BEHIND THE MASK : A DELUSION (Joint ff) [IMP NOTE Page 26], April 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21


Sorry i had to remove it and my new idea is on Page 12.
Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul



yeah

like i said before

this story is written by many no of writers and anyone can take participate, like an example

i write first chapter and u read it and then u got some idea what happening in story then u also have an idea what will happen in story and u also want something else other then happening inside the story then u can write 2nd part in which u will start from where i end and then u have to write what u want in story how u turn this story what twist u wanna take in this, u only have one chapter at one time because next time turn is others

u can come again when all writers turn is over
but there is not a order any one can come any time but not come continuously

in short
u have to write a chapter of this story from where previous writer left in end in your own words u cant share ur idea with others writers
and u can't force someone for write something they have there own choice

so now i think u understand because i can't help now if u didn't understand


ohh...!!!! yup I understand now I had just some confusion that's why I was asking the explanation... all the best all writers who are participate in this... :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: etuu


ohh...!!!! yup I understand now I had just some confusion that's why I was asking the explanation... all the best all writers who are participate in this... :D


Thanks a lot Etuu... well i have posted my idea too here... have a look...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_t

<font size="2">Ok my idea is just based on a situation and i can put it in a few words as of now...</font>


<font size="2">There was a heavy ambush going on in a village of Kashimir Valley, where a few terrorist were hiding in a building. The combat lasted for more than 48 hours and till now the agency were able to knock down 6 men out of 7 terrorist as per their information. Manik and Cabir were the officers that were leading the operation.</font>


<font size="2">In order to break inside the building, the force began to enter through back door and were swiftly making their move to knock the last man as per the information provided by the intelligence department. The minute Manik was about to enter the building suddenly a girl pushed him away and she shielded him, making him escape the gun shot. Her face was covered and Manik could only see her eyes. She quickly whispered in Manik's ear that there were 2 more terrorist inside. Before Manik could react she ran away from there.</font>


<font size="2">In the next 40 minutes the operation was declared successful and the officers made their way back to their base camp after raiding the entire crime scene. At night when Manik was sleeping he could hear that girl's voice echoing in his ear. Her intense hazel eyes peered through him and her fragrance lingered on his body. He opened his eyes with a jerk and sat on the bed. His body was burning with just the thought of that girl.</font>


<font size="2">He was wondering who was she and how would he find her. Where did she come from and why??? How was she aware of the number of terrorist inside. Was she one of them and it was a trap to astray the focus of the force to something else or did she actually wanted to help the force...Hadn't she pushed him away he would have been shot...</font>

<font size="2">However, the biggest question that occurred to him was WHY HIM???</font>



<font size="2">If you like the idea please do let me know and feedback is welcome.</font>Thanks a lot.


<font size="2">Take care.</font>


wow!!!!!!! seriously its amazingly awesome di... *_* uniqueness is every way... I can't wait for this story's next part...!!!!! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow ankita

your idea also amazing

i don't have any problem if we will write with your idea

i got some loophole from your story idea where i can easily plot my story part of robots also in this story so

i am cool with it


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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ankita_t

I liked ur liked ur idea...Its awesome...

@Mr_Rahul

SRK bhaiii idea toh acha hai but I didn't liked manik being manager of cricket team and his players to be roboat...Hum iski jagah kuch aur ni kar sakte...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul

wow ankita

your idea also amazing

i don't have any problem if we will write with your idea

i got some loophole from your story idea where i can easily plot my story part of robots also in this story so

i am cool with it




Hi Rahul,

Your idea can be turned into an interesting and thrilling science -fiction for sure...


Thanks for appreciating my idea. However, i have just narrated a scene as of now and yeah your story can be combined somehow with it.

However, let's wait for other writers and their feedback. I believe let's write something different this time and not that's been already explored in terms of story-telling.


Thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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arre pariii
i don't have any problem we can continue with ankitas idea

i know form where to fit my idea because this story is free to write so i can easily fit my idea in ankitas story


and yes if u have any idea then share we can continue from that also if that is amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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can we decide name of this story?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_t



Hi Rahul,

Your idea can be turned into an interesting and thrilling science -fiction for sure...


Thanks for appreciating my idea. However, i have just narrated a scene as of now and yeah your story can be combined somehow with it.

However, let's wait for other writers and their feedback. I believe let's write something different this time and not that's been already explored in terms of story-telling.


Thanks.



yeah thank u to too

i thinks others are sleeping
they got ready but didn't share there view
we can make prologue from your view
and then start with story and they ask them to continue
because
i have to ideas from two persons
i will share with u guys


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