PreRish SS : Indecent Proposal *Pg7 *Chap 2* 01/03 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

He wants to marry her ☺️


I like this Prerna


Please continue soon!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Intriguing start! 👏 loved how you portrayed Rishabh; mysterious, ruthless, fascinating and perfection at the same time.

But isn't the age different a bit too much? No offence , i'm loving your story! ❤️

Update sooon🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Yush001

Intriguing start! 👏 loved how you portrayed Rishabh; mysterious, ruthless, fascinating and perfection at the same time.

But isn't the age different a bit too much? No offence , i'm loving your story! ❤️

Update sooon🤗

None taken dear... thanks for reading. Hopefully I will be able to justify the difference.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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^ Stunning!

I'm in love with the dark tones and absolutely love how the focus rests upon his hands and the cigar. It oozes mysticism. ❤️

Coming to the story, I'm loving it. The introduction was fabulous and the POVs of both protagonists were damn good. Waiting for the next chapter.


P.S. Is RB 53?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MR21

Damn, This is an intense & intriguing update Keoli❤️

I expected the same behavior from Prerna. Barging into the office without a care. No wonder he is amused. He is in control and he knows it. His ruthless composure while meeting her for the first time officially is so damn good.

He was checking her out. And he asked her to call him Rishav❤️.

I love how he made sure that his receptionist knows about her and also how he manages just with gestures with his employees. First he questioned her relation with Basus and her character and he himself gave all the answers. He seriously did his research. He called her a product which he wants to buy. But it won't be the same, she is not a product and I hope she definitely make sure he understands it. So he proposed marriage, let's see her reaction to it.

I absolutely loved it. Can't wait to read the next part. Please do update soon.


Thanks so much for the motivation.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

oye EB are u planning to continue this or not ... ??
will start reading once u finish it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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such a great start, love your writing & especially your portrayal of RB so far. update soon please.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Wonderful as always di👌👌l

Please continue it soon

I will be following it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

oye EB are u planning to continue this or not ... ??
will start reading once u finish it


😂 i have started drafting... left it in the middle. Planning to post it tomorrow.

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