“And I am willing to wait, I am willing to wait until you are ready to tell me but we need to be on the same page for now.” She said as she begins to move out of the room in order to give him some space.

“It’s the last time I am trying to warn you prerna you are signing up for blood and sin and hell, I won’t let you walk away. Ever he doesn’t say the last word.

Do you need me to write it down on paper I am going to sleep join me if you are done asking the same question a 100 times more she moves away muttering about idiotic men but all he hears are those words

“I am not leaving

You really are not love. Not now No tever

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The next morning Prerna woke up to both anticipation and hope she tried to get out of the bed only to stop at the sight of her husband.

The man was freaking handsome.

“Checking out people while the sleep, didn’t know you were one of those prerna” he says,his eyes still closed and that stupid devilish smirk on his face.

“Or pretend to sleep, to fool their innocent wife” she retorted, pouting.

“Innocent, yeah right” he said rolling his eyes “the woman who came stomping in my office and kissed me like hell must be someone else”

“You weren’t complaining then” she speaks mockingly trying to hide the blush that finds its way to her cheek.

“And I won’t complain now” he says as his lips come closer to hers only to be stopped by her hand and pushed back in bed.

“I haven’t even brushed my teeth.”

“You are really good at spoiling romance woman, but you can compensate for that.” He says sounding exasperated.

“How?”

“Have dinner with me tonight, sneha anyways spends Fridays with maa”

“Ok but only if you get me ice cream after that.”

“You’ve got yourself a deal Mrs Bajaj”

“Now let me go” she said

“I can’t”the playfulness evaporated from his eyes and was replaced by intensity his grip on her wrist tightened for a second before he finally released it and let her go.

Since it was Friday Prerna had no afternoon classes, assignments could wait and her daughter was at her maternal home enjoying all of her nani’s attention and affection so Prerna spent her afternoon thinking about her life she did that a lot these days.

No one, not even Mr Bajaj had understood why she had been so desperate to save Anurag. The favor anurag had done to her had always been a tangible weight on her heart he had saved her from a life of misery, from Naveen and she couldn’t help but be grateful to him.

Anurag had countless times reassured her that it was what he would have done for anyone but she had always felt indebted, like she owed him something and then she finally had a chance to pay him back to save his life, to get rid of that debt so her love mixed with guilt, rashness and gratefulness had made her do something that irrational, marry a complete stranger.

Anurag had been her first taste of love, the only man she had ever imagined a future with she had been enjoying the haze of first love when her world had come crashing down like a castle of cards.

Rishab Bajaj had entered it destroyed her rose hued dreams and pulled her into a reality so much harsher than it had ever been and she had hated him from the deepest part of her heart.

Anurad had been a small part of the bitterness and anger she had felt towards her marriage.It was not just about losing her love they had been about losing her choice,her chance to select the man she would be bound for the rest of her life and it had hurt like hell.

On some nights she felt like it would be less painful if someone stabbed her with a dagger and twisted it inside her but then there were days where she had been peaceful, content and …happy, with her daughter and her life.

Rishab Bajaj had been a terrible man but he had also redeemed himself by being a doting father, a dutiful son-in-law and a good husband.

The man had talked to her mother, convinced her family that she was not at fault, provided her endless support to study, respected and trusted her.Both of them had been at fault but he deserved a chance they deserved a chance.

She had suddenly stopped her musing and after looking at the wrist watch decided to get ready.

She had a date tonight

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Let me know your views. Next update Monday.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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So much information came out in this update.... So many questions were answered.... What happened in Prerna's life that she went to Rishabh's office that day.... What made her tell him that she'll not leave him....we got to know what all Rishabh did for Prerna till now....getting her family to accept them.... Making her go back to her studies..... Giving her a life of peace and stability.... And then you also explained Prerna's view on why she married Rishabh for Anurag.... I'm happy to see at least here Prerna isn't in blind love with Anurag... It's more of gratitude and attraction.... Loved the PreRish moments.....they are taking their relationship forward slowly, one step at a time.... Very nice.... Waiting to read more about their big Date ❤❤....Absolutely wonderful update 👏👏👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for the all important dinner...😃

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