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Posted: 9 years ago
That was awsm..accha huya nandini aa gyi nhi toh kya ho jaata..
manik needs her sooo much but still keeps on pushing her away pta nhi kyun...and so much mystery..manik a mysterious man..thode thode mysteries reveal krna na jald..
and veer i like that guy..he is good and sweet and shivin is the best to play that role..awsm choice..
and manik is jealous well nandini can use it as her weapon but would she and if she does would it harm someone..
well thanks for the update loved reading it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arghhh..manik manik manik kyun nhi samjh rha k nandini hurt ho rhi hai coz voh use apni zindagi se door kr rha hai use mauka nhi de rha k voh use pyaar de use sambhale but yeh ladka samjhta hi nhi...
and god he is getting hell jealous and soha k zariye nandini ko jealous krne ki try kar rha hai hope he doesn't hurt nandini..
please manik accept it k tu uske bina nhi reh skta and you will stay with her forever you wo't push her away plzzz manik plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Manik jealosy..
Nandu veer jealousy..
Poor soha..
luvd it..

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Posted: 9 years ago
yr how come I didn't notice tht u already updated it
u knw I was so curious to read this chapter
it was good mawa...I liked the update
but why r u feeling low honey???
becoz of low response?? chill sweety...who loves ur story always reading n commenting n u knw na so many member stopped coming to this forum so maybe ur thinking the response is low but whoever comes read ur story n comment too
Don't be disheartened ok
love u :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update mawara... Seriously it was an awsm update.. Really loving jealous manik... Hope jaldi is gdhe ki nind khule aur dilwale apni dulhaniya ko le jae...
Nd this chapter was not at all a crap... Loved it...
Be happy nd keep updating...
God bless uh!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Mawara...Its the first time...I'm commenting...and it was really needed...!...Dear..you need to recognize your strength,capacity and capability...!.. You might feel low...you might consider that the response is low ..but the fact is YOU ARE ROCKING...and your stories are really entertaining ..!! I'm an amateurish writer...,I scribble...I tear pages after pages...its pettifogging... but at the end of the day...I know...I did something constructive...So are you...!!..We all need appreciation.. but the fact is...you write as you have the zeal for it..!.So please ignore the silent readers..and try to look at the brighter side ..your stories are bring read and loved!From tum mile to Awargi...its been a journey full of progress..Continue this chain of success...and celebrate the writer in you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter ...
Loved manik ...
Don't feel low ur a such a awesome writer.👏
Want to see manik and nandini together soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Delay credit goes to dua_arafat I hate you like I love you!

The below chapter has so many of the ups and downs! Please bear with it! Personally I am in love with this chapter! Reasons I don't know but feels like k myny dil say likha hai! And when I write something from heart I expect a dhaso response!

Inline comments are my fav!

Happy Reading!


PS: Read the title of the chapter carefully!


Chapter 8-Try Try again and See girl you finally succeeded! ;)


Nandini's POV..


I took deep breaths and tried to hold myself stronger..


But It was so difficult..


Manik...he ruined everything...he is ruining everything and will always ruin everything..


I don't regret that I loved...but yes I regret that I loved a wrong person..


"I loved a wrong person!!" I mumbled under my breath and the voice behind me made me jump..


"No you didn't!" Cabir said softly..


I looked at him and he had a small smile on his face..


I looked back and he sat beside me on the bench..


"You never loved a wrong person! Manik is not a wrong person!" Cabir started and I looked down a little guilty..


"Cabir! He wants me to hate him! When I do tou he acts weird! He pushes me away but doar jany bhi nahi deta! Main kya karoon! Kiun karta hai wo mj say itne nafrat!!" I cried in frustration and Cabir took me in a side hug..


"Wo nafrat nahi krta tum say! He doesn't hate you! He loves you so insanely that you have not a single percent idea! Usy nahi ata ya sab Nandini! He has a child heart! Chota sa zidi bacha hai wo! Pyar tou wo kar betha hai now he doesn't know how to handle it!" Cabir told me sweetly and I smiled sadly in between my tears. "You have to tame him!" He told me..


"Cabir! Myny apna ap jhuka diya tha us k samny! Apni self respect apni ego sab bhula kar usy apna aap dena chahti the but He was the one who left me broken! You still think that should go after him?" I complaint and Cabir was smiling..


"Yes!" He spoke cutely..


"Why?" I shouted..


"Because you love him!" He said in simple words..


"Yes! Fu*k! I do! I do love him!" I cried and Cabir held my hand..


"Don't leave him! Usy mat jany do! I request you! Wo bht bhatka hua hai! Usy kise bht pyaar karny waly ki zarorat hai! I beg you! Us sambhaal lo! Tum ny usy choda tou wo kise din mar jye ga!" Cabir was begging now...


He was an amazing friend...


"Why is he like this? You know his past!! You have to tell me!" This time I demanded and he looked away..


"Dekho na he is so jealous when he see you with Veer!" He bloody changed the topic..


I too sighed and chuckled..


"He burn the green lehenga!" I told Cabir and he laughed..


"Kaha na myny! He will never admit it! You can never love a wrong person Nandu! Never! Just the consequences in which you both are not favorable for him!" He was saying slowly. His gaze was following the orange butterfly who God knows came from where in such a freezing temperature...


"Look at this butterfly! She is looking lost! Shaid ghar ka rasta bhool gai hai! Manik bhi ise ki trha hai! All lost! The difference is! This butterfly has a house where she can go back but Manik! Us ka koi ghar nahi hai! Wo strong ni hai Nandini! He just needs a little push!" Cabir's voice was emotional which made me wonder that there must be some strong reason..


"What should I do?" I asked...in somewhat deciding tone..


"I have a plan but You have to promise me that you won't give up!" Cabir said anxiously holding to my hand tightly...


"I promise!" The words escaped my lips and I felt so good..


The restlessness was gone..


Because now a knew that he was my destination..


"Jealousy! It can bring out the best results!" Cabir told me nodding his head and I smiled evily..


I knew what I had to do..
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Everyone was in the lounge hall and were sipping to their night tea. While Veer and Soha were busy in clicking selfies everyone was watching them.


Manik wasn't there. He didn't come out the whole day..


I was worried but Cabir checked him and told me that Manik had his pill he was sleeping soundly.


He needed that sleep..


Everyone was laughing on something when I saw Manik coming down.


He was rolling the sleeves of his sweater shirt till elbows. His light stubble and perfect jawline what a combination it was, along with his messy hair. It seems he didn't brush them. He was perfection..


Nobody was even close to him. I was literally drooling over him when Navya nudged me..


"Stop striping him naked with your shameless eyes!" She whispered in my ear and my eyes widened for a second before I blushed like hell immediately tearing my gaze away from Manik who was now sitting beside Cabir's mother. She was kissing his forehead and messed his hair little more..


Cabir coughed at me and I remembered the plan..


I winked at him and masked an innocent face..


"Veer!" I called him and Manik's head snapped at me..


"Yeah!" He said cheerfully and came to me..


"Mery sath nahi lo gay selfie??" I asked sweetly and he smiled..


"Aray sure why not!!" He exclaimed and I slid closer to him..


"Let's pout!" I exclaimed and he chuckled nodding his head..


We both pouted and Manik was looking so angry. I deliberately posed close to Veer so that Manik was jealous like hell..


"Maa! Am hungry! Ask Doctor to serve me food!" Suddenly Manik's voice diverted me and Veer from our photo session.


"Nandini ko kiun keh raha hai? Me bolti hoon maid ko! Wo kar day ge!" Maa spoke in a confused tone and I looked back at CaVya they both nodded..


"It's ok Aunty! I am HIS Doctor na! Tou I know what to serve! He is still under medication!" I said with a fake smile and stressed on the word 'HIS'..


I got up and he too followed me leaving everyone confused and suspicious..


As soon as we entered the kitchen Manik grabbed my arm and I banged in his chest. Suddenly everything stopped and I fitted in his arms so perfectly..


My hands rested palm flat on his chest and my cheek on his heart. I closed my eyes and breathed in his scent..


He smelt exotic, seductive..


His cologne was addictive..


I once again rememberd that I loved him so much..


Suddenly the trance broke as he pushed me away and pinned me with the wall..


"Kya kar rhy ho!?" I spoke angrily and he gritted his teeth.


"Don't you dare to think kay mjy nazar nahi aa raha jo tum kar rahi ho! Stop acting smart! Ni tou!!" He growled like a angry lion and I stared in his eyes daringly..


"Ni tou kya?" I asked in the same tone and next second the pulled away the scarf which I had wrapped around my neck and threw it away..


I gasped audibly loud and before I could react he bent over my neck..


"Ni tou ya!" He mumbled over my skin and I panted in anticipation as his lips lingered over my neck. Suddenly he palmed my mouth and almost dug his teeth in my neck flesh causing me to scream in pain in his mouth.


HE WAS MARKING ME!!!


bas***d!!!


I wriggled in his grasp but he sucked to the bite again and again until I felt the pleasure overpowering..


"Manik!" I panted his name and he peppered light kisses on the same spot over and over again. The moment my legs gave out and he left me. I fell on the floor with a thud on my knees panting for my life and he too breathed heavily wiping his mouth with the back of his hand..


"Yo-you! You are a bas-bas***d!!" I shouted but not so loud..


"I know! But you just Stay away from Veer! Get it!?" He whisper yelled at me and I gritted my teeth.


"Fu*k you!" I murmured glaring at him and he picked my scarf in his hand..


"I will keep it!" He said with a slaying smile and walked out of the kitchen gracefully..


I rubbed my wrists because they had marks of his tight fingers..


I will kill you Manik! Aik baar bus hath aa jaoa!

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I stared at the my reflection in the mirror and took in my appearance..


The red lehenga was hugging me perfectly..


I should have wore something other...i know should have but I didn't had the courage..


I didn't had the courage to disobey Manik's wish..


If I will wear green and he will see me in that then the look in his eyes will be unbearable...


I can't afford it...


I let my hair open and applied the darkest shade of lipstick ever on my lips. Filling my eyes deeply with kohal I applied a little mascara.


The only Jewelry I wore was a star pendant which Navya had gifted me this afternoon..


The present was totally unexpected but she was adamant to give it to me and then strictly instructed me to wear it tonight.


I just laughed on her craziness and pulled her leg on the gift..


"You want me to twinkle like stars?" I had mocked her and she just shook her head..


"Yes! You are someone's star!" She had said those words very lowly but I heard them...


The hickey Manik gave me yesterday was faint now but was still visible. That moron took my scarf too. Whole day I hide the mark with dupatta. Now I have applied a little foundation over it to hide it more but surprisingly when I wore the pendant it directly settled where the hickey was.


Wow what a relief..


Thank you Navya!


Then giving myself a final glance in the mirror I walked out of my room and to my luck I bumped in Manik who was also coming out of his room struggling with the buttons of his black sherwani..


"Fu*k these buttons!" He was cursing when we bumped in each other. "Are you blind doctor!" He scolded me and I frowned..


"Buttons ka gusa mj pay mat nikalo!" I said angrily and stood on my toes to button his sherwani he tried to interrupt but I slapped his hand he rolled his eyeballs in frustration. "Stand still or else thapad lagaoan ge!" I scolded him when he was trying to act cranky..


"I told you not to fu*king babysit me!" He growled angrily but let me button for him..


"And I told you not to swear in front of me!" I told him casually and he was surprised on my calm attitude. He was now staring at me and I smiled on his obedience. "See it's done! Perfect as always!" I said to him with an assuring smile and he gulped down..


"You should be angry on me! Stop acting so calm!" He said in a cold tone and I chuckled..


Log kehty hain na kay jab ap kise ko paany ki thaan lety ho tou sab acha lagny lagta hai? The same happened to me after having a convo with Cabir..


I was a strong lady and I will make Manik my strength..


I slowly wrapped my arms around Manik's neck and he was looking so shocked somewhat funny..


"I am wearing red! Tareef ni karo gay?" I asked him innocently and raised my eyebrows at him. He just gulped down the lump. "Kitna bhago gay hmmm?" I asked huskily and traced my nail on his light stubble.


He suddenly pushed me and looked away.


"Stop it! Stop acting like we care for each other!" He said angrily and I just stared at him. "I don't want you near me!" He told me again but this time he wasn't looking in my eyes..


My chin wobbled as the tears stung my eyes but I pushed the urge away and walked in front him.


"Manik Malhotra! Tumhy mj say nafrat karni hai na? Mjy doar bhejna hai na?? Tum kaaro! Par mjy tou mery hisay ki muhabat karny say mat roko! Aj main tumhy challenge karti hoon! Meri muhabat main tumhri nafrat say ziada takat (strength) hai! Tum khud aoa gay mery pass! Tum mery paoan me giro gay! Maafi bhi mango gay aur janty ho ? Main tumhy maaf kar doon ge! Kiun kay mera zarf bht bara hai! Tumhri trha bilkul bhi Nahi! You will yourself tell me that you need me as much as I need you!" I kept speaking and speaking while his body tensed up like never before. "I mean my words Manik!" I said clicking my fingers in front of him and walked away..


Veer where was he...?


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"You called me Cinderella?" Veer came from behind and I turned to him!


"Yes! I need to tell you something! I need your help too!" I said softly and he smiled..


"Anything! Just say it!" He said with the same polite tone and I sighed..


I wasn't a fool to ignore what kind if feelings Veer was building up for me..


"I love someone else Veer! I don't love you!" I said to him lowly and his face fell in an instant. "Am so sorry Veer!" I said in a guilt filled tone and he immediately shook his head with a small smile on his face..


"It's okay! I love you that's my problem! But we can still be friends right? Ya Phir wo bhi nahi?" He asked trying to act cheerful and I was feeling so bad..


"Of course we are friends!" I said holding his hand and he smiled looking down..


The smile wasn't genuine...it was fake..


"So whose the lucky guy jis kay naseeb main tum i ho!" He asked after a pause and he was a good actor..


I smiled as Manik's face flashed in my head..


"You know him very well! It's Manik!" I broke the news and Veer's jaw dropped open..


"Don't tell me!!!" He exclaimed. "Now I got to know the reason of those frowns and glares he is giving me since the time I have come here!" He was laughing so hard and I too laughed with him..


But my laugh was sheepish..


"So what help do you need?" He asked after laughing his heart out and I whispered my plan in his ear..


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Manik's POV..


I sipped to my drink and listened to Cabir's Mamu's rant on business. Soon Cabir too joined and I gave him a helpless look to which he winked at me.


Then suddenly Veer too came..


"You know! Who is gonna perform tonight?" He was basically talking to Cabir but my attention too diverted at him..


"Who?" Cabir asked cheekily and I shrugged pouring the whole shot in my stomach..


"Doctor Nandini Murthy!" He exclaimed and I choked badly...


"Hain?" Cabir asked with a weird face...his famous 'hain' made Veer laugh and he nodded pointing towards the stage. My head too snapped at the stage and suddenly the lights were off. The only light was a spotlight and the music started when Nandini stood directly under it..


Ahhh what a beauty she was?


Red lehenga...she wore for me. This thing took my breath away..


How can someone be so sensitive? So understanding?


I regretted behaving like an ass in the kitchen so I bought her the star pendant and gave it to Navya so that she delivered it Nandini..


She was so pretty..


So much pretty..


Her words were so determined..


I feared... I feared to lose..


But the thing was I wasn't afraid of losing from her...


Nazar jo teri laagi main deewani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi


The song started and I literally gulped when she twirled around dancing on the stage..


Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahaani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani


She danced gracefully and I stared at her like a complete fool. The song lyrics were complimenting her situation very well.


Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi..
Kehte hain ye deewani mastani ho gayi


The words echoed in the hall and her eyes met me.


The pain, sadness I saw in her eyes shook me..


I couldn't hold the contact with her so I immediately looked down..


Mash'hoor mere ishq ki ye kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi..
Kehte hain ye deewani mastani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi..


Her dancing skills amazed me. What I don't like was Veer's gaze on her. I just wanted to punch his face so hard...


Arghhh...


Now Nandini walked down the stage and she was coming towards me. I showed her eyes as the nervousness overpowered me...


Zakham aisa tune lagaya
Deewani, deewani, deewani, deewani ho gayi


She reached us and looked in my eyes deeply when the lyrics reached my ears.


And all the time I gave her pain flashed in my head making me siffter with extreme guilt...


She was such a pure person and I was...


Marham aisa tune lagaya
Ruhaani, ruhaani, ruhaani, ruhaani ho gayi


She lip sing the lyrics and this time she was dead close to me. I couldn't resist but to touch her cheek..


Just a feather light touch..


I was scared of touching her harshly since my yesterday's act..


Main jab bhi tumhry pass ata hoon tumhy hurt he krta hoon Nandini...

Pehchaan mere ishq ki ab toh
Pehchaan mere ishq ki ab toh
Rawaani, rawaani, rawaani, rawaani ho gayi


The song lyrics were shaking me to the core and I wanted nothing but her.


I felt that it was just two of us..


She and Me..


Her hand cupped my cheek and I leaned in her touch. She smiled at me and I wanted to hold her as closr as possible..


Maybe I would have done but she backed off..


Ho.. mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Kehte hai yeh deewani, mastani ho gayi
Haan deewani, haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi


The song came to an end and she was twirling around like a crazy...round and round and round...


Suddenly the air around me suffocated and I felt like throwing up.


I almost run out of the hall and came out of the house to breath in fresh air..


"Am sorry!" I whispered almost choking because of emotions and suddenly the voice behind me froze everything for me..


"Apology accepted dear son!" SHE was here..


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Nandini's POV..


I high-fived with Cabir and Veer after ending the dance..


It definitely effected Manik very much and I just wish he accept his feelings tonight..


I was so determined but what was going on his mind I didn't know..


After I ended my performance he ran out..


I wondered where did he go..


His drink was left unfinished..


"I must say you were amazing!" Veer said patting my shoulder and I smiled at him. Next half of our plan was still left but where was Manik..


Half an hour passed but didn't come.


I became worried..


Excusing myself from Veer and Cabir I slowly walked out of the farmhouse in the corridor..


"Fu*k you!" I heard Manik's whiper-yell and followed the voice..


I saw two shadows. One was Manik and other was some lady..


Her face was in dark but I figured out that she was in her 40s! She wasn't young..


"Manik! You have to fac--!" Before she could complete the words I interrupted..


"Manik?" I called his name and his head snapped back at me..


He turned back to the lady..


"Fu*k off!" He roared at her and then rushed to me. He grabbed my arm and dragged me back..


"Who was she?" I asked hastily trying to look back..


"None of your fu*king business!" He spoke angrily..


"Manik tell me??" I shouted angrily wriggling out of his grasp.


"Listen Doctor!! Stop creating scene! Tumhry liye ya jan'na zaroori ni hai! Now shut up aur ander kise say kuch bola tou mj say bura koi ni ho ga!" He was growling and pushed me inside the main door ans he himself walked back to where he was standing earlier..


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Navya had told me that the saree was the most easy dress to wear in night.


Manik had gone to his room after the other half of the plan was done and it was to tell Manik about my and Veer's encounter from the night club..


Now I wondering did I do the right thing? What if the plan backfires??


And who was the lady??


My shoulders sagged in defeat and I started brushing my hair..


"Khulay baloon main achi lagti ho!" Manik's faint whisper from the hospital night echoed and felt a chill running down my spine..


All my dialogues and dramas were of no use..


"Kya faida hua haan? Bary dialogue maar rahi the k Manik tum maafi mango gay blah blah! Rubbish! You did nothing but made a fool out of yourself!" I scolded myself and angrily gripped my hair in the catcher.


The restlessness in me was not coming to a halt and I got up. Quietly I opened the door of my room and I stood there like fool staring at Manik's door..


He was inside..


Pata ni kya kar raha ho ga?


I made a sad face and turned to go back in my room when suddenly a loud chattering sound from Manik's room made me jump and worried..


"Sh!t! Manik!" I almost shouted worriedly knocking the door and it went open. I hastily walked in to see Manik lying on the recliner and his hand was bleeding. An alchohal bottle was broken on the floor and his eyes were closed...


"For Christ sake Manik!!! Stop hurting yourself!!" I screamed sitting on the floor to hold his hand and his eyes snapped at me. "Tumhy mj say nafrat karni hai na?? Karo! Tum chahty ho main tum say doar chali jaoan, chali jaoan ge but please!! Apny ap ko hurt mat karo! Choat tumhy lagti hai dard mjy hota hai!!" I was now crying staring at the wound and then look up to see him staring at me..


His eyes...


The thing in them shook me. Before I could say anything he got up and pulled me up in his arms..


I gasped looking at him...


His red burning eyes...


"Mani--!" Before I could complete he jerked the clipper off my hair and pushed me on his bed. I bounced on the soft mattress with hammering heart. He didn't give me a second to protest and came over me..

Nan-nandini!" He murmured huskily slurring a lot dipping his face deep in my neatly brushed hair while I was going all breathless and was almost fainted due to his proximity.


It was the first time he had took my name instead of calling doctor...


"Ha-haan?!" I asked breathlessly and he pushed me more under his weight in the soft fluffy mattress while I clutched the bedsheets tightly closing my eyes to the extreme level. As much as I could...


"I..I don't ha-hate y-you..!" He slurred again and pressed his lips against the side of my neck. I immediately tried sucking a sharp breath but find it difficult because he was almost lying on me.


"To-tou ph-phir?" I stammered intrigued and not much shocked by his confession...


"Bus py-pyaar nahi ka-kar sakta!" His voice held pain...extreme pain and I opened my eyes..


"Why?" I asked lowly and he raised his head to look at me. We Both stared in each others eyes and I desperately waited for his answer..


But he was the most difficult soul on the earth. As usual he didn't bother to answer me and changed the topic by saying...


"Kuch mangoon? Pehli aur aakhri baar!" He whispered weirdly caressing my hair as if I was made of glass and I unintentionally raised my palm to stroke his cheek..


Jaan mang lo...I thought..


"Anything!" I whispered back and his eyes shined...


Shined with happiness..


Ohhh what is it? Why his happiness is important for me?


Manik...! In What we get our self into!?


"A-aj ki ra-raat! Sirf meri ho jaoa!" He whispered seductively already gawking at my lips while his one hand pulled my saree pallu away revealing me to him. I immediately regretted wearing this stupid saree but there was no use to cry over split milk..


I was shocked...


Numb...


Scared...


What would I say to him?


If it had been someone else I would have punched him straight in nose.


But it was Manik! Manik Malhotra!


I can't even speak a single word sanely in front of him how would I say no to him..


Or maybe I too wanted the same?


But why he wants me not that nasty b!tch Soha?


This filled me with jealousy...


"Wh-why??" I demanded daringly as his hand went under my dress to reach the blouse strings. He looked at me droopily and I stared back..


Ahhh his eyes. It seemed he was stripping me naked through those shameless eyes...


"Because I want to forget the night in you!" He whispered back huskily and his one hand was froze on my zip while with other he rubbed my lips with his thumb expertly ruining my lipstick..


My breath was wild as ever..


This man effects me a lot...


Since the first day I met him. He knows his ways with me...

"Why?" Once again I demanded softly this time, his eyes look painful..


"Because I want to forget HER!" He spoke lowly and my eyes widened with shock...


Sadness overpowered me on the very thought of him being with me and thinking of someone else..


He wanted to use me to forget his ex...


He considers me a s**t?


I felt pathetic..


But before I could protest for anything I found my voice getting lost deep in my throat and my lips sealed with his rough demanding ones shutting me with authority...


He had plans for this night...


I tried pushing him but he was so strong..


Her?? Her?? Ex?? No!


Oh that lady??


He was kissing me so hungrily but I won't give in so easily..


Though I wanted him..


But not until he confesses his love for me..


Using full power I pushed him away. I got up and he tried holding me the strings of blouse came in his strong grip. He pulled them and they tear away..


It's enough!!!


I turned back in full anger and a fourth slap plastered on his face. He hissed audibly loud and before ge could do anything more I grabbed the jug from the bedside table. It was filled with water and I threw it at his face..


He roared and I grabbed his collars..


"Hosh main aoa!!" I shouted jerking him with full force and he gasped loudly..


He was panting. All his 'nasha' was over and he stared at me with wide eyes..


"Tell me what's your past??" I roared grabbing to his collars more and he looked away. "Yai! Yai karty ho tum hamesha! You always look away!!" I spoke sadly pushing him away and he was still staring down..


"Aik baar keh do! Aik baar keh do that you love me!" I pleaded at him but there was no change in his posture. "Aik baar keh do! Mjy tumhri kasam main sari dunya say lar loon ge tumhry liye! I won't let any worry any sadness to even come near you! Bus aik baar keh do!!" I pleaded again and he was on verge of giving me the silent treatment..


"Tum aj bhi kuch nahi bolo gay??" I asked in disbelief and again no response..


"Theek hai! Am going! And Is baar I am walking out to never come back!" I spoke crying like hell and adjusting my clothes I got up.


I was walking away and suddenly I felt a pull on the pallu..


My breath stopped and with my heart beating in my throat I turned to see Manik sitting on the floor holding to the cloth tightly..


"Nandini!" He whispered in a tone which shook me badly..


"Ruk jaoa!" He choked and I stood numb..


"Mat jaoa!" He this time cried..


"Main tumhry paoan me betha hoon!" He spoke again and I felt myself trembling..


"You once tried to give yourself to me and I! I rejected you! I hurt you! I insulted you! I...I did my worst to you!" He was saying and the tears were pooled around..


"But I never meant any of that!" He cried and slumped on the floor oj front of him..


"I don't hate you! But you will hate me when you will get to know about the real me!" He was crying like a baby..


"I can never hate you Manik!" I spoke crawling towards him and held his hands..


"I love you! I promise to understand you always! Tum mj pay bharosa tou karo please!!" I pleaded like anything and his head fell in my lap..


"Nandini!" He cried my name curling in a ball and I ran my fingers in his hair shushing him..


He looked to me like a baby who wanted someone to hold him tight..


"Mj say doar mat jaoa!" He cried..


"Don't give up on me!" He was begging and I held him so close..


"Tum bhi chalo jaoa ge tou main tantrums kise dikhaoan ga? Kisy gusa karoon ga??" His baby words were so heart wrenching and I cried with him..


"Aik tm he tou ho!" His crying was not coming to a halt and I let him cry..


"I promise to be with you! Kuch nahi poochon ge! Until you will yourself are ready to tell me!" I whispered soothingly in his ears and kneaded his hair. He purred like a kitten and I realized he liked me doing that. I ruffled his hair more and kissed his hair. His face was dug deep in my lap and I kept whispering sweet nothings in his ears..


"We have a long way to go Manik! Tum main hum!" I was now whispering my future plans with him and he turned. Now he was staring at my face.


My one hand was in his hair and other he was fisting over his chest..


He was just listening to me and I don't know what I was blabbering but he didn't interrupt.


When I got tired of speaking I stopped looking at him with a pout.


"Why aren't you saying anything?" I asked softly and he smiled..


A GENUINE SMILE!!!!!


His smile was so breathtaking..


He slowly got up and I too smiled at him. He bite his lower lip and I gave him a what expressions. He slowly leaned forward cupping to my right cheek and bent down to my left..


I anticipated and his lips pressed over my ear..


"Kuch kehna hai mjhy!" He whispered huskily in my ear and his free hand pushed the fabric off my shoulder as the strings were already torn so it was easy...


"K-kya?" I asked breathlessly and he licked my earlobe..


"Bool doon?" He demanded in my ear and I wanted to cry out due to his torture..


"Please!" I cried in frustration and Manik's hand had unhooked the clasp of the blouse..


"Then listen to it patiently!" He whispered again and I held to his shoulder tightly. "Doctor Nandini Murthy I Love-------!!!...


To Be Continued...


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Oh God hahaha! I can really see the frustrations on your faces!!! Haha! Aww! Yar Kya karoon I love to tease you al so sorry awww!
Kesa tha?? Please zaroor btana! Plz plz plz! I loved this chapter! Do you loved it? Then karo dil khool k comment kanjoos makhi choos larkiyoon!

Love, Mawara

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Posted: 9 years ago
"Tell me what's your past??" I roared grabbing to his collars more and he looked away. "Yai! Yai karty ho tum hamesha! You always look away!!" I spoke sadly pushing him away and he was still staring down..


"Aik baar keh do! Aik baar keh do that you love me!" I pleaded at him but there was no change in his posture. "Aik baar keh do! Mjy tumhri kasam main sari dunya say lar loon ge tumhry liye! I won't let any worry any sadness to even come near you! Bus aik baar keh do!!" I pleaded again and he was on verge of giving me the silent treatment..


"Tum aj bhi kuch nahi bolo gay??" I asked in disbelief and again no response..


"Theek hai! Am going! And Is baar I am walking out to never come back!" I spoke crying like hell and adjusting my clothes I got up.
Nandani she is soo soo correct we should'nt give up
On those whom we love !
I just loved this
Thnkyouu your this chpter helps me to solve my personal problems
Keep posting !
Keep smiling
And chapter was soo nicely penned !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cliffhanger...:(
Ok i wont say anything coz i knw the wait will b worth!
Chappy was awesome! Super duper good!
Manik & his tantrums!
& nandini's words just wowww!!
Good work!
Ab plz next chap mn dair na lgana! I wanna knw he loves-----?

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